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A Lifetime – c 13
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Hi, Red, Bette offered her hand to Red as she drew Tina closer with her other hand.
Everyones in the back room, Red explained as she gestured toward the back of the club.
As they walked toward the door, Tina began to flush. She remembered the night that she and Bette had had mind-blowing sex in that room. And Red had guarded the door because she knew exactly what was going on.
Tina, who had always been nervous about Red, was now embarrassed to be around the bouncer.
Baby, Bette had said when Tina admitted this to her, Red knows we have sex. Come on.
All their friends were in the back room, gathered around a table: Alice, Shane, Dana, Kit, Val, Sue, Red and Melissa, Reds wife. In the middle of the table was a beautiful cake decorated with confectionary sea shells. One large lighted candle stood in the middle.
They sang Happy Anniversary with more enthusiasm than talent. Melissa had Bette and Tina stand behind the cake as she snapped some pictures. Red poured the champagne and they toasted the happy couple. Tina began to cut the cake with Bettes hand over hers.
You are cutting this cake more beautifully than you did the wedding cake, Dana observed.
Thats because she isnt blind drunk tonight,
They ate, drank, visited.
This is truly outstanding champagne, Bette complimented Red. Bette had recognized the label and year and knew she and Tina were being honored.
Red only nodded, but she was secretly pleased at the compliment.
You need to come visit the kids, Melissa said to Bette. Both of you.
Yes, we do. Bette agreed. Tina flashed a startled look at Bette but suppressed it quickly. She hadnt known that Red and Melissa had children.
They made these for you and Tina, Melissa handed Bette and Tina beautiful origami cranes that were combined into one folding.
They said to tell you that the two cranes are together because you are together and that gold is good luck.
Tina and Bette took the beautiful cranes and thanked Melissa.
Its a paper present for your paper anniversary.
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SWEET!!!!!!
Nice! Very Nice!
OMFG!!!! That was great. More Please
Hmmm…. I guess Tina’s always a bit insatiable. Bette is way too tender sometimes. Maybe that’s one of the reason Tina wants to try something else? *sigh*
Love it when other people are involved. Friends are so important in your life. This was a great chapter. As par, would love to have more . Get you health in order and we are thinking of you. LOML is doing great. We go one day at a time Hey,promise to take care of myself. I will be MIA dueing Baseball season,which start 04-03 Hope they give me more joy than S3 thanks
Dang Pancha!!!
The cranes were touching and sexually agressive Bette was hot. More wall scenes please. But take your time getting gett well. I can wait. : )
the only word in my mind is PERFECT!!!
i think we all are going to be sore… dam that was good… let them call in sick tomorrow… and please continue the night
I guess deep down Bette is always a little worried she may scare Tina off. But we know that won’t happen because here, Tina was the one who pursued Bette, not the other way around. At the same time though it’s sweet that Bette isn’t like a hornball male teenager who just wants to pound away and not give a damn about her partner’s feelings. Loved the comment on the cutting of the cake. lol
Damn, Pancha! A fine meal, a great party, and tremendous sex. Plus trips to NY and Hawaii. These two have it all. How come you’re the only one who let’s us see Tina grow up? By the way, I’m sure Sue and the others had a fantastic time at the party.
Tina always felt that Bette treated her to gently, why didn’t Tina try to be more aggressive with Bette? That may have led Bette to treat Tina the way that Tina needed at times. Granted this behaviour does not have happen all the time but sometimes it would be interesting.
WOWZA..!
Pancha…You rock. I love the way you tell a story.
this is wonderful as always – brilliant
you know how celebrate first wedding anniversary: luxury restaurant, a good party with friends, second honeymoon, trips to New York and finally with an amazing making love session! you are a genius! i like your post i hope read more about your story but the most important is to take good care yourself in order to get better each day!
Another wonderful chapter, but more importantly get better soon, take care
A wonderful meal, terrific party with the gang, great gifts (1st edition and trips to NY and Hawaii) and amazing grown-up sex. Tina is not a little girl but a woman and now she knows it and so does Bette. Thanks for the amazing update. Please continue.
Tina’s all grown-up. This was really beauiful. I’m happy to hear you won’t be going into retirement. Take care of yourself.
Sweet Jesus! What are we going to do while you’re away, Pancha?
AS always..your writting is excellent …i love the story,the romance…everything…this chapter was in a word powerfull stuff…
I so love the progression you have taken these two. It’s all done with love and growth. Nice it’s good to feel like a grown-up woman.
Lifetime is sexy and entertaining and more important not only a fan fic story but also a story which portrays social problems. It’d be great to have a closure for Bette and Tina after this creepy season, if you write a story about it, I’m sure it’ll be a great one.
nice nice
Wow nice and sweet!
Pancha,Wonderful, wonderful, addition to this awesome and amazing drama. Finally Tina and Bette are on equal footing in this relationship as grown ups. I adore your easy flow and ebb of storytelling. Bette has relaxed in the knowledge that Tina is hers at home and in the real world. Tina is settled as that big chip is finally off her shoulder and able to share her love and partner with her friends. Can’t wait to see what will happen next but I’ll be here. Thank you so much for this magnificent melodrama, Your Loyal Fan.