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a meeting at the beach
As bette parked the car trying to do her best considering her head was practically hanging out the window, due to her 2 best friends puffing there way through there ever so huge joint, the car was like a dutch oven….
“geez guys do yous really need that ? we are going to the beach if u havent yet noticed, and relaxation comes with the package u know?”
“yea Dana we know that it just gives the scenery a different kinda look, ya health freak!” alice said
“health freak…ah come on give me some then” dana stated
“are u sure dane u know it will hit ya pretty hard scenes u dont do it and all” shane said ~although this could b a laugh~ she thought to herself
” I can handle it” . alice and shane smirked at each other….”ok here ya go” they were watching intently as dana drew back and held it in her lungs for awhile before exhaling….. dana coughed, placed her head back and in one word “*****” had summed up what shane had just said…they all started to laugh……”hey bette what about you?” alice said….” you guys know I dont do that *****”………”BORING” the three others said in unison. “do u think yous are going manage to help me unpack this stuff?” “piece of cake” alice said….
the crew started to unpack…making there way down to the sand they picked there spot and started to welcome the sun to tan there bodies…..Alice layed down here towel, stripped of her clothes to reveal here skimpy bikini she had picked up yesterday…
“god alice looking at u in that bikini makes me see u in a different light” shane said eyebrows raised…
“yea shane thats the idea I want the people to notice me…know what I mean”…. “Im sure they will ” shane said thinking ~if only she wasnt my best buddy, or is it just the pot?~
everyone was in there bikinis laying out on there towels, danas head was spinning trying to focus on the surfers riding on the waves but it was all a haze at the moment…..
Shane was scanning the beach trying to suss out any ***** young thing that could possibly occupy her day, beach ***** was one of her favourites, although any ***** was good to her, she had turned over on to her stomach laying her head on the towel looking to the right side of the beach.
~good move~ she thought as a few feet away were three beautiful women.
A red head with nice ***** and an arse to die for, a tomboyish one with short bleached blonde hair which was messed up in a ***** way, and a sweet looking one with honey blonde shoulder length wavy hair, shane thought her best bet would be the tomboy as her gaydar signalled the other two as straight. As confident as she was she knew she could probably have all three, but hey the easier the better she thought..
” hey u ***** blondie!!” alice shouted as a group of surfer guys walked past, surfboards under there arms…they looked around.
” yea u with the tight arse!!” “ALICE !!” dana yelled, “what dane well he does, imagine holding on to them buns”…..
“its not that, Im just feeling abit paranoid at the moment and the less attention drawn this way the better” ~ I should of stayed away from that weed~ …. alice just gave dana a laugh jumped up and headed for the guys, she wanted to learn how to surf and the blondie had said yes so she was gone in an instant chatting him up along the way…..
Bette watched as alice departed “theres no slowing her down is there…whats she taken today??”
“a few prozac, oh yea and some ritalin shed swiped from here nephew…its not bad actually cheap speed..” shane had said all this while still eying out the tomboy that had made a few quick glances at shane..”whats so intriguing shane?” bette said…”look to your right bette and you will see where my interest is lying at the moment”.. bette put her book down sat up and looked in the direction where shane was looking… “oh ok now I see” she said eying out the three women, but the one that had caught her eye was the one with the honey blonde hair ~ wow shes breathtaking~ bette thought…. “what do you think bette reckon I should go introduce myself?” “why not shane it is what u seem to do best”…..
Dana still in a slight haze and not really with reality at the moment said “what are yous talking about” ” dont worry dane just lay back and mellow out u will be right soon”…”yea sweet Im feeling abit hungry though” “ha ha munchies” shane smiled….
Shane got up ~here goes nothing~ she thought, walking over to the three woman… ” hi ladies how are u enjoying the day” shane said in her low sensual voice….the tomboy was the first one to reply “its great down here, we are new to the area and heard this was one of the best beaches so we thought we would come check it out” “yep well ladies yous have come to the right place” shane said without taking her eyes of the tomboy… “well hey my name is shane anyhow, Im born and breed here”……….”nice to meet u shane Im michelle, this is stevie(pointing to the red head) and this is tina”…”hi ” the other two ladies said……
“hey shane scenes u are a local, we wanted to hit the town tonight just wondering wheres a good place to go?”
~gets even better~ shane thought…”well actually the girls and I are going out to a place called milk tonight, if yous like to join us?”
“that would be great!!”…”hey heres my number give me a call later and I will give directions”
“thanx if the people around here are as sweet as u I think Im going to love it here” michelle said whilst giving shane a flirty wink…
TBC
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p says
i’ll be waiting, that’s for sure.
lena23 says
btw, i didn’t rate this a three, someone got to it before me! don’t look at the ratings, read the comments instead! :)
Gargy says
This story is diffintly quite a build-up…….however, it’s not quite in squence with the show………oh, fuck it………..write what you want! ;D 5-stars
moi says
cool another new beginning BnT story. keep going foxx
foxx says
?- im from australia so im not familiar with beaches in L.A so didnt mention one… yea im a shocking writer but hope to get better with time… thanx for reading and comments though :)
lena23 says
nice start. a tiny bit hard to follow kinda, but nice start to BnT without the gallery meeting. please continue. :)
Anna says
Very good start. you have peaked my interest. Hope to see another chapter soon. Thanks for sharing your story with us, and welcome to the reviews.
Shelley says
i think its a great start. it doesnt matter that its not exactly like the show, its original we all saw the show so its cool to see them in different story loves.
Brandy says
I really enjoyed this, keep up the good writing.
Brandy says
I really enjoyed this, keep up the good writing.
nzgrl says
nice to see another beginning B&T story. It doesn’t really matter if your version is different from the show. I’ll keep reading.
liz says
love the beginning b&t stories. no anger, just confusion and emotions.
techgal says
“beach sex was one of her favourites, although any sex was good to her” – you’ve certainly got Shane down! I noticed how she went directly for the possible (Tomboy), while Bette was attracted to the quest (straight girl).
Thanks for the new story!
foxx says
yeh I know its not quite in sequence with show, thought Id go for somethin different yep fuck it as u said ha ha ha… thanx for comments, but as I said I am a shocking writer so dont expect to much :)
Linda says
This looks like the
start of a wonderful adventure
for Bette and Tina.
I can’t wait to read more.Please post soon!