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A long time coming. Chapter 5
Carmen finishes her set and steps down to find Shane. But come to find shane went home for the night.
‘that’s understandable. She did just get home from a rough couple of days’ she thinks.
Sam comes up clearly drunk-“dance with me!” grabbing Carmen and trying to take her out to the dance floor.
Carmen-“ I think I am going to just head home I am kind of tired.”
Sam doesn’t take this well-“ what!? What is up with you. Ever since you saw shane I can’t touch you. You won’t have sex with me for fuck sake if you want her that bad just go! You don’t love me”
Carmen-“ so much for this not coming between our friendship huh?”
Sam-“what did you just say!?”
Carmen-“ I said so much for this not coming between our friendship. Yes I care about you, you know that. But you also knew I am still in love with shane. You knew the fucking deal. If she really was a changed person that I would go back to her. You knew and agreed! It isn’t like you haven’t been out every other night fucking a different girl so why would I give it up to you?!”
That caused sam to stop.
Carmen-“ what you though I didn’t know. Hello Sam! I was with a player for six months I know the fucking signs! And the way you acted with her confirmed it. Well that and papi called me to tell me about this new how ass surfer she was sleeping with”
Sam still was speechless, she had never been caught before.
Carmen-“ don’t take me for a fool Sam”
Carmen walks out of the club leaving sam behind stunned.
She doesn’t go home. Instead she goes to the outskirts of the city and drives up the mountain just to sit, look at the stars, and think.
Sitting looking up at the sky ‘well this is now or never. I guess I am going to find out if it was just competition or if I really am all that shane wants. God I pray that is the case. Ive always known I can’t get away from her, she has my heart and soul. I just need to let go and trust her. Hopefully it doesn’t bite me in the ass’
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😃👍 yes I’m enjoying this. You’re doing a great job, thank you. I wonder what surprise Shane has in store. They need (Sharmen) need to have dinner and a nice proper discussion to solidify their connection😘
Thanks for the wonderful story of a happy Shane. She deserves to be happy with Carmen. She also deserves a second chance as we all do. That’s what human growth is all about… making mistakes and growing from them.
whew, kick ass awesome chap!!!!
I just caught up om all your chapters! What a great fic! I’m glad Carmen caught onto Sam. Now she needs to just take Shane’s word and slowly work things out :) PPS!
awesome chapter!! cant wait for the next one! I