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A Means To An End 6
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A Means To An End 6
It’s such a tired game
Will it ever stop?
How will this all play out?
Out of sight, out of mind….
Ch 11
“So what’s so important?”
Carmen.
My love.
My life.
The thing that keeps me alive. And I call her a thing because these feelings I have for her are beyond anything resembling normal. What I have to say to her is so incredible so incredibly my fault: it’s not even the old Carmen’s fault, it’s mine and it’s not funny anymore. A past come back from a love …..from a love long ago and dead. Might as well knuckle up and tell her.
She is gonna be so pissed at me.
“Hey…uh ok. So ….when I got back from my tests I….I got a call…yeah. I got a call from the kidnapper…”
“Oh my god…..is he…ok? Is our baby ok…Shane oh my god we gotta tell Tina and Spender….”
“Armstrong………….. he just looks like Spender….”
‘Shane we ….’
“No!”
“Shane?”
“Look we can’t trust The Feds anymore….”
“Shane what are you talking about?”
“They froze our assets…they think we did something to Marco and that we aren’t being honest….”
“Shane look at me….what else….there is something you aren’t telling me….what did the kidnapper say?”
“He told me his name…..he told me how we can try to find him. He wants to kill me; he wants revenge for his loss.”
“What?”
“His name is Conrad….”
“Conrad? What kind of kidnapper is named Conrad?”
“…………….’
“Conrad…..what?”
“Conrad Voynow….is um a ….I know who he is…”
“You know the man who took our baby?’
“We never met…..um….I was sleeping with his wife….back before I knew you…..”
Carmen has a look that is hard to read. Somewhere between anger and fear. She is afraid of the answer. The cursing and yelling I was expecting….they weren’t here. instead she takes my hand in hers. She is trying to reassure me. trying to tell me with smooth physical contact that it’s not my fault. She looks me in the eye. Kisses my hand. I can’t look at her. it’s my fault.
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I love how supportive Carmen is being but I am anxious to find out why! Love the update and ca’t wait for them to find their boy!
Wow, this is where the action begins right? Not that there hasn’t been enough of things going on in your story, never!! But bring it on! I also like how you give those hints of what is going to happen, makes me feel like I’m sitting on needels here! And I feel VERY honored by your dedication….thank you SO much!! Just letting you know my opinion =)
Very well written, that phone call conversation was very realistic.
Sooo happy Carmen didn’t freak out & blame Shane. Great chap.
I love how you surprise me with your twists…Conrad was Dana’s husbnad, Carmen not blaming Shane….and your foreshadowing, all the things that keep me yearning for more updates!!
I really like this story. Very intense and well-written. Great imagery and symbolism. The dialog is awesome too. Great update! PPS!
damn.. is all i can say.. this story just keeps getting better and better… great update and please continue soon.. oh and i liked the phone call very realistic..:P
the dramaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa
I never want this story to end!