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A Thin Line – Chpt 34
We lay there contentedly for several moments before Bette spoke.
“So where’s my surprise?” Bette asked gruffly, in jest.
“Bette!” I exclaimed, pulling away.
“Well, it’s Sunday,” she laughed, “and you promised me my surprise on Sunday.”
“Later! Be patient,” I scolded her, gently slapping her ass.
“Ow!”
Bette wrestled herself on top of me. Her face hovered over mine and she smiled. “You are so sexy,” she said. She pulled me over on my side and began caressing my breasts and tenderly rolling my erect nipples between her fingers. She growled playfully and traced my lips with the tip of her tongue. “You wanna play tigers? Hmm?”
“Maybe,” I teased. And then I growled.
Bette slid down and nibbled at my nipples. She sucked, and licked, and bit.
“Oh, God,” I breathed, writhing at her touch. “You make me so wet and so excited so quickly.”
Her tongue danced around my areola and then she looked up at me. “Helena, you keep me in a perpetual state of incessant excitement.”
Bette grabbed my hand and stroked it between her legs as she rolled over on her back. She pulled me on top of her and kissed my lips passionately.
“God, Bette. Fuck!” I licked her neck fervently and flicked my tongue in her ear. Her erect nipples requested my attention and my mouth quickly found them.
Bette squirmed beneath me and rocked against my hand as it lovingly explored between her sensitive folds.
“Inside!” Bette cried out.
I penetrated her with two fingers and rhythmically attended to her.
“Oh, fuck! I have to taste you! Now,” Bette breathed.
She reached to stop the motion of my hand and to remove my fingers from her. Flipping me over, Bette growled and pressed her mouth to mine hungrily. Our tongues pushed back and forth against one another fiercely. Slowly, Bette withdrew her lips from mine and began her journey down the front of my torso, licking and sucking, kissing and nibbling. Our ecstatic moans echoed and answered each other, confessing our pleasure.
Bette ran her nose over my coarse curls, and momentarily stopped to rest her cheek there. When she delicately caressed my thighs, I spread my legs and bent my knees. Her tongue spread out over me, bathing itself in my moisture. She lapped around my clit and teased my opening. I grabbed her head, running my fingers through her hair, and pressed her firmly to me. She thrust her tongue inside me repeatedly and licked between my folds.
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I’m giving Tina the benefit of the doubt. She is truly sorry, wants to see Bette happy and she will not create a diversion for their relationship. That’s my fan fic
Oooh, wonder what Tina wants. I think she may want to get back with Bette, but she most likely wants to talk and apologize, I think. I’m looking forward to Helena giving Bette her surprise (I’m still presuming it’s the painting).
yeah I can’t agree with you more snQQpy Tina is certainly into something otherwise it won’t be Tina would it? PPS thx
Well, seems we all want to know what dear Tina is up to. It seems most of us are a bit dubious of her reason. I’m glad you seem to be taking this story where ever it goes.
Poor Tina she cant have what she had with Bette ever again. They both messed that up. thanks
That’s it? Your just gonna leave us hanging ? Oh, you are so bad….Post soon. It’s killing me not knowing what Tina wants. ( I feel like Alice when she get’s left out of the loop. LOL)
you know, i am certainly not a tina fan, but maybe, just maybe she is contrite and wants to say sorry..you know, like…bette, i know you cheated, but i got you back with helena and then then the coup de grasse was banging henry, but can you forgive me…bette’s reply, hell to the “NO”. but being the person that she is, i’m sure bette will say sure tina, i hope you find what you are looking for, but rest assured that it is NOT me!!! am i close? thanks for the post, PLEASE continue to post, love this story and it is so in you to continue writing it!!! THANKS!
ChocolateChild, I’m with you. There is no hope for Tina. She just keeps pushing Bette away. Maybe she can make amends–but what a cliffhanger you left us with!!!!!!!!!
Zheese…great writing. Maybe Tina is going to move away and take Angelica w/her?
*school teacher voice…very calm*…maybe …just maybe…Tina feels bad and wants to make things right. Maybe she had called Bette to watch Angelica but when Bette didn’t answer she made arrangements with Alice…we will see what Tina wanted after the commercial break…let’s not jump to conclusions.
zheese- you rae taking this teasing thing to a whole new level. Why did Tina call Bette? I’m dying to know. And i guess i was wrong about Helena buying that painting for Bette, unless she is waiting to suprise her w/ it in some big reveal later that day. To the planet they all go. Great at least i can count on Alice to spill thebeans about why Tina called Bette. post soon!
1st…….BRB
You have to update this soon! I just hoped Tina isn’t going to cause problems. PLEASE CONTINUE!
Tina probably wants bette back now. Just because she loves to play with Bette’s emotions
Looking forward to the day that Tina stops being a pain in my azz ….. I mean, Bette’s. Who cares why she is calling? Oh wait, let me guess; Bette’s happy and Tina detest that so why not call to upset her at the very least. She probably knows that they are celebrating their week long anniversary and just wants to mess it up.
Great! Now what does Tina want to tell Bette??