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A Doctor’s Visit!
The doctor’s fingers slid into Bette’s soft inner core and worked their way in, teasing, toying, tantalizing.
She heard Bette’s breath shorten until it was all short spurts. The doctor leaned downward and nippled the tender inside of Bette’s thigh. Peaking, Bette gasped the doctor’s name.
“Oh Dr. *&&^^%,” as she moved into the doctor’s hand.
The doctor removed her fingers and licked them dry. Then with short, quick passes of her tongue that stoked the flame of Bette’s inner core, the doctor reduced Bette to a mass of pulsating needs.
Lightly, ever so lightly, the doctor passed her mouth along Bette’s lips, barely touching them to hers. It was enough to set off a warehouse full of sparkers.
Needs that could only be satisfied by the doc. Bette whimpered as she twisted away from the heat of the doc’s mouth and then into it, wanting her to stop, wanting her to continue.
Bette pressed urgently to the Doc as her mouth sampled, savored and took more. The doctor continued to kiss Bette’s pussy as if her soul deepened upon it. Maybe it did.
Her mouth worked over Bette, deepening until it was a symphony that involved every fiber of her being. The doctor then placed her hands under Bette’s ass. She tried not to think of the right and wrong of their actions.
Bette urgently pressed the doc’s head to her burning flesh, trying to absorb her, trying to absorb the wild, heady sensation the doctor created with just her mouth.
Ecstasy merged with agony until, clawing frantically for the sides of the examining table, Bette was swept over one peak and passed to another. And another, until she was so exhausted she barely knew any names, least of all her own.
The doctor’s face glistened with traces of Bette’s sweet juices as she moved along Bette’s body, working her way up to Bette’s mouth.
Once there the doctor could feel Bette’s heart pounding against her ribs, her heart pounding so hard that it seemed to pound against the doctor’s. The rhythms merged until the beat that was one and the same.
The doctor looked into Bette’s eyes and found herself hopelessly trapped by a woman who didn’t even realize she had the power to imprison her.
“You’re mine, Bette. Whatever else happens,” she whispered against Bette’s ear, “you’re mines. Now get dressed.”
The doctor removed herself from between Bette’s legs and walked over to the sink to wash her hands.
“Whenever these symptoms occur again just come on in.”
The doctor grabbed Bette’s file and walked out the room. Just before she was able to reached her private washroom, her nurse walked up behind her.
“Your next patient is ready for you. A Ms Kennard.
The End?
Now who is this Damn Doctor that is making Bette feel like this? Making her fantasy come true?
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I just finished reading the excellent “A Taste of Something Creole” about Dr. Wilson. Could she be the unnamed doctor? I’m intrigued, delighted, overheated and mystified by your latest and want more.
Dr.Wilson?Ooo, I just really can’t go there! So I hope it’s not her. Okay not Helena,…. so I really don’t know this is why you have to post another chapter! lol
DANG!!!!! Don’t even think about ending it here! Geez!!!!
Dr WHO? lol… it was HOT, please post soon :)
Holy cow that was HOOOOOT – I don’t care who the Damn Doctor is, because in my head its Tina LOL. More…
holy shit!! the only other person i can think is Hel!! u better continue M!!
Skyblue…..Dr Who….. LOL…That was funny……..Hansen that’s the joy of having an imagination. We can think of anyone we want….LOL……So Smiley just imagine who ever you want it to be……: )
Smiley…you don’t think Dr. Wilson is sexy? I mean for an older woman she is hot….and her voice…I need to turn a fan on….lol
*Hand raised* Oh I know…I know…it’s the Twink from season 2…she is an attending at the hospital Bette had the appointment at. Since Bette took charge on their 1st encounter she is having a go at it now…lol
damn i love your stories!!!! at the end of this one i was like oh what the hell, isnt tina the doctor?!?!?!” so thats my question to who in the hell is the damn doctor? LOL Or wait a minute could it be a sexy brit
LOL….Skycaptain are you talking about the girl Bette slept with in New York?
If it ain’t Tina and it ain’t Helena then who could the good Dr. be? Maybe Shane?? Is it someone from the cast? TBC but of course!
i wish it was tina…
OMG how am I going to see my gynie next week?? Thanks a lot! Um…Are you a doctor? ????? !!!!!!
I wished it was Tina too…and I agree Dr Wilson is yummy!!!!
your killing me… i hope they both are doctors and they both are examining each other… who the fuck knows… all i know is that you better continue… please… and the winner is…
I’m so happy someone else thinks Dr. Wilson is a HOT. I would love to think that this is Dr. Wilson but I don’t think she violate her oath, even for Bette as hot as she is and certainly not Tina. Okay who’s the doctor?PPS
This is great Michellia and absolutely hot hot hot! Loving it so far! I’m having a Michellia night tonight I think, I’ve just read and rated your chapters that I’ve missed out by the way and I wouldn’t have it any other way! Glad to see you’re still writing and giving us so much pleasure! Loving what you’ve created so far with this one and can’t wait for chapter 3!!! ;)
I actually wished it was me…
LMAO…..Lamentamini…..I guess I was imagining it being me on that table with a few of the characters from the show…(wink wink)
Meh…read it again twice as slow to see if there were any clues and got nothing…and argh…does that mean you’re not the doctor? and back to square 1…Maybe you didn’t even have a face for this doctory fromt he staort
oh typos galore…
Adumgenius I do have a face for this doctor….One that I think is very hot and sexy……And yes its someone from the show….; )
Yes Michellia I figured what the heck throw the twink in the mix (Bette’s hookup from season 2) So you have to post and put us out of our misery…what is this 2 of 2 stuff?
