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A Chance Encounter – chapter 23
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«Yeah, of course I do, but..»
«Not but… Come here»
Tina turned around so that Bette could tie the blindfold around her eyes. «Is it too tight?», Bette asked.
Tina shook her head no. «This is so mysterious…», she giggled.
Pleased by her reaction, Bette started her car and pulled away. She drove up the Hollywood hills and glanced at Tina from time to time. «Everything OK?», she asked.
«So far so good… Are we there yet?».
«It won’t be long…». Bette made a last turn and then stopped the car. She went to open Tina’s door and helped her out. Bette removed the blindfold and Tina’s eyes fell on a blanket spread out in front of her, all covered with white rose petals. Candles had been placed around the sides of the blanket and soft music was coming from a small radio. They were standing on a bluff that provided a spectacular view of the city lights and the California Mountains.
Tina’s face registered a look of total disbelief. « This.. this is… amazing…», she muttered.
«I’m glad you like it baby …». Bette was getting very emotional watching Tina’s reaction. «There is more…». Bette opened her trunk and got a big picnic basket. Both women took off their shoes and sat down. «How did you know about this place?», Tina asked as Bette poured them a glass of wine.
«An artist I know lives up here and he showed me the spot about a week ago. This afternoon, I asked him to keep an eye on it until I drove you up here», Bette explained.
Tina took a sip of her wine. «When he showed it to me, I thought it was so breathtaking that I promised myself that I would take you here to celebrate our first year together…», Bette went on.
Tina’s eyes sparkled when she looked at Bette. Tina took her hand and kissed it. « I love you so much baby. You’re very emotional tonight…», she said as she noticed the tears in Bette’s beautiful brown eyes.
«I get like that when I think about us…»
Tina leaned closer and kissed her sweet lips. «I love that about you… You are such a sweetheart and I’m so lucky to have you baby»
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Your such a little romantic. That was beautiful and so Bette. Love how Bette didn’t get jealous of the co-worker, just made sure of how Tina handled it. Still lovin this story, don’t worry we’ll hang on for the rest. You know, the wedding, having a baby, etc. No drama though this is a feel good story.
A year has passed,many more to go. Love this Bette,not so Alpha in this one thanks
Great story ..please keep going for a bit more, like to see some of the major events such as wedding and baby and please no breakup :-) like this version of Bette and Tina
Great update, love this story. This was a very lovely chapter and romantic too. Like the way you are portraying both girls.
Wow milady, way to move a story along a whole year. I am so glad that Joe has come to his senses and I hope T’s dad has come around. I’m sure Tina would like for him to walk her down the isle. Let’ get these two married and on the honeymoon soon.
Beautiful!!!
YAAAAY they are going to get marrieeeed! :D Great chapter and PPS
Hi ML, Wonderful chapter, I just love to lie back and relax in th e glow of Bette and Tina’s love. Great to see Bette wanting to make an honest women of Tina. and I really enjoyed their celebration. Now it is on to the arrangements and the rest of their lives together. Thank you so much fro taking me along on this magical ride. Your Loyal Fan.
nicely done; loved the “can we do that” part!!!! T is so cute. B is so romantic.
Wow Bette was so romantic and that was beautiful and sweet. Now let see the wedding coming. Please post more, thanks!