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A crush, a meeting then love?? – Chapter 99
Chapter 99 Tina’s family has just arrived. Bette told them to get dressed, because the party has been moved to another location and they are picked up in half an hour. They quickly got dressed and meanwhile Kit, David, Maxine, Alice and Dana arrives. “Hey guys. Come in.” Bette shouts. They walk in. And “Where’s the decoration?” “Oh, we’ve moved the party over to another location.” Bette replies. “And where’s Tina?” “She’s there, making sure that everything is set up.” “Hmm.” She notices Dana smiling at Bette. She let it go for now, but she was going to find out what it was sooner or later. Then there’s another knock at the door. It’s Jessie, Stephanie and Matthew and William. 15 minutes later everyone has said hello to everyone, and then the doorbell rings. “The ride is here.” Bette says. She walks over to the door and opens, revealing two limo’s outside, ready to drive everyone over to the beach house. “Wow, limo’s?” “Yeah, I thought we could ride in style.” Bette says. “So, everyone get in. Tina’s family take that one and the rest take that one.” Bette says and points with her finger. “And you?” “I’m bringing food, so I’ll be right behind you. Dana, could you help me?” Bette asks. “Yeah, sure.” Dana says. “Okay, you guys, I’ll see you all soon.” Bette says and waves them off. Both she and Dana ran inside to change Bette. “God ,Alice is so noisy.” Bette says laughing a little. “Yeah, she can be, but I like her.” Dana says. Bette walks into the bedroom and takes out her suit. It’s a black suit, a Stella McCarthney suit. With a white shirt. Her shoes is black 4inch heals. “So, are we doing your hair?” Dana asks. “No, Tina likes it better down.” Bette says smiling. “Okay.” Dana says smiling. 12 minutes later they were finished, and they ran out. Bette handed Dana the keys to her car. “You drive. I’m starting to get nervous. And I need to think about what I’m going to say.” Bette says. CommentsLeave a ReplyYou must be logged in to post a comment. |


(36 votes, average: 4.14 out of 5)
Wow, not often that I get to be first! Well done! Hope Bette’s mom doesn’t give them too much grief.
Very nice. This story is way cool!!!!
OMG..i almost had an anxious attack when Shane made the announce..lol..i just have one word..BEAUTIFUL..love like this is priceless..whem 2 people meant to be is great..Alice will be so not happy..lol..now bring it on the honneymoon..cant wait for their first married night..thanks a lot for share your amazing gift with us :o)
That was perfect
Damn that was so beautiful and amaizng, love it. So happy for them and let party, cant wait to see where Bette and Tina go to their honeymoon. Post soon please, thanks!
Really beautiful! cant wait for next chapter :D
just gorgeous
i have no words to describe how beautiful that chapter was, Tinas dad was so cute im happy he finally underestood love have no sex just happen, now i have to wait biting my fingernails, lol, kidding, now the honeymoon, thanks for the update
hurray, the girls are married now, it was so cute…thanks
lovely just wish we had pictures to them dressed up oh well thanks for posting
BEAUTIFUL!
Iloved the vows part… Post thew honeymoon soon… lol!!
beautiful.. thank you for inviting us all… love your story…please continue
Lauren…that was a big beautiful moment. Wow..Tina’s dad gave her away — how sweet. Thanks for the update.
Lauren, that was beautiful. Wouldn’t we all love to have a wedding like that. Thanks…giving us the honeymoon in 100??
So glad to be a part of the wedding party, It was so beautiful Thanks
Aaahh! this has been a lovely story to read and alovely journey to follow! keep up the good work!
Ah, that was wonderful, Lauren, thank you so much for having given us these two beautiful chapters in such an unexpected quick time !
It’s simply a wonder… Everything ! From the shared breakfast at bed until the wedding’s kiss, not forgetting Shane’s announce, emotion surrounding everybody, tears of happiness (the most beautiful jewels in the world !), touching vows coming from the bottom of our lovebirds’ hearts…
It’s morning here and, god, what a marvellous, sweet way to begin a new week ! I’m more than ever melting, as I’m always so gifted to do (*wink*) and I’m already sighing after your next chapter to get an other piece of heaven !
Many thanks, dear Lauren, and have a great week ! ^_^
this is awesome…! :) great job!
Lauren you are doing a great job… Excellent chapter I loved it…. :-)Keep going I will be reading…
ok lauren. It’s about 12:08am in San Diego. i sit and have to ask myself…what the heck am I doing up….I have to get up at six. I’ve been doing this all week long…and do you know why?? Because I’m addicted to your story! I can’ tstop reading it….every spare moment of my time is on this site reading your story, but now I have to wait for chapters and that means that you have to write and post more often….deal? Love your story…it’s amazing, please hurry back to fanfic world with more. deticated reader/fan -betteishot
Absolutely beatiful Lauren….do keep going