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A Long Walk – 2
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"Oh, come on. You thought it was a lobotomy, too."
"I’m pleading the fifth."
Tina smiled. "What about you?"
"What about me?"
"Seeing anyone?"
"No, not really."
"Oh, right," Tina grinned. "Was the pronoun supposed to be in plural?"
"Fuck you too, T." Bette retorted.
Tina laughed. She glanced around. "Geez, what does someone have to do to get a cup of coffee around here?"
Bette smiled, taking it all in. Tina, the playful, verbal, happy-go-lucky version she once knew was back.
"You weren’t there when The Planet closed down." Bette said suddenly. Tina glanced at her.
"It seemed kind of pointless, to take the cross-country trip." Tina shrugged. "It’s just one in a long list of things I missed out on."
"Like?"
"Like your gallery opening," Tina pointed out. "Congratulations about that, by the way."
"Thanks." Bette looked at her. "Why weren’t you there?"
"Yeah, and revisit all those memories of the first Bette Porter Gallery," Tina said dryly. "No thanks, Bette."
"Admit it, those weren’t bad memories." Bette paused, then looked at Tina with concern. "Were they?"
Tina looked at her, but was interrupted by a waitress.
After placing glasses of water in front of the two seated women, the waitress smiled at Bette, "Can I have your order?"
Tina turned. "Yeah. Mocha, and feel free to throw in as much espresso as you want. And I’ll have a slice of the chocolate mousse."
Bette smiled at the waitress. "Cappuccino."
"Anything to eat? Our cakes are pretty good." The waitress offered.
"No, thank you." Bette replied.
Tina watched in amusement as the waitress slowly turned to leave. "Well, well. There’s no shame."
"What?" Bette asked.
"How did she know we weren’t together?"
"You didn’t order for me." Bette replied.
"Please."
"You’ll be amazed, sometimes it’s really that simple."
"People at The Planet always knew we were together."
"Could’ve been the way you were always practically molesting me." Bette said matter-of-factly.
"Haha." Was Tina’s elegant reply. "But, tell me, isn’t she your type?"
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I still can’t believe Tina is with Helena again? Is it kind of camouflage thing?
Tina is on a fishing trip and the bait is Angelica and the fish to be caught is Bette “Sexy As Hell, Knock’em Dead” Porter. Tina wants to be the one Bette comes home to again. All is right with the world. Let it happen, please.
Why do I feel like Tina’s got something up her sleeve?
Delightful. I love it :)
God, your good. Bette, please say no. Come on Tina tell her your miss her, and let go of Helena. More please.
You’re so sly…Funny story, and fun, too. Keep up the good work.
Well, Dainty beat me to it. Tina is so on a fishing trip. And now, Bette would arch an eyebrow at her and smirk…LOL!! Once again, love the banter between them. At least they’re friends. Sigh! But hey, gotta start…um, restart somewhere, right?! Looking forward to the next one.
Helena ain’t cuttin’ it, is she? Ha ha ha ha. It’s STILL the American Century!
I’m in awe of your writing. Kudos :-)
wonderful, as always.
Would definately love to see another one of your posts, soon!!!
absolutely delightful! now i can sleep in peace. i was getting a little depressed after reading lastkid’s exquisitely painful chapter. hmm.. wonder whether this thing with helena is just tina’s fib to protect herself??? lol at the grudge reference:) thanks!
I’m liking where I think this is going….great stuff, gentle, wistful amd maybe hopeful???? looking forward to your next instalment soon please.
This is a great story…well except for the engaged to helena part.
I think Tina would like Bette to come to NY and stay for longer than a week, namely like forever… I love it.
that was great. that grudge 2 comment was funny as hell. Tina seems so free in this story. I hope to see Tina try to win Bette back instead of the other way around.
Tina’s dating women….AGAIN!? and she didn’t consider get back with Bette? alas…well..thanks for the writing
woohoo~ still love your post the best.
A fun read. Always sharp, well written and flowing – how do you come up with this stuff? You must be a popular dinner guest.
“This cake’s good.””I know. Give it back.” LOL at that and the grudge refrence.. Oh I can never have enough of your writing.. I don’t care if Tina wants to get back with Bette or not.. As long as they are being civil to one another, I’ll be reading..
have I mentioned how happy you make me? Write any story…I will be waiting for it to post
you go Tina and get your woman back!!! This is when Bette answers ‘no’, Tina says ‘hmmmm’ then Bette goes to Angie’s first week at school and then bammm! B&T together! Post soon please!!!
betty needs to read the signals in front of her and not be blind like she used to be i love the post i love tina in this new playfull way
Your writing is so delighful! Why can’t tina be like this on the show! The banter bewteen the two is great. I am on the fence about them hooking up. You know last night I watched before sunset and though of this story as you said it inspired you to write this. So I am wondering if you plan to have the same ending as well?? Anyways post soon!
Okay so how serious are Tina and Helena – exactly? I heart Bette and Tina.
This is good….
Fantastic!
Tiff Duke I love you writings because you eventually work the ladies back together. I never cared for the Bette and Helena mix and I definately do not care for the Tina and Helena mix. Nothing agains Helena just not with the ladies. Even with my distaste of Tina’s mate, I do love the story and especially your wtiting skills. Also thanks for continuing Chandelier.
This is good and like it. This is seem Tina want to get back with Bette again beacuse she asked Bette if she was seeing anyone. OK post soon please, thanks!
incredible! incredible! i like it so much! Tina definitly wants to be the someone Bette is dating! i hope so too!
fantastic! you keep me sitting on the edge whenever i’m reading your dialogue. and i’ll always hope the end of the chapter doesnt come so soon. please post soon :)
Just keep writing about Bette and Tina. Tina asked Bette twice if she was seeing anyone, Maybe Tina would like to be that someone again thanks
“You know I’d rather have rectal cancer than sit through that crap.””So says the woman who watched The Grudge Two.” LMAO! I can’t tell you enough how much I enjoy the way you write dialogue for these two whether it’s serious discussion or witty banter.
never enuff of ur writing tiffy
bette, please say NO and then tina can dump helena and they’ll get back together…it’s nice to see them at ease with each other, joking and stuff but love is still there, they just need to get back to that point…as usual love your dialogs
This is so damn good….