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A Love of My Own #6
Chapter 6
By six oclock, Tina was exhausted. It amazed her the way Kristen and the boys seemed to have boundless amounts of energy. They decided that the all you can eat seafood restaurant would be the only thing that filled the boys seemingly bottomless stomachs. Kristen wanted to continue the conversation, but stilled try to keep the boys in the dark.
Codes were the only way.
Kristen: So, when do you think you will have some hot chocolate again? Kristen asked with a smile as she dug into her shrimp.
Tina: Uh, I dont know. Maybe the hot chocolate will call when it wants a little marshmallow in it. Tina cheered herself for her own cleverness.
Kristen: Maybe the marshmallow should go looking for the hot chocolate. It would save some time. And make things a lot easier for the marshmallow to get eaten. Kristen then laughed at her own deviltry.
Tina: You are so sick. I think the marshmallow should just lay low and wait for the hot chocolate to just call her.
Jamie: Hot chocolate never calls me. I want some.
Jason: Doofus, they arent talking about real hot chocolate. They are talking about the lady that Tina is going out with. Jason said with authority as he pushed a handful of fried clams into his mouth.
Kristen and Tina were speechless. What they thought had been clever dialogue, now appeared idiotic in the eyes of 8-year old superiority.
Jamie: Thats wrong maybe Tina just wants some hot chocolate. Anyways she cant date a girl. Thats just weird.
Jason: No it is not. It just means shes like Mikeys two moms. Are you gonna marry her, your hot chocolate lady? Jason asked Tina pointedly.
Tina: Umm, I dont know. Would that be a problem, Jason? Tina asked. Now very tickled by the conversation.
Jason: Only if you do it in a church. Cause they dont like that.
Jamie: Yeah, they are mean like that. But, I dont think she should. Cause girls are icky.
Kristen: Where did you guys learn this stuff? Kristen asked amazed at the knowledge of her children.
Jason: TV. Jason succinctly said.
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Hey I’m just catching up about this Amazing Story WHOA! six chapter and I’m still reading LOL! Thanks for that thats was so Wonderful I always love to read the BTW BEGINNING It’s really Great Please post soon.
Just read all those lovely chapters you posted. VERY nice story! Yeah,B/T beginnings are always great. Nice to see another slightly different slant on it. I like the way you are writing the characters. Looking forward to more.
Wonderful to read your excellent begiining – the 6 chapters really flowed – so sensuous and sexy and compelling. Hoping for more. thanks,
Sorry to comment just now, but after reading the first chapter I just had to read all the chapters! this is an amazing story, I love it! post soon please! I can’t wait to see what will happen!
i love this story, wow 6 chapters in one go…i must be in heaven. please post again soon.
Ok is Bette going to let Tina take care of her? Next chapter. By the way you are realy spoiling us with all this chapters and i am loving it. THANKS
OMG This story is amazing! I’m in love with it!! Thank you!!
Thank you for posting so many chapters at the first go. It so amazes me that the chemistry of Jennifer Beals and Laurel Holloman is so tangible even in all these different fanfics. I really enjoyed reading 6 chapters and look forward to many more from you.
Very nice pacing to this series. All of the chapters flow quite nicely. The revelation of Kristen’s kids was just priceless, leave it to kids to know more than you think they do. I liked the visual that I got of Cafe Du Monde, very appealing. Their chemistry is sweet, shy, alluring and elecric all at the same time. Please continue.
These six chapters have been really great! I love B&T beginnings. Looking forward to future chapters.
Nice start….Enjoying your story….
This is great. Please post again soon.
Nice installments. I take it Remy and his family are Creole? Beignets are WONDERFUL!!! THe fact that Kristen’s 8 yr old knew what they were talking about was funny as hell…………
Please continue
Great story just read them all please continue I love it!!!!
well after reading all 6 chapters… you know what i want more… love your story… please continue
Great start. Thanks for all the chapters.
The hot chocolate code talk was too funny.
I’m hooked and wanting more.
I can’t believe you posted so many chapters in one day! This story is really great, I hope you post again soon!
dont stop now :D I am LOVING This & am craving the next bits. haha. I have to go to work soon & im gonna spend da next 8 hours daydreaming :P
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Beautiful Work! Bravo Bravo <3 Nikki
ive just read ALL your chapters and i love it im a complete sucker for a Bette and Tina beginning and this one is so good looking forward to lots more i can actually feel the heat between these two great writting thanks
Hi Oaron! I just read all 6!!! You know what? I could read 60 and it still wouldn’t be enough! Your story is so inviting and warm–I love it! Thank you=)
j’adore le chocolat… et ton histoire!! post soon please
this b&t begining stories were great…..i hope u continue and post soon cause its goin very good!
Hi! I really hope you will continue this story , we love it pls!!!PoST SOON
Thanks for posting so many chapters. Great start and please keep ’em coming!
wow 6 chapters great story. couldnot stop reading. keep up the great writing. B&T loving!!!
This is good and let see how Tina gonna take care of Bette. Post soon, thanks!
tks for the story…love the banter with Kristen/Tina…tks for the chpts…feel’n spoiled!!! tks
OMG. As the others stated, thank you posting so many chapters at once. I got momentarily spoiled, went for the next one and it wasn’t there. Don’t worry I’ll be waiting patiently for the next update. Love this story.
Really, Really, Really like your story so far. So fun to get to read six chapters all at once. I hope you have many, many more in store for all of us that are already hooked! Well done.
i just finish to read at all. and i just wanna ask for more..lol..i never satisfied..lol..great story i hope see more in a while..thanks
juz caught up with all the SIX chapters! *phew* but it was fun readin it… post soon~ !!
Nurse tina’s here to make you all better
Oaron, awesome story!! It’s soo great of you to post six chapters in a row! Thanks for sharing it with us. Can’t wait to read more from you.
I just finishing catching up on this wonderful story! Your writing is warm and inviting, and I love your take on our favorite girls. Thanks so much for posting so many chapters in a row!
What a treat six chapters….wow…everyone of them was great.
Thank you.
still catching up but still enjoying.