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A Deeper Song, post 24
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Angelica arrived home from school and was kept out of the birthing room despite her protests.
In her ninth hour of labor Bette was glowing. Tina had not imagined a woman giving birth could be so breathtakingly gorgeous. Bette’s face was flushed and there was a light sheen of perspiration from her labor over endless honey skin and full ripe breasts. Tina told her just how beautiful she was. Bette gave her a sardonic smile. “It’s lucky for you that I can’t blame you for this. You have no idea how much I want to curse Rosanna out at this moment.” She said without thinking.
Pain flashed across Tina’s face. “I wish you were cursing me. I would love nothing more than the babe you are birthing to be mine in every sense of the word.”
“Since there is no doubt that I am yours…” she hesitated to concede her alpha status “he is too by extension.” Bette told her softly. “Oh god” Bette cried as another contraction hit her. She clutched Tina’s hand tightly. Kit, Shane and Alice exhanged amused glances, this was blackmail material.
“Breathe, babe. Count with me.” Tina mopped her face with a cool cloth.
“Check how we are doing.” Marissa instructed.
“We.” Bette grumbled.
“We” Tina smiled and reached between her legs. She felt the baby’s head occupying almost Bette’s entire cervix he was on the way.
“We” Bette answered when she could speak again. “Thank you T. Thank you for being here with me.” She really looked at Tina and thought about the incredible bond that she shared with this woman. “I love you.” She said before another contraction hit her. They were coming much faster now.
Marissa kept a running dialogue and instructed Bette and her family in the best techniques to lessen the pain. Suddenly it was time to push. Bette went back into the tank, which eased her, the most.
The chair was prepared. Marissa threw everyone out except Tina at this point. Tina coached as Bette pushed; suddenly the head emerged. Several minutes later came the shoulders and then Bette delivered Rowan into Tina’s waiting hands.
Marissa talked Tina through the cutting of the cord. She and Tina cleaned him up to present to Bette. Just as she was carrying him to Bette he opened his eyes. He looked at Tina and held her gaze. Tina felt as if her heart was bursting, the piercing blue and innocence overwhelmed her. He’s got Rosanna’s eyes she thought. That stunned her. She broke eye contact to hand him to Bette. Bette took one look at him and gasped. “Ro.” The tears began to fall rapidly. On cue Rowan began to wail.
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Beautiful. Cab’t wait until you post again. Maybe a sequel for this story?
Have I mentioned that I love this story. Didn’t think I would as it started with Ro, and then a death. but I look everyday for an update and this was beautiful. Brilliant touches with all the characters, uncomfortable Shane, scared for her life Helena, Tina’s jealousy (?) then love for Rowan. Thanks for posting before your vacation.
I just LOVE this fic. I hate for it to end, and I am going to MISS it. So wonderfully written!!!!!!!!
WOW K it was beautiful,,,,,,and thanks for posting before your vacation, I start mine next week and no pc on this trip if I want to live,,LOL!!!!
Wonderfully done, sad, poignant and real. Love your writing looking forward to more!
Dear Kelika,That was so beautiful–a moving birth. I like that this story has dealt so amazingly well with the love two women can share with each other AND the profound meaning childbirth and child rearing has for women.
I love that poem, so much. I loved this story. It was beautiful.
You are amazing Kelika! Thanks for writing. Have a safe fun-filled vacation!
Really awesome K! Great lines, great portrayal of our girls. Hope we can expect more from you!
That was beautiful!
Brilliant Chapter!! Have a fun-filled vacation and a safe return.
Hey Kelika, That was so sweet and heartfelt. Good to see Bette and Tina talking so openly about Rosanna and her family. Rowan is perfect; a little slice of heaven. I would like to see this end with Bette and Tina marrying. Having them make that committment would just be sublime. Many thanks for this emotive tale. Your Loyal Fan.
Do you know that i am your fan, hn? Great story, darling!
I love that poem. It is definitely one of my favorites.
yes yes yes, see my email…i was delayed by my boy…so weird that as i was reading abt the birth he phoned….love it, big tears…
I loved it . That was just beautiful.
So glad you wrote te actual birth of Rowan. Very well done. Will hate to see this end, but I’m sure there are other B&T stories just waiting to be written by you. Have a great vacation.
K, that was very Beautiful and so loving. Thank you I am so loving this story. I hate to see it end. But most Great things do. Thank you again so much.
K, that was so beautiful. I went back this weekend and reread Even in the Quietest Moments, just to refresh my memory and I could barely tear myself away of this computer. You have a way of keeping everyone’s attention and you just can’t stop reading until it’s over. Anyway, I’m just trying to say that I love all your stories and I can’t wait for more. Have a great vacation!
Kel.. what a moving story and birth… great update women job well done keep up the great work and thanks for sharing it with ur fans. post soon sweetie.:)))
EBB is one of my favorite poets, so fitting to express B&T love…hurray, B&T have another baby
Beautiful. That first glimpse had to be hard for Tina, but Rowan is a part of Bette, thus Tina will love him as she does Bette, and Angelica. That is with every fiber of her being. Glad to see Bette reassurring her that though she misses Ro, her love for Tina is unquestionable.
Thank you for writing this wonderful story, I always look forward to your posts.