i really cant think who the fuck thsi doctor was but This Dr Dirty did get me all steaming and sizzling enuff to go for a brest exam myselfpls dont end the story yet its so amazing
Tough one. I would have to guess its Dr Wilson. But she is always so together I just can’t see her making such an ethical breach, but I do think the good doctor is hot. If you continue you must give us clues
These comments have me crackin’up! M’s imagination is twisted. If she decides to continue, we won’t know who the DOC is for another 20 chapters – that’s how the Queen of Suspense operates! But since Tina is the next to enter, we know for a fact, IT AINT HER!
It’s probably Moira. lol The bleeped out name made me think of Kill Bill vol. 1 when we weren’t supposed to know The Bride’s name. I laughed and imagined the big BEEEEEEEEEEP in my mind.
Me with a twisted mind….LOL…No Snqqp……And there isnt going to be 20 chapters…there isnt that many cast member…….And who said it isnt Tina? Wink
ooohh la la ……who is the doc??????…dayum that was hot………..
OMG Lamentamini I can for sure say it isnt Moira/Max…..LOL
OK be back in an hour Dexter is on and since Im a forensic freak and love to get in the mines of serial killers I have to go watch….Later
Ahhh, Dexter! He’s the new Robinhood of serial killing. He kills all the freaks that deserve it and comes off as a hero for cleaning up the streets. He of course is the most Fucked up out of all the serial killers, but that is besides the point ! You gotta love Showtime for it’s originality. Okay, it’s got to be Tina as the doc. Her and Bette are taking turns examining the other in some type of fantasy role play…right? But I did LMAO at Lamentamini’s Moira/Max guess. All i can say to that is …EWWWWWW! LOL!
I got it. It’s Ms. Ilene Chaiken! ¬_¬
Hot dayum. That Dr. Wilson chick is good man!! Who would’ve thunk? LOL. All i know is that it ain’t me!! It ain’t Tina, and it’s not Helenoo. Well fine, is it U? aha, mystery solved. You’re the good doctor Mich!! LOL.
It’s Dr. Love! What other kind of doctor could cure this type of ill? LOL!!
Obviously you’ve done a fantastic job of driving everyone crazy. But damn, its not Tina and its not Helena. Maybe DR. Barbara instead of Senator?
Damn that was so fucking hot and awesome, I think the docter is Helena and damn so hot. Thanks for this hot story and hope you will post soon with your another one, thanks!
Dr Peabody what a concept. If it is it must be a Helena dream sequence
Fuck this was extremely hot, I which my doctor, which is beautiful and gay, would treat me in the same way . It’s Jenny, I know it for sure it’s a weird act from a weird person. The End?, well that’s a weird question in my opinion. Btw. weird or not weird were can I make a appointment please…
Bloo-dy hell!! that was hot!! ok i have not got a clue who this damn sesxy doc is so please hurry and post the next one!
Wowsa that’s hot :) Is it their sex therapist in S3 you know the one with the clown nose who recommended chocolate?? lol
Oh wait..this could also be the other therapist in S2 @ the Sharon I’s concert, that had a private practice that said ‘she would rather date Bette than analyzed her?’…
1st…….BRB!!
Hot and juicy and oh, so wrong! Well, you’re known for doing non-canon stories, so this could be anyone! My first vote goes to Dr. Wilson, then to Candace! lol You have to continue this–inquiring minds need to know!
Oh my goodness…I couldn’t work in that profession…I just don’t see how they do it. The temptation would be murder. I was thinking about Dr. Wilson also. Let me find out the whole cast is going to see the good Dr. for a exam. That was hot.
hottttttttttttttttttttttttttttt longer
Oh, and I’m thinking maybe I should print this out to read everytime I go to do a self breast exam. I just didn’t get the wedge part though.
LOL and HOT!It’s Dr.Helena Peabody and you better conitnue this story!
Nope Smiley but good guess!
***** S-C-R-E-A-M-I-N-GGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGGG ***** THAT SHIT WAS GOOOOOOOOOOOOOOD!! See, this is EXACTLY why I didn’t want to guess. You wicked %^&*& You!! Fabulous Baby!!!
Who was it who guessed Dr. Wilson? I’m still lost on who it could be but I’m not disappointed to find it wasn’t Tina as she wasn’t my first choice. I’ll guess Dr. Wilson as well cause she’s just that fuckin’ hot.
Hiya Michellia, I wan tit to be Doctor Shane. I just think that she has the knowledge and skills to bring Bette to such a peak and then release her. That was sizzingly sexy and erotic. The sensuality just dripped off the screen with evey seduction sentence. Please continue and let us all see how Tina reacts to this new doctor. Puh-lease.. Many thanks for an afternoon’s entertainment and the heavy breathing that ensued. Your Loyal Fan.
F*CK!!! that really, truly, utterly undid me! aaargh! who is it, if not Dr Helena? there’s no one else I’d rather it be! (*suddenly struck by a brilliant idea and whispers* maybe Estelle?) :D
obviously it’s you Dr. M – you ‘ve obviously got the touch!! I mean we are hanging on every word doctor.