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A Choice Is Made Chapter 33
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Sherwood walks away after shaking Jean’s hand.
Jean: He and I trained for Wall Street together. He stayed in the game, I took my money and ran.
Server: Good evening, my name is Sean and I’ll be your server this evening. I understand we have a big celebration tonight and we have a special beverage for you.
Sean pours sparkling cider for each of them and Bette makes a toast.
Bette: To my big sister and her husband to be may the happiness you feel tonight grow a thousand fold as you share your lives. I am happy for your both and will be as proud to call you my brother as am to call Kit my sister.
They sip and enjoy their soul food meal. Jean and Kit couldn’t stop smiling and kissing. Bette was delighted to see her sister this happy. She knew having David here tomorrow would be a big deal for her as well. Jean was excited to move the party to his friend’s reggae club so they hopped into a taxi at nearly 11pm on a Sunday to new Reggae club in Harlem: Reggae Bar.
Jean: I think we are on the guest list, Jean Bastille.
Bouncer: Yes, Christian has a VIP room set up for you too. I understand congratulations are in order.
Jean: Yes, this is my beautiful fiancée and her lovely sister.
Bouncer: Lovely, doesn’t do her justice.
Jean: Careful man, don’t you see that ring on her finger?
Bouncer: I didn’t mean to disrespect you, just admiring your amazing beauty. Trust me I see a lot of pretty girls come through here, but you are amazingly beautiful.
Bette: Thank you for the compliment, but tonight belongs to Jean and my sister.
Bouncer: Well, I’ll let your party begin.
They finally enter the club and are directed to their VIP room. Christian comes in with a waitress you has a celebratory glass for the each of the four of them.
Christian: So you finally come see me, you bring two lovely ladies with you. One you’ve locked down as your own and the other is already spoken for as well. Are you trying to give me a heart attack man.
Jean: What can I saw, I’m cursed with the company of two beautiful women tonight.
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This was a fantastic chapter. Keep it going, lwsho.
Yes!!! Happy lives for the Porter girls. I’m kind interested to see how Bette treats David. It’s a tough position to be in, because I’d imagine Bette was a big part of David’s life when he was little, and David would in many ways be a big reminder of Melvin, yet he was also an ass. I trust you to show us this conflict in Bette really well, because you’ve done a great job so far. Thanks, lwsho!
Great update. It’s about time Kit found some happiness. Lovely update. Thank you :)
Anxious to see the angst played out between Bette and David. He was indeed a chip off the old block of his grandfather during the adoption process. Thanks for the triple post today! PPS
Jeeze…I went to bed last night and missed the 3rd update. Never mind I read it tonight…awesome, awsome, awesome! I think that Bette and Kit should have a double wedding…either in Canada or one of the more liberated US states. I would also like to see Bette and David make up…seems like a good opportunity to me. Love this story Lwsho!
Wow, I can’t believe I finally caught up. I love this story. The details are wonderful. I feel like I’m part of the family. Thanks so much and please post soon!!!
:) loved it.
yeaaahhhhhhh I love happiness for everybody. Shane and Alice left lol. PPVS.
FAntastic chapter Lwsho, I’m continuing to love this story. You are doing such a marvelous job writing it and showing the love and feelings of our girls nd their family. Your description of the different landmarks, clubs and restaurants are to be envied. Keep writing and we’ll keep reading. Thanks for posting.
Hey I am loving the story so far. You have given such a good attention to detail its very nice to get to know so many things. I am happy for Tibette and can’t wait till Tina gets to be in NY full time. Hmm…about the David situation…till now, Bette has brought up at least twice about how he was an ass and insulting to her in the past but every time I haven’t seen Kit acknowledging it. It seems like she is ignoring it which upsets me. So I will wait to see how it goes in future. Thanks for the story. PPVS :)
great fun chapter and both Porters ‘happy and in-love’