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A Choice is Made Chapter 10
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The buzzer sounds signaling the Indian food delivery. The moms sit at the kitchen counter, keeping the food up high from Angelica who has gotten quite comfortable strolling around the apartment. She stops for the occasional taste of rice and Tina even let her try the plum sauce.
Bette: We should try to get out of here before 9 tomorrow. The ship leaves at 10am and we still need to get tickets. I’ll just drive us there and park for the day. We should put pants on the baby, I’m not sure how cool it will be on the ship.
Tina: I’m really looking forward to tomorrow. That cruise sounds fun for sun set as well. Hey, let me buy the tickets, you took care of lunch and dinner and the taxi today, thanks.
Bette: No problem, thanks for offering.
Tina: Bette, when we leave here on Sunday I know we’ll be in touch frequently so you can continue your relationship with Angelica? What about you and I? Can I leave here believing that we are trying again? Can I just call you to talk or check in?
Bette: Well of course I’ll keep in touch with Boo. You and I have so much in front of us there is no way we can make progress, without communicating. We have to keep talking Tina if we have any chance of making it again.
Tina: So we are trying? You know Alice will be on me when I get back. What should I tell the girls?
Bette: You tell them that things are looking up for us and we are concentrating on being good parents. We don’t need them in our business. Do you need tell Helena more than that? I probably will tell Kit that we are trying again, you need to have someone to talk too as well.
Tina: Helena’s been a good friend through all of this. It might help me to keep that line open. She tried to talk some sense into me before and I didn’t listen, this time I’ll do a better job of trusting her as my friend.
Bette: We all need someone Tina, I’m glad she’s been there for you. I have no idea where I’d be without Kit. It wasn’t right how Daddy went from her mother to mine, but he owned up to both of us and made sure we had a bond; I love him for that.
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The road back is sometimes bumpy and twisted, hope our girls avoid the bumps. Great update, thanks
Amazing Chapter!!!! Thank you PPS
Your story is so well developed and detailed. I love that. Just got home from a wedding in Oregon and had 3 long chapters waiting for me. What a treat!
i loved this … and being from new york thx for the tour… (well now i live upstate ny)… one thing was missing… a real kiss goodbye…
That…was…an…absolutely…outstanding update!!! I totally feel like I was with them on their excursions around the city. With detail like that, you’ve got to be a “Native New Yorker” as the song says. This was so well written I have no more words for it…it was excellent!
Wonderful! A great week for B & T & A. I’m itching for them to get back together, but also glad they’re taking their time. I was a little taken aback at the start of the chapter when Tina kept referring to them getting back together. Did I miss that coming up in an earlier discussion between B&T? Really great story. PPS!
I know it’s too soon, but I wish they could have kissed at the airport! PPS
That was wonderful and glad they talk and trying to work thing out!
Wish they had kissed.
Great chapther. Loved it.
This was very good. I finally figured out what my problem is: I haven’t forgiven Tina for hurting Bette. However, Bette has, and I’m glad that she’s a more mature and loving person than me. Being with Tina will make her happy. Great chapter, loved all the details. PPS
Love how you are bringing them slowly back together. The distance and time have helped but it is good to see them not rush back into the relationship and actually work on communication. They are just relishing the time together and being wonderful mothers. Great writing and a wonderful story. Can’t wait for the update and how they handle this time apart.
A Brilliant update. Thank you! Waiting to see how they progress! :)
Lsho, finally got caught up with the chapters, 4 to read, and loved everyone of them.Loved the length of them and wish I had more. So happy they could talk and Tina could get out all that she had to say and happy that believed in her sincerity. They both still love each other but it will take time for Bette’s heart to heal from the kicking it got from Tina before Bette left. Glad they agreed to take it slowly and not jump into anything. However, I don’t know how long “slow” will last, they do tend to just forget about slow when the passion ignites and they accept that there is no one but the other for them. Maybe Helena and Kit can make them slow down and take it easy. Maybe!! These last chapters have been awesomely written and such pure joy to read. Thanks to you for loving “our girls” and for posting this wonderful story. I’m still dancing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Lsho, finally got caught up with the chapters, 4 to read, and loved everyone of them.Loved the length of them and wish I had more. So happy they could talk and Tina could get out all that she had to say and happy that believed in her sincerity. They both still love each other but it will take time for Bette’s heart to heal from the kicking it got from Tina before Bette left. Glad they agreed to take it slowly and not jump into anything. However, I don’t know how long “slow” will last, they do tend to just forget about slow when the passion ignites and they accept that there is no one but the other for them. Maybe Helena and Kit can make them slow down and take it easy. Maybe!! These last chapters have been awesomely written and such pure joy to read. Thanks to you for loving “our girls” and for posting this wonderful story. I’m still dancing!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
fabulous fabulous and fabulous. don’t know what to say anymore , this is how it should be. You have captured exactely what is needed. No need to all this nosense IC’s drama. If I knew how to make a film your story is well wothy a success premiere. PPVS (Happy cry)
Man this is getting good but still so sad…..