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A Thin Line – Chpt 26
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I came out of the bathroom and saw Bette in a seductive pose, naked on my bed.
As I peeled back my robe and let it drop to the floor, I could feel my clit pulsate. A trickle ran down my thigh.
Bette watched me in the candlelight as I neared her in the nude. I placed a knee on the edge of the mattress and crawled on all fours across the bed.
“You’re the one acting like a tiger,” Bette said, smiling, remembering how I’d teased her when we’d walked into the gallery that evening.
I growled, still on all fours, and reached in with my mouth to gently bite Bette’s lip. I pulled at it with my teeth.
“Mmm. There’s a wild and sexy, carnivorous tiger on the loose,” Bette announced playfully. “Come here and let me tame you, Sexy Tiger.”
Bette reached up and ran her fingers through my hair, then pulled me down on top of her with a passionate kiss. We rolled back and forth across the bed with our lips embraced, Bette and I both vying for the top. Finally, I pinned her down with my hands holding hers above her head, against the pillows. I let go of her hands and raised up slowly until I was sitting on her stomach, my moisture rubbing onto her skin. Bette smiled hugely and reached to fondle my breasts.
“One point for the Sexy Tiger with the wet pussy,” she whispered.
“Bette!” I scolded her.
“What?” she laughed. “What’s wrong?”
“Nothing,” I laughed with her. “You’ve just never used that word before when we’re together. It caught me by surprise.”
“I’m sorry, it just seemed appropriate since we were talking about felines,” Bette continued to laugh.
“I understood your reasoning,” I replied smiling.
Bette pulled me down next to her and caressed my face. Her expression became serious.
“Helena. Sweetheart. I never, ever want anything I say to offend you. I was just trying to be funny. Tonight’s been a little stressful. You know, with Tina?”
“I’m not offended, Darling. I told you. It just surprised me.”
Bette stroked my face lovingly with her fingertips and looked me in the eyes.
“Making love to you is such a sacred experience for me. I don’t want to debase it,” Bette said softly and sweetly.
I leaned in and kissed her.
“Bette, pussy is a purr-fectly acceptable term. Use it as you wish.”
“Oh, Helena,” Bette said, laughing and wrapping her arms around me tightly, “I love you so.”
“Bette?”
“Yes, Sweetheart,” she answered, snuggling her face into my neck.
“How are you feeling about your conversation with Tina? I think she’s going to be fine, don’t you?” I asked quietly.
Bette pulled back and looked at me smiling. “Yes, Tina’s going to be just fine. Thank you for caring.”
I kissed her. “You’re welcome, Darling.”
Bette kissed me back. “Can we make love now, Sexy Tiger?”
“Grrr-rr-rr!”
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Groowwll!! Nice ending!!! I liked how you handled the Tina situation as well, carry on!!
Well, Tina took it pretty well, even if she was kind of a jerk. I wonder if Helena was able to teach Peggy something about discretion, old dog, new trick. There is some hope because it sounded like Peggy took a page out of Alice’s book. So, Peggy’s a salty dog and and her daughter’s a feline sort. No wonder they fight.
that’s hot! =) waiting for more!
I missed the chance to comment last chapter. 1st, I have to agree with Susanah. I am so sick of Alice acting like it was she and Bette who’d been together 8 years. Hell, it was just a few weeks and she keeps holding on to that the same way Tina is holding on to her anger. Loved how pleasant you made the Tina encounter; although I don’t think she deserved such gentleness.
Ahh, nice! Tina did take that decently enough though she still held that air of Tina-ness so it was very believable! sexy ending and another good chapter. :)
cool chapter…maybe tina will finally, finally – i say – grow up! the chemistry between b&h is soooo palpable. thanks!
I’d like to become a member of the I fucked Bette Porter Club, but for now I’ll settle for honorary status….LOL. I almost caught myself feeling bad for Tina but then i realized that she screwed everything up by going back to Bette after Jely was born but not being completely committed to fixing that relationship. Tina needs to realize that sometimes love isn’t enough and it’s not a reason to stay in an unhappy relationship. I believe that Bette does still love Tina, but like she said she’s in love w/ Helena. Post soon zheese (pretty please)
I just hope Tina stay away and not make trouble…Post soon!
Good chapter Zheese. You handled the Tina situation very well. I myself don’tlike confrontations either so I understand your reasons to write it this way very well. Keep up the good work girl
Nice writing… Bette is the confrontional type though, and I can’t see Tina so calm too… But please continue!
yeah, I agree with skycaptain, Tina so calmly is a little unbelievable… but nice as well :D I’m glad she can understand that B&H really love each other and that she cannot ruin that. And as much as I don’t like confrontations, I think they are always due to the ex partner and Bette was totally doing the right thing letting Tina talk to her. Those two tigresses are sooo fucking hot :D
hi..haven’t left a comment here in a while but thought i might this time because i was very impressed with the way you handled the Tina confrontation. well done! thank you
This is good writing, I can’t picture Tina being THAT calm though…they’re sitting around like they are having tea talking about feelings…lol…there HAS to be some more drama coming. please post soon.
Great update, zheese. Thanks! You handled the Tina & Bette situation well.
it was good to see tina act in a civilized way upon hearing about helena and bette. I cant wait for the next chapter of love making : )
Zheese, Brilliant. I adored Tina’s reaction to Bette and Helena’s love affair. Then topped with Bette’s stance over her new realtionship. Really awesome and astounding writing. I do agree that Tina threw away the best thing in her life when she cheated on Bette. Now that ship has truly sailed as Bette and Helena continue on the “Love Boat” cruise of lust, longing and love. More please real soon as I can’t get enough of your wondrous words. The conversations just ring true. Thank you. Your Loyal Fan.
Very well done Zheese, the Tina situation was handled very weel, LOVE Peggy and her outbursts, now i too would love to become a member of the ‘i fucked Bette Porter club’. Bette and Helena, sexy as ever. Can’t wait for the next one!