Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of PG. Age verification is required to proceed.
A Few Small Repairs – Chapter 9
“So you stormed out to make sure Tina knew your feelings had been hurt”
“What do you think I was doing in the liquor store?” Bette asked.
“So you’re going to take Tina a bottle of wine, say you’re sorry and just expect the problem is solved?”
“Of course it won’t be. I hurt her. Do you really think I don’t know that? But she hurt me too.”
“Take a breath, would you?”
“I found a solution so we can have our family. A solution that takes away the risk for Tina”
“You took away the opportunity for Tina to carry her baby”
Bette’s eyes darted around the bar, a couple of heads turned briefly to look at the two women tucked away in a booth toward the back but just as quickly the other patrons went back to their drinks.
“Nice” Bette said as she glared at
“Sorry”
“I never said that Tina couldn’t be the birth mother”
“Not directly”
Thinking back to the pregnancy, before it had all gone wrong, Bette remembered how happy Tina had been. Despite the morning sickness and other side effects she never complained.
“You think she still wants to have the baby?” Bette whispered as her brow furrowed at the thought of how badly she may have messed up.
“Whether she knows it or not, yes, I think she does”
“Has she talked to you about this?” Bette asked as she looked
“Sounds like you already are” Bette replied evenly.
“She talked to me about it yesterday”
“And?” Bette asked as she raised a questioning eyebrow.
“And she’s afraid and confused” Alice replied “But I think that she still wants to be the birth mother, she just needs to know you’re going to stick around”
“I will” Bette replied without hesitation “Of course I will”
“Talk is cheap, Porter”
“I was just trying to help” Bette replied sullenly.
“I’m guessing that Tina probably took it like a slap in the face”
“But that’s crazy” Bette retorted “That’s not it at all!”
“Close your mouth and put yourself in Tina’s place for five seconds”
Bette sat and glared at
“A thirty dollar bottle of wine isn’t what Tina needs from you”
“I need to go” Bette said quietly as she reached out and picked up her purse and suit jacket.
“Yeah you do”
Bette shuffled out of the booth and hurriedly kissed
“Bye” The both said at the same time before Bette turned to leave.
“Thank-you” Bette called before flashing a smile which
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.


(22 votes, average: 4.36 out of 5)
I think Tee looked a bit too much into it. I mean, she’s a little over-sensitive. Bette was just trying to help. Tee should be moved, but tell Bette her thoughts directly. It may be a better way.
Nimble handling of a tricky bit of emotion.
Tina should have spoken to Bette about how she was feeling. Tina’s always telling Bette that she should open up and let her in emotionally; but, she not practicing what she preaches. Tina talks to Alice when she should talk to Bette. Bette was a bit insensitive, but she was trying to help. I guess I can understand both sides. They both need to talk to one another…really talk — openly and honestly. Thanks for the update. Merry Christmas…enjoy your holiday.
See Alice can be good for more than just fun and funny games. But I still don’t think Bette was wrong here. Tina has been over the top about having a baby again.
i’m glad bette listened…now go back to tina and work it out…merry christmas
i’m with BP here — she’s desperately trying to do the right thing. great chap hackgirl — just brilliant
Maybe, they were both being insensitive to each other, but neither were in the wrong; save for Tina with her rude age comment. If Tina could have just expressed her true fears, then perhaps Bette wouldn’t have been so quick to provide a solution that ultimately caused more issues between the two. Happy holidays to you too!
f is for foshizzle!! dude that was badass i luv alice sumtimes..but i do think t got to c bettes view and so does bette for t…jesus so much drama!!
I was wondering when Alice would get involved. So communication’s still a problem, huh? Hopefully B&T’s next conversation will be less Q&A and more honest. Thanks for the insightful chapter.
yay..go Bette! this is real good..always love your story!
HG,Am back and ready to revel in your latest addition to this brilliant story.It was very pleasling to see Alice give Bette a big ole clunk on the head and get her sweet ass back on the straight and narrow towards Tina.Just like life it often takes someone else to show you the wood from the trees.Keep these little gems a-coming coz I’m a-waiting.Thank you,Your Loyal Fan.