Fan Fiction
This story has been set to a rating of R. Age verification is required to proceed.
A Thin Line – Chpt 8
Helena slid her hand under the front of my blouse to fondle a breast and to tease my hardened nipple over the lace of my brassiere. I arched my back as she leaned into me and licked the length of my neck from my breastbone to under my chin. With the whole of her tongue, in a serpentine design, she languorously lapped and sucked towards my ear.
The space created by the unzipping of my pants finally allowed Helena to maneuver her right hand under my waistband and over the flesh of my ass. She massaged until her middle finger rested in my crack over the strap of my thong. Then she lowered it as far she could and moved her fingertip in a small, gentle, circular motion between my folds. I moaned for her involuntarily.
She slowly pulled her right hand from my pants and, without breaking our bodily contact, brushed against and around me so that her sumptuous nipples pressed against my back. I could feel them through the sheer fabric of my blouse. I saw them in my mind’s eye and undulated against her. I heard the waves crash against the shore. My sensory perception meter was on overload.
While her left hand massaged my left breast, she wrapped her right arm around my waist. Slowly and delicately, she played and teased her palm and her fingertips against the skin of my abdomen, working her way down to the gap created by my opened zipper. She slid her hand underneath my thong and massaged my curls. As she then inched down and rubbed her hand back and forth a few times between my legs, and against my clit, I was writhing beneath her touch. I moaned deliriously.
“Oh, God!†I breathed aloud, my voice quivering. I felt so weak.
“You’re so wet,†she whispered into my ear, licking and nibbling it, while removing her hand from the edge of my ecstasy.
“Yes, so fucking wet,†I replied in acknowledgment. My eyes were closed. My head hung back.
Turning me around, with her hands now on my shoulders, Helena asked, still whispering, “Are we going inside? Or are we going to stay out here on the beach and provide a show for any voyeuristic neighbors who may be about, taking walks or such?â€
Comments
Leave a Reply
You must be logged in to post a comment.



can’t wit til next weekend for the next chapter!
Dang!! That was sexy sexy!!! Thanks!
evev a little is better than none at all – have a good week.
zheese, I knew what they were doing. What I can’t figure out is why they stopped.
Yeah, maybe getting somethin’ somethin’ would console Bette a bit. More please.
if another bottle of wine makes this even hotter than it already is, then I’m dying to read your next post. thanks!
Excellent building up, sorry we’ll have to wait a whole week…
You and swimmie are fueling the HeleBette fires. Excellent writing.
that was great and I liked how they stopped to continue with the wine….saving more for later!!!
Definitely VERY SeXy!
Very hot action in this chapter. There’s certainly no turning back now with these two. Looking forward to your post next weekend. Take care and hurry back!
Okay…you can’t make us wait this long. Love the story and your writing continues to impress. Thanks!!
one page is better than nothing at all, thank you for this chapter, sexy sexy, wow!!! cant wait for more,
Dont work to hard cant wait until next weekend.Sexy as hell thanks
can’t wait to see what happens next!!write soon!!!!!!!
Gosh, that is a fantastic update. Its great to see Bette in lust but still sufficient coherent to be going into this relationship with her eyes wide open. Looking forward to your next chapter.
Exciting build up and very well written. Guess I have no choice except to wait until the weekend and hope for a longer post.
Zheese! Wow. I really am sorry for not commenting on this sooner. Things have been crazy here, and I’m just getting a moment to myself. What a truly scintillating chapter…such imagery…such desire. I can’t wait to read the next part, and to my lovely surprise there is a next part. I hope you get this! Great job, as per usual.
Sexy sexy!!!!!! (Red faced behind my workstation)
I look forward to seeing how this plays out between them. Thanks for the story!
Zheese, Geez baby that was delicious and delicable and desirable and damn hot!!! Adored the playfulness and passion described between these two paramours. Now let’s get them inside and fulfill the pursuit of pleasure. Gratification must be had soon. Puh-lease let the zeal and zest dominate this union of broken hearts and perpetrate the renewal process. Can’t wait. Moist with anticipation of unfolding events. Thank you for this bountious bouquet. Your Loyal Fan.
That was Hot!! Can’t wait for the next post.
tease:(
I LOVE this story – you have skills woman!