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A long time coming. Chapter 2
She walks outside and the cool rain hits her right away. She feels someone walk up behind her, thinking it was jenny coming to check up on her she spill her feelings. “I thought she left because she didn’t care, like I was just another one of her flings. And I come here to have fun and find out that I was wrong, she left for the complete opposite. She was being selfless for one first times in her life and I was too blind to see that she did love me.” She paused for a long moment. “ I’ve been lying to myself for the past year trying to convince myself that she never loved me so it would make it easier to let her go… But…. But…. I just cant.” As she breaks down in tears
She feels a hand on her shoulder again. But what happens next takes her so off guard she almost passes out.
Shane-“Carmen, look at me.”
Carmen slowly turns around.
Carmen-“shane I didn.”
Shane cuts in “ I know, but let me say what is needed. I know I am a fuck up Carmen but please don’t doubt that I ever loved you, I Still do. You changed so much about me and for the first time I was thinking of someone before myself. But I miss you I realize now that I made the biggest mistake of my life leaving you at the altar. I’ve missed you ever day, and have regretted that I fucked up so badly. I love you Carmen and I want you, I mean I want to have an us again.
Carmen- “ I can’t handle this right now. I didn’t expect to see you here today. “
Shane- “carm please don’t I know I fucked up!” with desperation in her voice.
Carmen-“ I’ll call you when I am ready to talk. Right now I just need time to realize everything I herd today. I will call I promise. I just need time. I don’t know if I can do this again. I need to see if we can even be friends”
And at that Carmen walks away leaving shane alone in the dark with Carmen’s smell mesmerizing her.
Shane walks up to the group who are chatting it up clearly intoxicated.
Shane-“I have to get her back.”
This causes the group to stop and stare with smiles on all of their faces.
Alice-“ it is about time yoda!”
Shane just smiles with nothing more to say as she tries to figure out how she is going to get the love of her life back.
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(9 votes, average: 3.44 out of 5)
awesome chap!!
Go Shane!Thank you for the update.PPS
😃👍 great post. People like Carmen and Shane don’t stay single for long. Maybe Shane should have competition for Carmen’s affection. Shane has never really tried to earn anything. I think she waits until it lands in her lap and then she goes with it. Is it doable? Thank you😃