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A beginning
“*****,” Shane stated as she surveyed the apartment.
“***** Al, what have you done to this place?” Tina asked in a similarly astonished tone.
“Guys don’t act like you’ve never seen this place messy before. I have a big date tonight remember? A big date which I can’t find a ***** thing to wear too.”
“C’mon Shane, you try and clean this place a little and I’ll get her clothes, then you can start on her hair.” Shane simply nodded and walked into the kitchen, while Tina started looking through the clothes in the hallway. And in the space of two hours
“Al you’re so going to get some tonight,” Shane said as she looked the blonde up and down. She was wearing a very simply, casual black dress, but one which highlighted all of her perfections.
“Shane’s right Al, you look amazing.”
“If I wasn’t so sure you were right I’d ask why you don’t tell me that everyday,”
“Ok Al, we’re going to go,” Tina said as she and Shane walked towards the door. “Ring us later to tell us how it went.”
An hour…
Half an hour…
Should be here right about now…
Half an hour late….
By the time Dana was an hour and a half late,
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that was great and i can’twait to read the rest of this one please post soon
loving this already! update soon!!
Please continue, I’m really enjoying this.
there’s no doubt – you have to continue. great story.
I could never get bored of Danish…Thanks for the post. *winks*
This looks like the beginning of a wonderful fic, please do continue!
okay bojangles….you’ve sucked me in a few times now. : ) you owe us some updates– but keep cranking out ideas– their fun!
Really loving the story, can’t wait to see what happens, post again soon.
oooh me like hope you post soon, its a great beginning!!
this was great, I hope we can find out what happens next
That was really good. I hope you do decide to continue. I really liked the fact that Alice ran after Dana. Whew – close call there! LOL.
Oh carry on please!
That was really great. Keep it going. I want to know where it leads