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A Night in the D — Chapter 17
“Oh god,” Bette exhaled loudly, falling forward against Tina’s body, one hand still clutching a nipple, which she fingered gently, her breath slowing down, her awareness increasing.
“You liked that,” Tina said, smiling through Bette’s hair, which covered her face, tickling her.
“Did I ever.” Bette raised herself, smiling down at Tina, who looked a total, ravishing mess. “You must be exhausted,” she whispered.
“I am,” Tina said, her smile quieter than before. “I really am.”
Bette swung one leg to the side and managed to stand, disengaging herself carefully so as not to hurt Tina. She looked fragile, however hard she’d just fucked her. And Bette had come hard.
“That was amazing,” she said, reaching to pull Tina up with her. They stood together before leaning into a soft kiss. Tina’s bra was undone, but she wasn’t free of it, and Bette reached to slide it off the arm where it hung, limply. The white shirt was a memory, surrendered to the floor.
“You look delicious,” Bette said, kissing her again, though keeping her tongue in check. She wanted to pay attention to Tina, who she’d just ridden like there was no tomorrow, and about which she was feeling slightly self-conscious. Tina noticed the flicker in her eyes.
“You’re the one who’s delicious,” she said, smiling hazily.
Bette melted. “Thank you,” she said. “You’re sweet.”
Tina frowned. “I’m down on sweet, you know that.”
“But you are sweet,” Bette said again, gently taking her hand and pulling her towards the unmade bed, before thinking twice and turning to the other double, still pristine. With her free hand she pulled back the covers, fluffed the pillow, then fought not to laugh when she turned to see Tina topless, daintily trying to smooth down her skirt, which had clung to her thighs as she’d stood.
“Tina, no,” Bette breathed, stopping her. “Don’t do that.”
“What?”
“Don’t cover yourself.”
Tina blushed. She wasn’t too tired after all. “I just-”
“I know what you just,” Bette interrupted, her gaze languorous. “And I just don’t want you to.”
Tina managed to return the look, unspeaking.
Bette smiled. “Here, lie down. I want you to sleep.”
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(62 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
but i guess she won’t be able to sleep. who could sleep with Bette Porter in the room? even after 24 hours without sleep ;)
More Please!
this is just PHEW — amazing and i love it so much
i think bette should sleep with her, this story is so awesome, this chapter was cute ad i can see a glimpse of hope for B&T
Will Bette run away before Tina wakes up? Please update again soon.
I am just SO inlove with this story! OK, Bette, climb in there with Tina and hold her while she sleeps. That’s just too sweet. Great writing, you’re doing. Definitely a ‘must’ that you continue. Please? With brownsuga on top?
God -this is soooo f-ing awesome!! What amazing storytelling! Please post again soon!
Can’t wait for more of this superb story. Please post very soon.
I am glad they waited. I know, I know they didn’t exactly wait. And I agree that they COULDN’t wait – not after how you led them there. But with that animal desire out of the way and some sleep (togther, hopefully), the momentum for something more momentous will build again in you hands, I am sure. I will wait to see where you take us – and them – next. Thanks.
I hope Bette doesn’t run off while Tina is sleeping. Please post the next chapter soon!
Amazeing as always! just read the last 2 chapters and to add to amazeing sensual and very hot AHHH ill sleep better tonight…more please
I love this story. Yet another take on how they met and I hope that Tina will go to California. Both of them have already understood that they do not want to say goodbye to each other. This has been really HOT so far and I can hardly wait to see where you take them on their journey and us watching them. Thanks for the post.
Aw, that was sweet of Bette. Now she needs to get in and spoon Tina and they can both rest and then wake up in eachother’s arms and get all romanticky. Hmm…your story makes me like some anxious kid…”and then..and then!”… whee! I love it.
I can’t wait for Tina to wake up…luvr this story continues to pull me in and I just can’t get enough. Thanks
cute
MORE MORE!
Amazing…really love this story. Tina’s exhausted and still manages to leave Bette speechless. Bette should get in bed with Tina. Both need rest for what is about to happen. Please continue.
tease tease tease away cuz im gonna keep coming back for more!!
Love this ,Bette just wanted Tina to rest. Hope it keeps snows for awhile. thanks