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    A long time coming. Chapter 7

    Carmen-“ hello momma!”

    There is a long pause and Shane starts to become concerned.

     

    Carmen-“ I know it has been too long. That is one of the reasons I am calling. I was wondering if I could come over for dinner tomorrow?”

    Mercedes-“ of course, I make dinner for you and sam!” with much excitement in her voice.

    Carmen-“ umm, I will be with someone but it won’t be Sam.”  Smiling at Shane.

    Mercedes-“ Then who?”

    Carmen-“That’s the other thing I need to talk to you about.”

    Carmen didn’t even need to say it. Her mother already knew.

     

    Mercedes-“ I have no desire to see her. Chane is no good for you.”

    Carmen-“ mom just wait. I know you don’t trust her, but I think you need to just listen to what she has to say. I did and I now understand.”

    Mercedes-“ okay, I will listen. Only for you though.”

    Carmen-“ Thank you momma! We will see you tomorrow.”

    Mercedes-“ I will see you tomorrow. And tell Chane to be ready to talk.”

    Carmen-“ I will”

    At that they hang up.

     

    Back at the planet everyone is wondering where Shane and Carmen have been.

     

    Alice-“ I bet they haven’t gotten out of bed for the past two days!”

    Bette-“You have a one track mind Alice.”

    Alice-“What I was just saying.”

    Tina-“im sure they will turn up soon guys.”

    Dana-“ I am just happy everything worked out for them.”

    They all nod in agreement.

    Alice-“Do you think we should stop over just to make sure they are coming up for air?”

    Dana-“Alice!” smacking her lightly on the shoulder.

    Alice-“what?! I am just concerned!!”

    Kit-“is that what you call it?” Bringing everyone a drink.

    Alice-“ no Kit, that isn’t what I call it. I am really concerned.”

    Dana-“ I will admit it was odd not seeing either of them at the club last night.”

    Alice-“ See I am not the only one concerned!” With more excitement the necessary.

    Jenny-“ Just give her some time. She has waited a year for this to happen.”

    Alice-“ oh, did I just hear Jennifer fucking Schechter making some sense? You guys must be right, I am losing my mind.”

     

    Comments

    1. awesome chap!!!! sam’s got some nerve showing up looking for them, the gang should know what she did so she doesn’t pull that crap..glad mercedes is gunna give shane a chance

    2. Great update. We need a little more drama to prove that Shane is for real and that Carmen does trust her completely. That she won’t fly off the handle should Shane come home late. I was thinking maybe something similar to the real estate agent scene but this time Shane does the right thing. Thank you😘

    3. I think that Carmen’s mom should have noticed her eye and Carmen should have told her what Sam did so that she would know that Sam is not who she thought she was. What ever Shane did, she never hit Carmen. All of their friends should be put on notice about Sam in case she show up again.

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