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Story written on April 26, 2005 by Shakennotstirred.
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That was beautiful and wonderful. I love this story! Thanks for the update.
just so good! there is nothing that you write that i dislike, so keep on writing!!!
I love me some Umbrella…thanks for the update!
oh my gosh!!!!! It’s Umbrella – I Must Read This Now! Hurray!
Aaaahhhhh… So excellent! Always a pleasure to read what you write. Thanks so very much for sharing!
Olives, all this sweetness is.killing.me :) Thanks for posting another chapter.
Geez Olives…just like always, I’m skipping along, and you come by and knock me off my feet with another incredible chapter. And, just like always, I am giddy to be on my back, looking up at the beautiful blue sky!
This is such a beuatiful story and it was worth the longgggggg wait. Does this mean we’ll get a chapter of The Chase soon as well?? :))))))
how wonderful, i loved meeting bette’s mom, i cannot wait for you to update again :)
All I can say is AMAZING
THAT WAS NICE
SO WHEN???
So glad to see this up date. That Bette mother is such a nice woman. and likes Tina so much. thanks
I love this story, thanx for updating,please carry on and post soon. real soon.
Do you know that this as the 1st story that attracted me to fanfic??… Ans i still go back to it, a lot actually!
YAY this story’s back! I love this story, thanks for the updat! Please post again soon!
In a word, fantastic! Great chapter and I am looking forward to your next post. Thank you!
God this so good. I love it. please don’t keep us waiting too long for the next chapter.
Awww…that was swell. It’s an oldie but a goodie.
Well, well, what do you know? Even the invincible Bette Porter blushes when mom is around! Who knew?
“Bette turned a little red as she felt Tina’s lips brush up against hers. “T, my mom.â€
FABULOUS, as always! This story was the one that motivated me to start my own fan fic (after a writer’s block that spanned 2 decades!) So thank you very much for this lovely piece of yourself….
How do you do it? I don’t care..cos I love them all. Umbrella, Chase, Sand..whatever you write..I will read. 5 stars for word
Oh, that was a good one Olives. Wow…it was great!
Olives, always a pleasure to read your work. Thanks.
Umbrella was the first fanfic story I ever read!!! It’s still one of my favorites. Please write another chapter soon!!!
wow I couldnt believe when I saw an update, but this is mean u cant just give us one we want moreeeeeeeeee the sooner the better. great job as always. more please
What canI say that hasn’t been said except Thanks. This was my first story and it is still my favorite.
Yay! I so enjoy ALL of your stories, please give us some more chapters from The Chase and Sand Games!!! Can’t wait!
Of all your wonderful fic.. I have a soft spot for Umbrella, it’s my favorite. It’s the heart and soul of their story, thank you for keeping it going. And you gotta love how a good umbrella can come in handy on a stormy night.
This was one of my first fanfics. It is so very dear to me.
Thanks for continuing.
you are an amazing writer..juz caught up with all the chapters of this story.absolutely superb!really lovin it!