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    Story written on March 6, 2005 by Shakennotstirred.
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    3. Season two has nothing to do with this gorgeous story you have been writing for us all these months. I know life gets busy, but you are just so good at this, I hope you are able to take more time for yourself to write……Ok, I really want you to take more time for us as well. I can’t help but be selfish when it comes to this story. Thanks!

    4. Brilliant as always, it doesnt matter how long you take to post I could never forget theis story. And for people like me who cant watch S2 I am intrigued but something tells me I would much prefer to read your story than watch the L word. Thanx. k xx

    5. I agree with the others in regards to S2…It is all well and good for TV but you have nurtured these characters with love for all of the months we have been without IC’s version that they belong to you and you have shared them with us! Thanks

    8. ahhh…my dear shaken….i am so glad you are back…no more hiding…i have missed you and your fic greatly…continue again today? maybe? Okay, please?

    9. So happy to see you post another chapter on this wonferful story. I’ve mssed you Olives! Please don’t make us wait so long before you write the next chapter. You know how i love the Chase….

    11. totally get the life getting in the way of the writing, but for you, there will be no forgiveness nor excuses accepted until you have repented. let’s say, i don’t know, a chapter a day for the next coupla months. seem fair? thanks as usual…

    14. I really liked the parallel storylines. Isn’t this the first time we’ve seen Mari on her own, besides when she was dancing at the club?
      I could have gone on reading for the rest of the evening!
      The interpolation of their ‘Umbrellas’ story was first rate! It’s one I hold dear to my heart.
      Thanks!

    16. I am in the same boat as Kat. I cannot watch season 2 yet, but as she said I am sure this story is better. Your fanfic is what keeps me coming back to this site, ever hopeful for an update from one of the “Greats”. Thanks, Olives!

    18. Shaken, I was going to PM you but couldn’t find you on the members list! I have spent the last 3 days reading this story right from the begining. I can’t tell you how much this story has moved me. The pain that both these woman have felt has been heart wrenching to read while the love so beautifully expressed that it fill you with joy. What you have written here is of such quality that it could most certainly be published. If it were I would definitely buy the book. I look forward to reading more.

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