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A Choice is Made Chapter 10
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Tina: I’m sorry I let you believe that. Perhaps you needed to leave. I wasn’t supporting you and wasn’t seeing things so clearly, it took your leaving for me to take a good look at myself and my actions. Getting you back in Angelica’s life and hopefully back in my life too motivated me to be a better person. New York is good for you. You are happy here, the job is going incredibly well and you’re building a life. If we get back to together we’ll work out the details. Right now Los Angeles holds too many bad memories for you and New York is filled with possibilities. I am happy that you are doing well here. I feel bad enough for having forced you away from Angelica; to know that you were unhappy on top of that would only make me sadder.
Bette: New York has been good for me and this little one seems to enjoy the visit so maybe she’ll be back to see me.
Tina: She’ll definitely be back for her first parade. Hey, do you think you’ll stay until New Year’s for your Christmas visit?
Bette: Probably, why?
Tina: Well the Parade of Roses is amazing. It takes some planning, but I could look to get tickets for that then we wouldn’t have to get there before dawn to scope out some space.
Bette: That could be fun, maybe Kit could join us for that. Let’s see how she does at Thanksgiving.
Tina: Alright, I’m ready to see some dollies.
Angelica: doll
Bette: Good job baby, doll.
Tina clears the table and Bette pushes the stroller as they head over to the American Girl Place just down the street.
Bette: I should probably change her as soon as we get there.
Tina: Well, we could all use a restroom break, so let’s make that our first stop at the store.
They stick to the plan and make the pit stop immediately upon entering the store. Angelica is holding up well, but will probably fall off to sleep in the next hour or so.
Tina: OK I have a confession. I had a Samantha doll as a kid. I loved that doll too and have no idea what happened to it.
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The road back is sometimes bumpy and twisted, hope our girls avoid the bumps. Great update, thanks
Amazing Chapter!!!! Thank you PPS
Your story is so well developed and detailed. I love that. Just got home from a wedding in Oregon and had 3 long chapters waiting for me. What a treat!
i loved this … and being from new york thx for the tour… (well now i live upstate ny)… one thing was missing… a real kiss goodbye…
That…was…an…absolutely…outstanding update!!! I totally feel like I was with them on their excursions around the city. With detail like that, you’ve got to be a “Native New Yorker” as the song says. This was so well written I have no more words for it…it was excellent!
Wonderful! A great week for B & T & A. I’m itching for them to get back together, but also glad they’re taking their time. I was a little taken aback at the start of the chapter when Tina kept referring to them getting back together. Did I miss that coming up in an earlier discussion between B&T? Really great story. PPS!
I know it’s too soon, but I wish they could have kissed at the airport! PPS
That was wonderful and glad they talk and trying to work thing out!
Wish they had kissed.
Great chapther. Loved it.
This was very good. I finally figured out what my problem is: I haven’t forgiven Tina for hurting Bette. However, Bette has, and I’m glad that she’s a more mature and loving person than me. Being with Tina will make her happy. Great chapter, loved all the details. PPS
Love how you are bringing them slowly back together. The distance and time have helped but it is good to see them not rush back into the relationship and actually work on communication. They are just relishing the time together and being wonderful mothers. Great writing and a wonderful story. Can’t wait for the update and how they handle this time apart.
A Brilliant update. Thank you! Waiting to see how they progress! :)
Lsho, finally got caught up with the chapters, 4 to read, and loved everyone of them.Loved the length of them and wish I had more. So happy they could talk and Tina could get out all that she had to say and happy that believed in her sincerity. They both still love each other but it will take time for Bette’s heart to heal from the kicking it got from Tina before Bette left. Glad they agreed to take it slowly and not jump into anything. However, I don’t know how long “slow” will last, they do tend to just forget about slow when the passion ignites and they accept that there is no one but the other for them. Maybe Helena and Kit can make them slow down and take it easy. Maybe!! These last chapters have been awesomely written and such pure joy to read. Thanks to you for loving “our girls” and for posting this wonderful story. I’m still dancing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lsho, finally got caught up with the chapters, 4 to read, and loved everyone of them.Loved the length of them and wish I had more. So happy they could talk and Tina could get out all that she had to say and happy that believed in her sincerity. They both still love each other but it will take time for Bette’s heart to heal from the kicking it got from Tina before Bette left. Glad they agreed to take it slowly and not jump into anything. However, I don’t know how long “slow” will last, they do tend to just forget about slow when the passion ignites and they accept that there is no one but the other for them. Maybe Helena and Kit can make them slow down and take it easy. Maybe!! These last chapters have been awesomely written and such pure joy to read. Thanks to you for loving “our girls” and for posting this wonderful story. I’m still dancing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fabulous fabulous and fabulous. don’t know what to say anymore , this is how it should be. You have captured exactely what is needed. No need to all this nosense IC’s drama. If I knew how to make a film your story is well wothy a success premiere. PPVS (Happy cry)
Man this is getting good but still so sad…..