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    A Thin Line – Chpt 4

    Story written on March 24, 2006 by zheese.
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    Author Notes:

    Alice blabs and Helebette talk

    When she answered the phone, I answered back, “Yes, Alice, it‘s me.”

    “Helena, where are you?” Alice yelled.

    “In my car. Where‘s Bette?”

    “She just asked me the same question about you. She’s right here,” Alice answered loudly.

    I could tell it was hard for her to hear me over the din in The Planet.

    “How is she?” I yelled back.

    “She wants to talk to you, Helena,” Alice yelled, causing me to pull my phone from my ear.

    The cacophony I competed with from inside The Planet was completely irritating. I paused for a considerable amount of time before persevering.

    “Will you put her on the phone, Alice?”

    “I’ll try,” she answered.

    Finally, after an excruciating length of time, I heard Bette’s voice say, “Hello, Helena.”

    At this point, after experiencing the taste of her skin on my tongue, just the sound of her voice made me wet. I asked myself if I dare continue. The answer was simple. I must.

    “Bette. I’d like to talk with you. About what just happened.”

    “Yes. I think we do need to talk.” Bette replied. “Helena, I can barely hear you. Let me go outside where it’s quiet. Can you hold on until I get there?”

    “Of course, Bette.”

    I could feel my heart beating against my chest as I waited to resume our conversation. Knowing we needed to talk, but not knowing what to say, I was experiencing extreme emotional conflict.

    “Okay. I’m outside The Planet,” Bette stated. “Can you hear me now?”

    I laughed. “Yes, Ms. Verizon. I can hear you now.”

    She laughed too. This was a good sign.

    “Helena, I think we need to talk in person. When can we do that?”

    “When would you like to, Bette?”

    “Soon. As soon as possible.”

    “How about now?”

    “Well, right now is probably not good, Helena. I have Angelica in the morning. I don’t have time to find a convenient place for us to meet at the moment.”

    “I’m right here, Bette.”

    “I told you. I think we need to talk in person.”

    “Look up. And to your left. I’m in the fifth car down. Come talk to me.”

    Startled, almost alarmed, Bette looked up rapidly and scanned the vehicles parked along the street.

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    3. Yay! Another wonderful post of your Helebette story. I was waiting all week for a new chapet, you got me addicted to your story. Hope you can post some more during the weekend, maybe we’ll get to see Helebette’s first kiss?…Post soon!

    4. So excited to see you posted! I can’t wait to see what’s going to happen next when they get a chance to talk ~ hopefully uninteruppted. Post again soon, please?!

    5. No need to be insecure zheese…your story is amazing – with the perspectives, you provide an insight into how each character perceives the events as they unfold. A welcome explanation of how Alice and Helena came to be friends as well. Bring on the meeting and lose the question mark behind ‘tbc’

    6. The love that Tina and Bette had is not going to compair to the love that Helena has for Bette, She moved fron NY just to be need her and kept her mouth shut now its her time with Bette, Tina will be the loser. thanks

    9. Oh my gosh, I’m becoming obsessed with this story! It’s amazing. I love it, seriously. I can’t wait for you to continue.I foind myself checking the fanfics of this site like a madwoman every evening in hope of catching a new installment. Keep them coming, I will definitely be anxiously awaiting!!! And graciously reading. :)

    11. Are you and JKS one in the same??? Cause this is giving her Helbette a run for it’s money…Really love this, all the detail, descriptions I can feel all that your trying to say..Wonderful…keep going pls pls pls

    15. Your perspective and description are unique. The characters’ voice is spot on. I’m a huge TiBetter but when writers can write as well as you then I believe in HeleBette. Pls. continue.

    17. Just caught up on the last 2 chapters. I’m liking the story told from each character’s perspective. The tension was palpable indeed. You’re doing an excellent job, so, please do continue.

    22. I love your story! Not only you need to continue but also to post really soon, cant’ wait to see what happen (and hope it’s goodfor helebette). Also love the POV change, esp with Alice

    23. Beautiful chapter Z.. i just read it with Tegan & Sara’s ‘My Number’ in the background (try it) the beat and lull really fit with Helena’s ‘all I wanted and hoped for was the chance to love her’…I love your Helena voice,that she’s so in love and that Bette is being so very gentle. sigh. Thanks..and Zheese? If you need more encouragement to keep this going,u only have to ask because i dont think i’m running out of compliments for your writing :)

    26. Zheese,Another glorious chapter in this must read story. You have brilliantly captured the uncertainity that both Bette and Helena are feeling. There is a rawness from both gals are they try to understand what just happened. How could something done in jest suddenly become so emotive and demonstrate an honesty that neither would naturally admit to. You have given a truthfully insight into a potentially dynamic love feast. I love the way Alice and Kit have had a hand in this. I can’t wait to see what happens next. You write with such passion that it is all to easy to be consumed by your creative wisdom and carried off to this amazing fantasty land. I do hope that the Powers That Be are watching and taking guidance from how it could be done. You rock! Your Loyal Fan.

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