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A Thin Line – Chpt 25
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“Peggy, allow me to introduce Candace Jewel. Candace, this is Helena’s mother, Peggy Peabody,” I said.
“Candace Jewel. Candace Jewel,” Peggy repeated softly to herself. “From where do I know that name?”
Helena looked at me with embarrassment. “Um, Mummy, perhaps you remember my mentioning that Ms. Jewel once dated Bette,” Helena told her mother in a hushed tone.
“Ah, yes, you’re the carpenter,” Peggy announced.
I grinned uncomfortably at Helena and thought she would faint from her mother’s pronouncement. Candace just smiled and nodded her assent.
And as if there wasn’t enough discomfort already, at that very moment Alice and Tina entered our little party.
“Hey, Bette. Helena. Hi, Mrs. P. How you all doin’?” Alice greeted us.
“Hi, Alice,” I replied.
“Hello, Alice, how are you?” Helena said.
“My dear, it’s nice to see you again. I do hope you’re well,” responded Peggy.
“Fine as frog hair, Mrs. P.,” Alice answered.
“Alice, have you met, Candace?” I asked.
“Um, I know who she is. Hello,” Alice said to Candace.
Alice looked behind her and grabbed Tina by the hand, pulling her forward.
“And you all know Tina,” Alice said smiling broadly.
Helena reached behind her mother and groped for my hand. I clasped it tightly and gave it a squeeze.
“Hello, Tina,” I said.
“How are you, Tina?” Helena greeted her.
“It’s been a long time, Tina,” Candace managed to utter shyly.
Peggy looked around the circle, from Helena, to Tina, to Alice, to Candace, to me.
“My, God, what is this?” Peggy exclaimed in astonishment. “Isn’t this an Edouard Pince Gallery Opening? Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?”
“Mother!” Helena cried out in embarrassment. “Come with me right now! Excuse us,” Helena said turning and taking her mother by the hand to lead her away.
“I think I’ll be going now. It was nice to see you all again. Good-bye, Bette,” Candace bade her departure.
“Oh, there’s Mr. Pince alone,” Alice remarked promptly. “I wanna talk to him about his top ten exhibitors,” she said, turning quickly on her heels to make her exit.
That left Tina and I staring at one another.
“So, what’s new, Bette?” Tina asked.
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Well, Peggy DID have a point.
What a gathering. What a story. More please.
Fantastic!!!!!Don’t stop now you’ve got me hooked!!
Drama!! I love it.
Hahahahaha! I just LOVE Peggy! LMAO!
rotflmfao…that was so funny!!! you so have peggy down…she is priceless…and tina with the “i can tell she’s been f***”…and then alice’s comments about tina’s discomfort….oh man zheese, this was priceless and certainly worth the wait. looking forward to the next post…the “i f**** bette porter fan club” …priceless. thank you!
As soon as you had TIna join the the circle, I just knew something was coming out of Peggy’s mouth!! oh my god!! I laugh so hard, i almost peed!
Peggy’s a pistol! When you’ve got money and say something inappropriate you’re deemed eccentric or outspoken but when you’re of ordinary means then you thought of as trashy or low class. But very funny!
Yes Peggy is a pistol, but why rag on Bette here, and embarrass the woman to death!! I love your story, love Bette and Helena but I could live very comfortably NEVER hearing Alice go on about how Bette wronged her, broke her heart, ruined her life and so on, again!! they dated a few weeks…PERIOD! She has always had this bitterness and is why she is first in line to stand by Tina, no matter what tina does. Tina and alice make me nuts..and not in a good way. must calm down..I think I need another drink!! Gumby? Where are ya gumby!!
hahaha….I fucked Bette Porter club….you’re so bad….can I join this club??
ah zheese. I laughed out loud a few times with this chapter…don’t apologize for the snail’s pace – sometimes a slower pace is exactly what is required in order to tell a story properly. Well done.
zheese, another good one! I have been strangely busier than ever, which has prevented me from commenting and pm’g as I have in the past. Great chapter and the great story continues. I’m still thoroughly enjoying!
Peggy has such a way with words and Tina too “So what’s new?” Indeed. Fun chapter in every way.
Damn, I missed this post! I’m deeply sorry. Quite a hilarious chapter. I could feel how freaking AWKWARD that would be and this line certainly had me laughing: “My, God, what is this?” Peggy exclaimed in astonishment. “Isn’t this an Edouard Pince Gallery Opening? Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?”Hahaha! Great work, going to read the next.
Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?”Best line ever–and Peggy was dead on….LOL!
lol…I have been in exactly that situation, with my present gf, our (we had both been with her) ex and her exs…5 in all!!!!! it was harder for the Bette Porter in the group than us exs!!!
Haha Zheese this was hilarious. Peggy really doesn’t know when to quit does she. She’s so crazy but I love her. Please continue the good work girl.
rotflmfao LOL LOL LOLPeggy is always the best… I didn’t realize the Club fact until she said it LOL :D She is sooo funny and she can be so embarassing and Helena is so subject to her LOL My God, zheese, I laughed a lot at this chapter. Nice work :D Keep it up, I will ship these two and your story as long as it goes on.
Now could that have been any more uncomfortable?? Wow, nice choice of women to assemble. I guess they really could compare notes about Bette. OK, enough chatter, lets get these two love birds home.
Peggt is too much she had me rolln on the ground laughin. At the same time though she was right
Excellent! …. This line was the best! …” Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?” You are a very clever writer. I am really enjoying this story. Thank you.
lol…that was funny…Peggy is like a 3 year old…you never know what’s coming out her mouth…I bet you could have heard a pen drop…even though the ladies probably could compare notes…love this story please continue.
lol, Leave it to Peggy to state what everyone else KNOWS they were thinking, lol. Great update. But I need to add…. I hate Tina. She hasn’t even DONE anything yet, but she’s going to offer false niceties or just be, and yeah.. grrr. lol. Great update though
“My, God, what is this?” …have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?” OUCH – THAT WAS HARSH…love my Peggy P GREAT chapter!
Zheese, I love the sense of desire, heat and lust that you create in this story. The way in which Bette and Helena can’t physically keep their hands off each other is wonderful. I am sure the rest of the gals can smell the scent of longing on them. Ansd wasn’t Candace gracefully and restrained while perfect Peggy cam e up with an awesome line “Or have I mistaken it for a chapter meeting of the ‘I-Fucked-Bette Porter’ Club?” You had me rolling in the aisles with that one. It just seemed so true to Peggy’s character and volcabuary. You have such a talent for balance all of these characters and their dialouge that it genuinely astounds me. Can’t wait to see where it leads. Thank you for sharing it with me. Your Loyal Fan.
That was to funny. Peggy and her way of getting right to the truth. Just Great!!! Please post soon
Ha ha! Love Peggy! That was fun. Thanks zheese ^_^