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    A Thin Line – Chpt 2

    Story written on March 15, 2006 by zheese.
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    Alice spys on Helena & Bette

    “So, Bette, what auspicious occasion prompts the invitation for this clandestine assembly?” Helena addressed Bette playfully.

    God that accent was sexy.

    Bette smirked. I could hear it. And she revealed a smidgen of her resentment, “Helena, I didn’t ask to speak with you to provide nourishment to your despicable sense of sport.”

    ‘Oh, God, Bette. No!’ I thought to myself while squirming on the toilet seat. ‘Don’t be contentious. Please, don’t go there.’ Just then I heard Bette sit the shot glasses down on Kit’s oak desk.

    “I didn’t think you had,” Helena replied ruefully. “I only meant that it’s about time we had a heart to heart. Don’t you think? My poor choice of words and my demeanor only expose my apprehensiveness of this encounter, my discomfort, if you will? Perhaps we should start again. Please?”

    Perched on my toilet seat, I smiled happily. ‘That’s my Helena. My new, endearing, solicitous, Helena.’

    “Alright. Let’s back up and try again,” Bette agreed. “Our friend, Alice, deserves it.”

    “And what does Alice have to do with this interaction, Bette?”

    “Well, Helena, it seems our very dear friend, Alice, when you excused yourself to the ladies’ room,” Bette explained, “admonished me severely for my bad behavior towards you this evening.”

    “Oh?” Helena asked surprised.

    Bette must have looked down at the glasses she’d just set on the desk. “I brought us a drink if you’d like one, Helena,” Bette announced, the inflection in her voice softening. I could tell she was starting to relax. That double Absolut martini and two shots she downed before approaching Helena were starting to take effect. “Why don’t you have a seat, there, on the couch. Make yourself comfortable.”

    “Only if you’ll join me,” Helena suggested, ignoring the offer for a drink, but sitting and patting the seat next to her for the second time this evening.

    I could hear the leather crinkle beneath both their pretty asses. This boded well for a more friendly encounter.

    “Continue, please,” Helena urged Bette. “I’m reluctant to speak much more for fear of disturbing your process of thought or insulting you.”

    I wanted to see body posture and facial expressions. And I couldn’t. That was totally pissing me off. If only I could slide the pocket door open a crack, my surveillance would suffer no impairment. But I couldn’t risk generating a noise that would blow my cover.

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    1. I took a shot in checking the website for the second time this morning, just in the off chance you had updated this story, and to my pleasant surprise, you had! I can’t wait to read what Kit has happened upon. A smile among new friends, a hug, or better yet, a gentle kiss? Eep! Post soon, before I burst with anticipation!

    2. You have a winner here. Let them be happy. Take it slow and let Bette get to know Helena. Helena is the one already in love. Let Bette do it slow and easy.Helena is way ahead of Bette thanks

    7. I have just read both your chapters and im hooked…Yep both excellent and so well written this has so much going for it i love the humour and am really looking forward to the drama…Alice is wonderful at the best of times but you`ve really captured her at her best…Thanks lovin this

    10. f******ck Kit *fumes* bad timing!and u Z,love it, brilliant (but can u maybe perhaps if u want, tone down the big words from Alice and B?), great stuff, thanks, looking forward to the next one!

    11. I’m so glad to see you posted again ~ I love this story! We could all use a friend like Alice, couldn’t we? You’ve written the conversation between Bette and Helena like I think it would really occur on the show, so true to character. Both of them so strong on the outside but vulnerable on the inside. I love the way you’ve written all three of these characters. Please continue.

    13. This is me totally in awe of your work. You’re quite the writer, and wow, I just love this. :) I hope you decide to continue (and soon) because I’d really love to see where you take definitely.

    14. Another fantastic chapter Z. I really do like your Alice, she’s perfectly written. And Bette & Helena, I love the way your taking this slow, letting Bette get over her prejuices aginst Helena, and seeing her under a new light. A wonderfull Helebette tale, pal. Keep Up the good work. :)

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