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A New Beginning: Chapter 8
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"I already told you. I’m going out with Bette"
"Here we go with this. I thought I told you that you couldn’t go"
"You can tell me what I can and cannot do. You are not my father. I’m pretty sure I left him in South Carolina" Tina said walking past him and into the living room
"Not killing him is easier said than done" she thought as she checked her watch
5 minutes
BUZZ
"Thank god. Saved by the bell" She thought. She walked over to the intercom
"Hello?" Tina asked
"It’s Bette"
"I’ll be out in a sec" Tina said. She walked over to the couch and picked up her purse and started towards the front door
"Your not going anywhere" Eric said standing in front of the door. Tina looked him directly in the eye. She leaned her head to the side and raised an eyebrow.
Eric stood there for a second and then moved out her way
"Tina if you walk out that door we are over!" Eric said as Tina opened the door
"Don’t wait up" Tina saidas she walked out the door.
Bette~
Bette stood up against her car as she waited for Tina to come out. She had prepared herself to see Tina but not well enough because when Tina walked out, she forgot how to breathe. Bette thought that she had died and gone to heaven. Bette took off her sunglasses to get a better look at her. Tina was a vision dressed in all white. A flowing skirt that stopped just below her knees, a halter top and sandels that tied around her legs. Her blond hair curled gently over her shoulders. Bette’s jaw dropped
"She’s an angel" Bette thought
Tina made her way to the car and noticed a faraway look on Bette’s face
"What? Is something wrong?" Tina asked
"No, everything is fine. You look beautiful" Bette said
Why Thank you Bette, you don’t look so bad yourself" Tina replied in a voice dripped with southern comfort
"Does this mean I have a true Southern Belle on my hands today?" Bette asked
"Why Ms. Porter are you trying to imply that I’m anything less?" Tina responded with the accent as thck as ever
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1st brb ;)
OMG YOU TEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
now Tibette_Portard, you can hardly say that fair to leave us poor old readers hanging on the “teasing” cliff hanger. I sure hope that your posting the remainder of this chapter real soon, like within the next few hours ;-)No excellent pps
wht a tease… ok get them back to bette’s house… i like this… PPS
Welcome back. May I please have the chocolate cake? I love Savage Garden, to bad they broke up because they were good. Man oh man, when it rains it thunders and rains.
Good chapter. Yeah such a tease my friend and please post soon. B&T are cute and Im with AmandaMG, can’t wait to see more!
That was so not right. Hey, maybe they can go hang out at Bette’s, you know since they’ll have to get out of those wet clothes.
aw, what perfect timing!
Man, Tina sure has a set on her in this story. Eric doesn’t stand a chance. But gotta say, plain mean where you ended it, what has gotten into these writers and their love of the gut wrenching, cut you off right here and suffer? LOL…PPS
Okay this is soo unfair yes just like life,but to leave us hangin!p.p.s.
Great story! B & T 4 ever! :D Please post more soon!
TEASE!!!!!! TEASE!!!!!! Great Chapter Thanks
THUNDER, R U SURE IT’S NOT JUST TEIR COMBINED HEARTBEATS? ANYWAYZ NICE, MORE
Damn. Right before the good part too. Well, now they will need to go somewhere and dry off. Maybe Bette’s?