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A Deeper Song, post 16
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Fran and Gina greeted Bette with kisses exclaiming over her advanced pregnancy. Less enthusiastically Kay and Theresa cordially greeted her. Jasmine still appeared to have a crush on her and shyly said ‘Hello’ while Katie whom she had known since her birth gave her the typical teen ‘Hey, Ms. Montclair’.
Although Shane and Bette were invited to the picnic they politely declined. “Thank you but we’re meeting friends soon” Shane responded for both of them.
“Mama Can I stay over with Stella?” Angie asked.
“If it’s alright with her parents Ange I see no reason why not” Bette replied. Laughing at Angie’s quick uptake of the opportunity.
Fran and Gina answered. “Of course we’d be delighted to have her.”
“Ok gang let’s grab that picnic table before some one else does.” Fran shouted sending the girls ahead on their mission. The adults lingered awhile. Shane was introduced to Theresa, Fran and Gina. Kay she knew well from the time she had dated Tina. As Shane took one of the baskets that Jasmine was carrying Bette could tell she had just been replaced in the young lady’s eyes.
“Come have a glass of lemonade with us.” Fran urged pulling Bette along. “How is it that you are out here with no fluids in your advanced state?”
Shane felt chastised and happy that she had followed Bette against her wishes. The look she threw Bette justifying herself earned her a small smile. Theresa unable to keep her distance fell in on the other side of Bette.
“This is Ro’s baby?” She asked the emotion evident in her voice.
“Yeah, our son.” Bette replied.
“A boy, wow.” Kay couldn’t help herself she was drawn as well to the precious life that Bette carried. “So did you two use Rosanna’s egg and the same donor that you used to create Angelica?”
Bette nodded. She couldn’t help but think that she had conjured them up by thinking about Rosanna. “A piece of her lives on, not just in our hearts.” She murmured.
Gina quickly organized the picnic supplies. A large red and white checked table cloth went on first. Fried chicken, potato salad, coleslaw and fruits, were laid under food umbrellas while several large blankets were placed nearby on the grass. Bette glanced at her watch realizing it was very close to the time she told Tina she would meet her at the North Gate. As she pulled out her cell to make the call she saw Tina, Alice, Tasha, Paige, Helena and Leigh walking towards them. Denise could be seen in the distance looking on.
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Oh first again, don’t believe it. What a story this is. Will someone please tell these ladies and Bette that she will be OK with Tina in her life now. Tina will take care of her and the children just as she was meant to do before Rosanna. They have both grown beyond all the hurt and pain they caused each other. Please just let them love one another again. I think that will happen when the baby is born. At least I hope so. PPS.
Kelika, however you plan to carry us to the end will be just fine. We will be with you all the way, long or short. My mantra is always Bette and Tina together. Thanks for such a lovely story.
I’ll be here for the ride K…however you choose to do it. I love your writing.
I am along for the ride, because that it has been and a great one. However, it may come let it come.
Kay is a bitter witch. How dare she blame Bette for Ro’s death. She never stood a chance with Ro and she needs to accept that. I don’t care how much see misses Ro, that was down right rude and someone should have slapped her. I don’t think Tina is through with her yet. Tell Kit, she kick Kay’s *ss. It was nice to see that you did have someone follow Bette and glad the posse came to support Bette. Good to see more of Denise and to know that at least Theresa knows respect and knew that Ro was loved by Bette. Can we get another post soon, please.
Kay went well beyond the pale there. Just completely uncalled for, and inherently untrue. Very glad Shane had the good sense to follow Bette and call the posse. And if Kit would’ve been there… Actually, Kit probably wouldn’t have been needed, since Tina was ready to totally throw down for her woman. Anyway, great chapter, but I sense the happy event is nearing due to the added stress. Damn Kay and her self-serving, thoughtless mouth. Post soon, but at the same time, I don’t want this ending… dilemmas, dilemmas. Yeah, post soon. Greed and great writing win out! Thanks, kelika.
wow that was extremely sad, and just crazy. I’m glad she has friends/family like the gang because i could never see myself getting through that….pps
This is such a wonderful story that I don’t want it to end. At least not soon. After the baby is born, Tina can help Bette. They should live together and support one another. They love each other and I don’t believe the same problems would crop up again. They realize what they lost during their separation. It won’t happen again. This time I believe Tina has grown so much and has forgiven Bette. They are different people. Much more mature and Angie loves them both so much. Your writing is beautiful. You tell the story so well. I am loving this story. PPS.
Angelica is truly her mothers’ child. She has a quick temper and even quicker to defend the people she loves. We often forget that kids feel so much more than what they show us. Glad to see the posse was there to make sure Bette was alright. Thanks for the post.
WOW!! So much drama in this chapter. Bette didn’t get to show Tina whatever it was she was going to. I hate to see this end. I love your writing.
K that was such a wonderful story, it had heartbreak,love,tenderness,protection,and FREINDSHIP AND LOYALTY!!
someone needs to kick Kay’s ass. Great chapter give us another soon.
Kelika, That was a great chapter. I just hope when you end this that B&T will be together with there children and the love the still have for each other. Thank you. PPVS
That was awesome, poor Bette!
Oh, Kay, Tina is so not through with you. Lesbians from the North, too funny, wouldn’t you just love to se that group coming your way. Angie is truly a combination of the best of both of her Mother’s. The gang will always be there to take care of each other, but Tina has always been and always will be the one that keeps Bette together. Hopefully when Bette’s feeling better she’ll be able to show Tina what she had planned to.
YES YES YES it worked for you!!!! Lol…I was holding my breath u know. Just got home from a big day out so its taken this long to check it out…whew!!!!! As for how long u make the story that’s really your call cuz only you know what it is you want to explore;altho as I said in my email…I wanna know where Bette had intended to take Tina???? Tina is being so patient but its hard for me, lmao.
Really enjoying this story of course i’m always a sucker for Tibette tales, looking forward to more.
You are prolific my friend. I’m away from the site for a couple of days and there are like 1,000 chappies waiting! I love it! LOL. Loved “Lesbians descending from the north.” Hilarious!! On to read the rest…