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    A Night in the D

    Story written on December 10, 2005 by luvrgirl.
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    Bette, smoking hot in the D. Tina can’t help but notice.

     

    “Oh I don’t think you’re without grace,” Tina said skeptically, her eyes meeting Bette’s.

     

    Bette laughed, genuinely charmed. “Wellon occasion,” she said, grinning. “Usually when I’m overly stressed. I ***** a lot.”

     

    “Do you?” Tina asked with feigned shock, not quite believing she’d dare, but stuck alone at the desk all night and unable to resist the distraction.

                                                  

    “I do,” Bette said, narrowing her eyes. “And you’re cheeky.”

     

    Tina felt a small thrill at the appraising look Bette was giving her. “On occasion,” she said, grinning herself this time. “Usually when I’m bored.”

     

    “Ah,” Bette said, nodding. “Just you minding the store?”

     

    By this time Bette had retrieved her credit card from her wallet and finally stepped to the desk, a few feet away from Tina, who stood directly across from her. Tina felt her breathing grow shallow as she took in the dark curls, the perfect skin, the long slender fingers. She hoped she could keep talking, never mind the repartee.

     

    “God, you’re gorgeous,” she breathed out and Bette’s eyes widened.

     

    “God yourself,” she said, laughing at the blonde, who was turning more pink by the second. Bette suddenly became more aware of each detail of the white shirt and the creamy white skin, now flushed, peeking from behind it. “Umthank you?”

     

    “You’re welcome,” Tina said, laughing nervously to herself and turning to the computer, eager to relieve the tension she felt at Bette so close to her. “I’m just saying,” she said, playing it off lightly. “I’m not surprised the cab driver wouldn’t leave you alone.”

     

    Bette felt a witty reply building and stopped it, choosing instead to stare at Tina, who was turned away from her. This woman is flirting with me, she thought, I’m not imagining it. She noted Tina’s apparent nervousness and in moments the silence got heavy. Tina looked back, somehow feeling Bette’s eyes upon her. “Bette Porter, nonsmoking double, room 305,” she said with a forced brightness, handing the key card across the desk.

                                      

    Bette was in Detroit, all night, only recently irritated and probably about to be again, and this girl in front of her, stupid idea or not, was looking so good.

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    10. What a great start! I would love to have met Tina behind a hotel desk when I travelled on busy! Sheesh! Really looking forward to reading more of this! Great start!

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