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A new and different B & T beginning CH. 6
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Bette: I know Lara………and Im sorry for not telling you…but I have only seen her a few times and last night we talked, and instantly I knew, she was the one…its like I have known her for years. I have been waiting for someone like her to come along, Lara……she complets me…its like she can see right through me…how I feel and what I want to say
Lara: Ohhh Bette, are you falling in love (Lara smiling at Bette)….ok, Ill talk to her……I have something to make up for. Besides I want to see the McHotty, that has taken your breath away, girl
Bette: Nope, youll stay away Lara….Ill talk to Tina myself. Ok, give me my phone back…..I have to go to forensic to see what the post-morthem says about the victim. Can you run through the names on the list, to see if there is any connexion
Lara: Ok, Boss…see you later…take care now
While Bette went of to see the post-morthem and speak with the forensic. Lara had a little plan of her own. She called up Alice, explained the situation to her and Alice gave her the details of where Tina lived. Lara was on her way to Tinas to apologize.
Lara stood outside Tinas appartment and rang the doorbell, waiting for someone to open the door. comming Tina said, as Charlot ran towards the door. Tina opened the door and Lara just stood there.
Tina: Can I help you?
Lara: Yes, I guess you can. My name is Lara and Im with the police – LAPD, is your name Tina?
Tina: Has something happend…….OMG Bette
Lara: No, no, no…please dont assume anything…please calm down…Bette is fine and shes the reason Im here. You see, I answered Bettes phone, when you called her…I made the joke about being her better half. I just thought it was Alice calling her…Im sorry, I didnt mean to cause any trouble between you two. Bette is really a very nice person, once you get to know her……please say something, Tina
Tina: Why dont you come in, Lara
Lara stepped inside and saw Charlot. Is she yours, Tina Lara asked. Yes, she is…her name is Charlot and she is four now
Tina and Lara talked for about an hour, then Laras cell rang. Excuse me, Tina
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wow so someone is killing tina co-workers?? so does it have to do with tina?? and will tina be on this persons list??
Great chapter. This story it’s getting more interesting and excited, love it. Post soon, thanks!
K
Love it as always. Very interesting. Can’t wait for more.
Great chapter. You know i’m loving it. So cool with Bette being a cop and all. Hours suck. LOL..
Megga- rutro, watch out Tina, everyone in your building’s being murdered! I love this story, please post again soon!
Just finished all the chapters and love the story. Nice twist with the careers. Keep posting.
Wery good I like it…. Hej Trolle faktisk sÃ¥ er jeg tidligere jyde men bor nu pÃ¥ fyn. Din historie er helt vild god sååå keep going ;-)
I am really enjoying this version of the tina and bette story because they are in two totally different careere feilds please post again soon I can’t whit to see what happens next
Just got caught up. Great story!! Love it!! You just keep getting better and better.
POST ASAP
I like the way you are incorporating a murder mystery with this love story. Thanks.
Oh my God, this is so crazy and fun! I love it!! Damn, good job, woman!! Hey Trolle, maybe if you kill off, Tina.. I think that will shock everyone, eh? (lol) Okay, you know I was just kidding. :) Don’t hurt Tina… but I do want to see Bette save Tina… like in one of those movies, where the hero come and saves the girl at the right time, and they go off and make hot passionate love…. Though, I think we’ll have to wait for that, right?
Trolle i loved it! It’s just so so sweet n i liked Lara too hehe she;s funny n sweet. Thank you!!!i will definitely read your next post!!! hope that comes soon