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    A Thin Line

    Story written on March 10, 2006 by zheese.
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    Story Shortlink: https://lesfan.com/?p=59913
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    Alice’s POV on Helebette

    And at least Helena, unlike her former lover, was not possessed to start fucking men, in cyberspace, on the movie set, against the entrance to her girlfriend’s boudoir, or in any other way. Once Tina forever broke the camel’s back by humping a man, Bette and Tina were over. And that, my friends, was what banged the door open, forgive the reference, to Helena’s destined connection with the woman who once reviled her.

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    “C’mon, Bette! You need to get out. You don’t have Angelica tonight. It’ll just be Shane, and me, and you. Oh, and Helena.”

    “Helena! Alice, what are you thinking? I was about to agree to your offer, but I don’t know if I can stand to be around that woman tonight,” Bette complained.

    “I was thinking you’ve been tolerating her rather well. You’ve been around each other socially recently and haven‘t killed one another. You two actually have a lot in common. Adoption of children from former partners. Meditation practice. You’re both strong. Independent,” I sighed at Bette’s obstinance. “You are so stubborn. If you talked to each other, you might find, that deep down, you actually liked each other. She’s not all that bad, ya know. She’s helped me through some difficult times recently.”

    “So you’ve told me. Alright, I’m tired of arguing with you. I’ll come. But I swear, one foul word from that woman and I’m outta there, Alice.”

    “Helena’s not like that anymore, Bette. I promise. You’ll have fun.”

    “We’ll see. Meet you later. About ten-ish. At the Planet, right?”

    A little after 10 o’clock, I looked up to see Bette sauntering towards our table. She looked different. I’d never seen her hair pulled back in a braid. It was stunning. She wore a black form-fitting sweater with a plunging neckline. And as she made her way through the crowd, I noticed around the room heads turned, and mouths fell open. She did look ravishing.

    As she neared our table, I raised my arm to wave her over. It was then that I barely overheard, but did not have time to process, Helena whispering, “My God, she’s breathtaking.”

    “Hey, Bette,” I greeted her. “You made it.”

    “Sorry, I’m late. I was getting Angelica‘s room ready for her visit this weekend, and I lost track of time.”

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    4. Yes! Finally, another Helebette story! God, these two are hot together, and I’m glad that this fandom pairing is picking up pace, because these two really should find each other on the show. Wonderfully written, post more soon!

    11. I have been waiting to see if you were going to update, but since you haven’t yet, I’ll comment. I really like the way this is beginning and would love to see you continue. It’s good to see a different side of Helena and actually have some detailed explanation for the change. It would also be great to have a chance to see how Bette recovers from the breakup with Tina and moves on with her life. Thanks! Please don’t keep us waiting too long.

    14. I have seen very few pull off Alice’s point of view, but you do it flawlessly…and your characterizations are lovely. I’m glad there’s more to read! Excellent work!

    16. Bette and Helena,that sound as good as Tina and Henry. Really sounds better to me Two beautiful strong will women together. Helena is in love with Bette now now to get Bette on the ball. thanks

    24. wow!!! i love this story..i am so sick of Tina..and i am also kind of hoping that if IC is going to put Bette and Helena togather..i mean..REMEMBER…BRUNETTE, DRIVES BLUE CAR…who knows it must be Bette ,,,if it is…ITS GOING TO REALLY HOT…i wonder what’s Tina’s reaction is going to be…Who cares….More Helena and Bette please…SOON!!!!!!!!!!!

    26. I love it! You have a great way with plot and the voice of the story is perfect…the more Helebette the better I say. Thanks for writing.

    27. WOW! I’m a HUGE HeleBetter and absolutely lurrve where you’re going with this!i think u capture Alice’s manner of speech and thought,the vulnerability of the new Helena,the biting side of Bette- Your writing’s frikkin’ brilliant and i’m certainly bringing this up in the H/B thread on the l-word.com forum! (for other HeleBetters who commented here, do join us at the The Dish!) So Z..LOVE your story,post soon if u can!

    30. I followed Justkeepswimming’s recommendation in her latest chapter and checked out your story. What a treat! The voices of your characters are perfect. You must continue – please post very soon.

    31. I have been out of touch lately, so am just catching up…and I am so glad I clicked on this story to read!!! This was incredibly well written. Truly, I was hooked right away. I do hope you continue with your story. Your voice for all three characters is strong and right on point!! Please continue soon!!! Thanks!

    33. Very well written, very much in character and provides a good insight to Helena’s so called “transformation”. Please do continue with this story, Z. Thanks for sharing.

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