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    A Deeper Song, Conclusion

    Story written on August 15, 2007 by kelika.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=66568
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    A Deeper Song.

     

                “I’m listening Babe.” Tina urged her on the emotion thick in her voice.

     

                “‘If in the twilight of memory we should meet once more.  We shall talk again together you and I, and you shall sing to me a deeper song.’  You are my deeper song Tina.”  Tears had gathered in the hazel eyes and Bette looked into their depths and saw love. 

     

                ‘I seem to have loved you in numberless forms,

                numberless times,

                in life after life, in age after age forever.

     

                My spell-bound heart has made and re-made the necklace of songs

                that you take as a gift, wear round your neck in your many forms

                in life after life, in age after age forever.

     

                Whenever I hear old chronicles of love, its age old pain,

                Its ancient tale of being apart or together,

                As I stare on and on into the past, in the end you emerge

     

                Clad in the light of a pole-star piercing the darkness of time:

                You become an image of what is remembered forever.

     

                You and I have floated here on the stream that springs from the fount

                At the heart of time love of one for another.

     

                We have played alongside millions of lovers, shared in the same

                Shy sweetness of meeting, the same distressful tears of farewell-

                Old love, but in shapes that renew and renew forever.

     

                She paused and the tears flowed quietly down the blonde’s face. She reached out to brush them away and Tina caught her hand and kissed the palm then held it tenderly to her face.

     

                Today it is heaped at your feet, it has found its end in you,

                The love of all man’s days both past and forever:

                Universal joy, universal sorrow, universal life,

                The memories of all loves merging with this one love of ours-

                And the songs of every poet past and forever.’

     

                Tina felt every word in her soul. She flushed and came right there. Bette’s eyes widened in surprise then she smiled and took Tina’s breath away again.  The whole assembly was in tears.  They were very much aware that they had witnessed a moment of pure love. Both brides’ shoulders relaxed and there was a peace that emanated from them touching them all.

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    5. what a fitting ending to such a tragic start. You had us all spellbound from the first word. So many emotions on this ride….and I can only say…Thankyou, thankyou…

    7. wow, K, you posted so many so quickly that I couldn’t keep up! LOL. Thanks so much for taking the time to share your B&T tale with us. I really enjoyed it. i hope you return with another cause it won’t be the same without your updates.

    8. Thank you for such a wonderful story. Your writing absolutely amazes me and I thoroughly savor every word. I must say you had me cracking up with the church scene… “This is a church for God’s sake.” I eagerly await your next tale!

    9. Thank you for the wedding. This was such a great story, I am truely going to miss it. You are such a great writer. I hope you will grace us with your skills again soon. Thank you!

    10. Bravo K! Once again you have done it. Took my breath away with this beautiful masterpiece of true love :) Please keep writing such beautiful heart-warming stories of true love as they make one’s heart sing. p.s the mention of Rabindranath Tagore brought a smile to my face. He was an exceptional scholar, poet and reformer. Today its our independence day too :)

    12. Ahhhh…deep sigh. I have truly enjoyed every chapter of this story. And, now that you are done, and even though I just read every chapter you have posted on this site…I am going to go back and do it again, from start to finish! Thank you for sharing your time, your imagination, and your gift for relaying that imagination to us with words.

    14. Thank you so much K. That was a wondeful and loving story. OMG, you made me cry. You are an amazing writer. I so hope we get more stories from you again Thanks

    15. ashtuck……….. Great story, so enjoyable. I was sorry to see it end. I liked that it was a little edgy and the characters spoke w/a little bite not wimpy. PPS.

    16. It really warms my heart to get such deep and thoughtful comments. You readers and commenters make my day. I had not planned a wedding in this tale but I’m glad you liked it. See your nudging works. I think I have written myself out. I look forward to reading the great writers on this site. Ciao, and thank you all.

    18. Wow! I want what they have, of course wiht out all the drama, but then again would either recognize how precious it was. Sorry to see this story come to an end, but am hopeful that you will provide more.

    19. Wow. From start to finish, this was a wonderful story. I am a Rosanna fan and could not believe you bumped her off. Then, I did not think I could believe a B&T reunion under such circumstnces and so quickly. Yet you convinced me. I was completely caught up. Selfishly, I am sorry to hear that you are storied-out, but I’m glad that you had this story to tell and to share. Thank you.

    27. This story was wonderful and beautifully written. You did their love much justice and let everyone know that true love will not be erased, no matter what comes. Thank you again for such a beautiful love story. Please grace us again with your words.

    30. Wow what an amazing connection and even more amazing way you brought it to life for all of us to read. I love this story from its first words. I seems so balanced coming full circle. If you think of all the loves and friends we have in our life I like to believe they are just leaves on the same branch from the tree of life. We just rearrange the leave but we are always close on the branch together. Thanks for this great story.

    32. wowee gf look at all the accolades & all deserved!!! I loved the wedding, the ‘she took her with words’, & “Jesus, this is a church for christ’s sake “(I could hear Helena & see that beautiful mouth); I could visualise them all. It was great collaborating with you, u r a genius & we learnt so much about one another especially our similar life paths…interesting serenedipitous!!! (I probably spelt that wrong) but u know what I meant. I hope u r not all written out, because I hang for your writing so anytime u wanna post me a chapter of a new story, I’m on…just becuz I enjoy your writing. Arohanui.

    33. wowee gf look at all the accolades & all deserved!!! I loved the wedding, the ‘she took her with words’, & “Jesus, this is a church for christ’s sake “(I could hear Helena & see that beautiful mouth); I could visualise them all. It was great collaborating with you, u r a genius & we learnt so much about one another especially our similar life paths…interesting serenedipitous!!! (I probably spelt that wrong) but u know what I meant. I hope u r not all written out, because I hang for your writing so anytime u wanna post me a chapter of a new story, I’m on…just becuz I enjoy your writing. Arohanui.

    34. wowee gf look at all the accolades & all deserved!!! I loved the wedding, the ‘she took her with words’, & “Jesus, this is a church for christ’s sake “(I could hear Helena & see that beautiful mouth); I could visualise them all. It was great collaborating with you, u r a genius & we learnt so much about one another especially our similar life paths…interesting serenedipitous!!! (I probably spelt that wrong) but u know what I meant. I hope u r not all written out, because I hang for your writing so anytime u wanna post me a chapter of a new story, I’m on…just becuz I enjoy your writing. Arohanui.

    38. I would like to echo the comments of many here and say that this was truly a wonderful and romantic story. And as a avid Bette and Tina fan great to read. If only showtime would do the same ah well that’s life.Thanks for sharing your writing style and story and I look forward to your next one.Your Fanfiction fan for life…

    40. Hey Kelika, What was truly romantic and everything that Bette and Tina should be. This gals really do belong together. Thank you for taking me on this eventful and magical ride. Tina and Bette have faced many difficulties but now they are meeting them head on and most importantly together. I so wish this was the TV show. Please come back and write more fantastic fan fictions. Many thanks from Your Loyal Fan.

    42. WOW K, I loved the conclusion, just got back a few hrs ago from my vacation and had to read this before I passed out on the bed,,,LOL,,thank you for a lovely story/

    43. This was one of the most passionate romantic B&T pairings I have ever read. It was full of emotion and drama I could not stop reading. It was a great ride even though I didn’t want it to end it did but at a great time. I look forward to reading more of your work in the future,this was an absolutely beautiful story many thanks for entertaining us all.

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