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A Final Dream – Chapte 6
I’m home alone. My dad is working and so is Kirsten. I go straight up to my room and grab my guitar, pulling the strings like I’m gone wilde.
The playing gives me such a rush I can’t stop it. As it’s getting later and later, the songs become quieter. I decide to take a break and go downstairs to grab a beer of my father’s. I hope he won’t notice.
As I’m letting myself fall in the couch, the doorbell sounds. I sigh and get up, I’m really tired. Who the hell would come here? The others are all still at school, or they’re at home.
I open the door and am more than surprised when I see Tina. Why would she come here after the things I’ve said today? I feel embarrassed for that and I feel myself becoming red.
“Hi,” I whisper, fumbling with my fingers. “What are you doing here?” I didn’t mean it too sound rude, but it did anyway.
“I think you have some explaining to do,” she says in a cold voice. Great. I feel myself almost shrinking inside as I open the door wider.
“Want to come in?” I ask her. She nods and comes in. I feel uncomfortable, I don’t know what to tell her. I don’t even know the answer to her unspoken question myself.
I offer her a drink and she agrees to have a bear. I take her upstairs, to the safety of my room. It’s the only place in the house where I feel completely at ease already.
She looks at my shining black guitar and there seems to be a sparkle in her eyes.
“You play the guitar?” she asks me. I can hear in her voice it’s not just a random question, or a question posed just to be polite. She’s really interested.
“Yeah, for a couple of years now. I write a song every now and then. My singing sucks, though.”
“So, hasn’t Gary asked you to play in his band?”
Gary. There he is. How long did it take for his name to fall?
“I… I haven’t… I… he doesn’t know,” I say, my hand rubbing my neck.
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(34 votes, average: 3.47 out of 5)
OH have mercy!!! Keep going please.
Jeeeze please tell me you didn’t just cut it off there. OHHHurrg
Bette!! Don’t let her leave…go after her! Come on…That’s what I screamed a few seconds ago. Please keep going…can’t wait for more
what happened to the 4th page??? not to mention u left it hanging. not nice at all…:)PPS
Dont know if I should call you a tease or what. Bette needs to stop Tina
It had to happen sooner or later thier feelings for each other are just too strong. Now the guilt will set in but I hope they follow thier hearts right toward each other. PPS
eh… Genner? where did the rest of the pages go? – come on, Bette, what are you waiting for, go get her!!! Beautiful song, the moment made me shed a tear… please post soon!!
Bette if your not still standing there in shock and awe you better run and get your girl! PPS
i read the first chapter ages ago – am so glad you’re continuing! Love where this is going! :)
4th page seems to be blank. Bette do not let Tina leave and if she does go after her.
Whoa Bette can’t let Tina leave after that. Plus I think it is time to tell the truth about the song. And Bette needs to let Carmen go so she can show Tina what she is feeling is mutual.