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    A long time coming. Chapter 4

    Story written on April 20, 2012 by alud32.
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    this one is full of surprises

    Lick it all over ’til you hear her make a sound
    Then you know that you found a good spot

    Tease it and touch it, but not a lot

    Put your mouth on top, you’re in control You can make it happen – fast or slow

    This is all Carmen hears of the song because it does exactly what shane wanted it to do. Carmen is thinking of nothing other than shane. This is the song Carmen had God-Des and She play the night before the wedding to Shane at her Bachelorette party..

     

     

    Just as Carmen comes back to earth the second song hits.

     

     

    Something always brings me back to you.
    It never takes too long.
    No matter what I say or do I’ll still feel you here ’til the moment I’m gone.

    You hold me without touch.
    You keep me without chains.
    I never wanted anything so much than to drown in your love and not feel your rain.

    [CHORUS:]
    Set me free, leave me be. I don’t want to fall another moment into your gravity.
    Here I am and I stand so tall, just the way I’m supposed to be.
    But you’re on to me and all over me.

    You loved me ’cause I’m fragile.
    When I thought that I was strong.
    But you touch me for a little while and all my fragile strength is gone.

    [CHORUS]

    I live here on my knees as I try to make you see that you’re everything I think I need here on the ground.
    But you’re neither friend nor foe though I can’t seem to let you go.
    The one thing that I still know is that you’re keeping me down
    You’re on to me, on to me, and all over…
    Something always brings me back to you.
    It never takes too long.

     And again Carmen is lost in her thoughts. Helena walks up to her with a rose that has a tag on it.

    Helena-“don’t kill the messenger. But this is for you”

    Carmen takes the rose and reads the tag.

     

    Carmen,

              You look more than beautiful tonight. I would love nothing more than to dance with you and hold you in my arms. Meet me at the bar. I will be waiting patiently at the end on the left.

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    1. Forget my suggestion. You’re doing great. Thank you for this awesome post. Carmen is so weak for Shane. I know Shane is okay now but will she be when Sherry is around? 😘

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