Fan Fiction
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Story written on March 18, 2005 by Shakennotstirred.
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(79 votes, average: 4.05 out of 5)
Wow. What are they going to do now? You can’t leave it like this. Please continue. =)
I like the fast post, keep em coming. can’t wait to see what’s next
Wow… how lucky am I…I’m home sick today and I get to read two chapters of one of my favorite stories.Thanks for your time and sharing your talent
Thanks for your stories. As usual your Tina and Bette are endearing characters.
you got me to comment today. sooo DIGGIN’ this story.
MTS,
It was 1 AM last night, when I finish the first 15 chapters of your story. That is quite an accomplishment as my usual bedtime is 1030! I could not tear myself away. Today I’ve checked every half hour for Chapt 16. Finally, it appeared….Thank you. Post again soon. I am engrosed in this story..more that you will ever know.
Please pretty pretty please post soon.
please don’t leave us hanging like this!!!more please hurry!!!!!!!!!!!!
very nicely done….a tender kiss….love the way they are getting to know each other…this story is just wonderful….thanks
Great chapter don’t leave us hanging have the Dr call andd cancel and let Bette go to Tina’s
Lovely. Thanks for posting again. Some more tomorrow?
Tina dont run just go with the flow. Follow your desire.
Good chapter. I like how you’re letting the attraction between build.
Tina is totally falling for the Porter charm! Let the games begin! Please post again soon!
ok, love the story love your writing love to keep seeing posts Thank you so much
Olives…love how you write these two…can feel the passionate “push-pull”…excellent!
First kisses are so special. Love the sexual tension between them.
Plsssssssss. We need you to write back this is really good I can feel the LOVE of Bette and Tina Tank you Post more.
Lovely chapter!!More more more!! I’m so loving this fic!
The gentle ebb and flow of this lover’s dance is beautiful. Wonderfully tender, sweet and vulnerable. I love playing in the sand with them. Tina is so cute for feeling like a dork living with her mother…too cute.
I absolutely adore this story, it is so different from all the others. Please post again very soon
I love this story…keep the chapters coming!
Really enjoying this story and patiently waiting for more… Please!
I love this story, please post soon!
have missed your posts.
Still waiting…. What happens after the kiss?
I keep checking everyday! Please continue. I need more
Oh please post soon the next one, I just can’t wait anymore and I want to read more. This is wonderful story and I love it. Please post soon, thank you! Great chapter!
Nice,Olives very nice . Thanks for posting so soon. I’ll be checking in every day for more,so please don’t keep us waiting for to long…….
See…look at the number of times this has been viewed…WE really like the story! Post soon, please.
loving your pacing – it’s slow and sweet. great writing.