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A Rocky Start, Ch 1 (B&T Beginning)
Story written on January 11, 2006 by coffey_girl.
Alice’s House
Dana:”OK guy i just got off the phone with Alice,
she should be here in about five mintues.”
Dana says as she walks into Alice’s lounge where
Shane, Carmen,Jenny and Tina sit drinking wine
and talking endlessly,catching up on what
happened in their lives over the past week.
At Dana’s comment Shane replies:
Shane: “i still cant believe she got to go to
New Zealand for two months, to interview
Peter Jackon about’King Kong’. Maybe i should
give up hairdressing and become a reporter.”
Carmen:” no way i wouldn’t be able to handle
you being away so long it would be torture. God
Dana how do can you stand Alice being away so
long? it must be horrible not seeing her
everyday.”
Dana:” Actually its quite nice at times,because
you all know how Alice can go on and on and on
non-stop. even though i do miss her i actually
enjoy the piece and quiet.”
At that statement, a smile forms on everyones
faces knowing exactly what she meant by
piece and quiet. knowing full well that Alice
never shuts up.
Just then the front door opens and Alice shouts:
Alice: “Dana i’m home.” AS everyone heard it
was alice they all quickly got into their hiding
positions in the lounge ready to give Alice a
good surprise welcome home party.
Since Alice got no response from Dana she kept on
calling out:
Alice: Ok Dana, you can’t hid its been two
long months since we have done it and right know
im willing to do it any where even on the
bathroom floor. im fucking horny, now where the
hell are you?
At Alice’s words, Dana turns a bright shade of
red as she looks over to see the reactions of her
friends who are still hiding but finding it hard
not to burst out in laughter at alices comment.
Alice then makes her way through the house,
looking in every room trying to find Dana until
she finally enters the lounge.As she does
everyone jumps up from their hiding places and
screams “SURPRISE” Alice just stands at the
enterance of lounge with her mouth wide open
as her friends come over and greet her with
kisses and hugs. After they all greet Alice
Tina then says:
Tina: “Maybe we should leave Alice and Dana alone
today, seeing as Alice is obviously so ‘fucking
horney’” everyone bursts out laughing at that
statement and Alice suddenly remembers her
earlier comment and turns bright red. Alice
though quickly reclaims her confidence
by saying:
Alice: “No its ok you guys can stay and watch us
at it if you like.” the room fills with laughter
at alice’s words and Dana once again turns an
even brighter shade of red. Alice sees this and
quickly gives her an apologetic hug and kiss.
Few hours later
The rest of the night had gone smoothly as the
gang listened to Alice as she filled them
in on her trip to New Zealand. she talked about
how she went bungee jumping, rock climbing,
hiking, and swimming in the many beaches all
around New Zealand. she also told them of this
women she met there. At the first mention of this
women Dana begain to get jelious and Alice saw
this and quickly said that they where just
good friends. Dana then realised that Alice
would never do anything to hurt her and forgot
about her worries. Alice then went on:
Alice: “Her name is Bette Porter and shes
half Maori (Maori are a race that inhabited NZ
before the europeans.) so her skin is of mocha
color because her father was maori(dark skin)and
her mother was English(light skin). Anyway shes
really into art and has decided to move to L.A
to open her own art Gallery. she
arrives in L.A tomorrow and i thought i
could introduce you guys to her this Friday at
‘MILK’.”
Everyone agreed to the idea, all wanting to know
more about this new comer to their group. one in
particular being Tina who just from hearing the
name ‘Bette Porter’ became automatically hooked
to finding out more about this mystery women.
TBC… (i know it short but i would like some
feed back in order to see if im doing ok then
i will continue)
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Good start. Post again soon darlin.
You go coffey girl, looking forward to your next read.
I totally think you should run with this, especially if Bette has an accent. :P~~~ I’ll be looking forward to the next chapter!
Please continue I would like to see where you take it. I am sure it will be great, after all with B&T you can’t go wrong.lol. Post soon.
This was a great start! Looking forward to the next chapter!
Yeah, I like to see all sorts of BT start. Please continue.
Go girl like it
Fine start. Please post soon and make it longer.
Of course you have to continue. Is Bette going to have a cute accent??
Always enjoy another B&T begining so go for it!!!
Good start…please continue.
great start! continue
any BnT beginnings are welcomed with open arms=)….post soon
This is good start and please continue, thanks!
Girl you are doing more than okay….this is great and I was so glad to see you doing a B&T beginning. Please post soon and have a great weekend :o))
ok start