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A TiBette Love Story: Lucky Seven {36}
Tina smiled throughout her shower, with non-stop images of Bette Porter racing in her mind. ‘I can’t believe how Bette took care of me.’
Tina sighed. ‘I’m so fucking crazy about her. So fucking in love! Bette’s simply fucking amazing…and so fucking gorgeous!’
Tina let out a soft laugh. ‘I’m really doing a lot of fucking here….’ Tina’s heart began to race as it hit her. ‘Bette and I are finally…going to be together!’
Tina’s body welcomed the hot water cascading down her body. Despite the warmth that spread throughout, she shivered in anticipation thinking she and Bette were mere moments away of being intimate with one another.
By the time Tina had finished and turned off the water, the steam swirled in the air. As she stepped out of the shower, something immediately caught her attention. Tina let out a gasp and placed her hand over her heart…
“HOLY SHIT!” Alice screamed, shielding her eyes from taking in the sight of Tina’s delicious curves with one hand while holding a tray of freshly baked brownies with the other.
“Alice!” Tina bellowed in shock, quickly wrapping herself with a white towel. “What…what are you doing here?”
Alice continued to speak with her hand blocking her vision. “I am soooo sorry about last night and was bringing you a peace offering…” Alice held the brownie tray with an outstretched hand. “I saw the lights on and knocked but nobody answered….the front door was open and….”
*** LuvTiBette is so very nice…and would never allow THAT scenario to occur since I know majority of you want that long awaited NC-17. Was it mean of me to do this? (Shaking head ‘no’) It was a challenge given to me by one whom shall remain anonymous and I just can’t back down from a challenge…that said, please note I shall take on NO future challenges before you sweet readers come after me with pitchforks – LOL! Don’t be mad…admit that deep down…you loooove me…at least after this chappie perhaps? Okay…let us all breathe deeply…and start our way into TiBette heaven, shall we? 5 – 4 – 3 – 2 – 1… ***
Tina smiled throughout her shower, with non-stop images of Bette Porter racing in her mind. ‘I can’t believe how Bette took care of me.’
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(46 votes, average: 4.26 out of 5)
And I am finally FIRST. Yahoo!
Luv…how many times again did they do it? My brain is such a mush right now I’ve lost count. Are you sure it was just seven….I can’t even make it to the shower. Darn….my turtle speed.
That was a great chapter! I’m not sure I even know what else to say. At least I figured out what Bette got out of the garage. :) The Twitter thing made me laugh. Thank you so much for posting!
Alrighty then, Espresso heart attack after that.
FINALLY! That’s all I have to say! When I read Alice’s part all I could think of was: “WTF? I can’t believe she is doing this to us!” And then I laughed sooo hard when you interrupted the story to explain what was going on! You have a really nice sense of humor, girl! =] The Twitter part was also awesome! Thank you! =] P.S.: Because you were so mean to us until now, we deserve a marathon of NC-17 chapters! ;)
BTW, you were very creative with this Rain-X thing… I’ve been collecting a lot of romantic tips on how to seduce a girl since I started to read your story! And I’m starting to envy your girlfriend! She’s a lucky one! =P (I know you love double comments, but it’s never on purpose!)
Is the tiger loose yet? Still waiting…
Laughed so hard @ the twitter thing… great chap, and THX again for this wonderful story…
‘Bette Porter…straddling me…topless…Jesus, I have died and gone to lesbian heaven.’ RIGHT OMG I need an emoticon LOL the wait was worth it…..anyone have a cigarette ???? LOL
WOW! It would be necessary to copy the 4th and 5th pages in the Kamasutra. LOL! Or rather I try it the “double hand” stunt. Yeah. :o) I look up my woman. *goofy grin* Ps.: You’re very smart. Keep it up! I’m proud of you. *wink*
DAMN THAT WAS HOT!!!! The twitter thing was so funny. I loved it!!! Thank you PPVS
Wow wow wow. It seems I must wish more often. That was incredible!! You have a gift my dear. Pleaaaaase write how tina reciprocates! Amazing ;)
Ok, I had to stop and comment after reading your false start :) I’ll go back and read the rest. I laughed so hard that I have tears in my eyes. Thanks. :)
I believe you achieved a FF first with that teasing first section, LOL. GREAT job on the first time NC-17 – I’m exhausted but completely sated!
ok ok…so you really do like us…and only wanted to tease torture for a while…awhh ..we put up with it because we enjoy your story so…and may I say that was over the top HOT HOT HOT
I feel like Tina after reading this chapter…motionless, lying on my bed trying to get some much needed oxygen.Wow….now that you have arrived, you must never leave the land of the NC-17…it’s nice here, don’t you think?
Okay so now I’m back with my real chapter comment. Soon as I finished reading this chapter my network dropped, so now I’m back. I will now completely and totally forgive you for that false start. You did a wonderful/great job as a NC-17 virgin. J Now Tina’s first lesbian intimate encounter make me wish my first encounter was anywhere close. Not even in the same neighborhood. Not even the same planet. Great job. Oh and I loved the bathroom mirror romance idea. Very cute.
At first I thought that Alice has the worst timing. Then I thought about Bette walking in behind her and breaking the plate of brownies over her head. That was nice of you to spare Alice from several stitches and us great frustration over her impeccable timing. That was mean, but you made up for it 10 fold with that very x 10^n (my attempt at scientific notation) sexy scene. Yeeeha! Thanks for the post.
Oh. My. God. That thud you heard? Me falling outta my chair. Sweets, you really outdid yourself with this chapter…I just…I’m…yeah…wow. You’ve rendered Lil’ G speechless – how often does THAT happen? My monitor is still smokin’ but this is JUST what the doctor prescribed. Thanks for looking out for me. You rock!
Ummm, yeah, those were those other pages I was asking you about. ;-) So, they both need a sick day, huh? Can’t wait to see what the rest of the night and next day bring for them both. PPS
You are killing me, do you know that lol. PPVS
Oh my god….I just…that was…Bette…you are…” that about says it… HOT SEXY CHAPTER… keep them cumming…
Wow even Bette & Tina are on twitter now? lol That was so freakin’ hot..sick day is indeed needed, maybe two?? PPS:0
I’ll admit, I like bit my fist in frustration when Alice appeared with those brownies. Then your note sdaved it… Naughty, Luv. Just naughty. Your anonymous challenger is very naughty as well. Bad! We love you, regardless. Now then! The chapter… You “brought it”, girl! The idea of Tina tweeting her orgasms is hilarious… Maybe she can just convince her boss to let her “work” from home, rather than call in sick. Great chapter, Luv. Well worth the wait. (no more teasing… you’re too nice for that, right? Right!) Thanks :)
I wish I could comment more, but I’m typing this with the one fingertip that did not melt. The rest of me is being scooped up and put in the freezer right. lol. Phew, a sick day tomorrow indeed… one more of these chapters and you might just kill me!
Great chapter!!! Looking forward to more.
Virgin at writing NC-17 my butt! lolI completely fell off my chair. That was a great chappie. Can’t wait for the next one!
Now that was a HOT NC-17 for sure. Great update. And the twitter reference had me on the floor laughing…can’t tweet about everything. Some things like a Bette Porter post orgasmic state are scared (LOL).
Luv – you had me going for a sec with the Al schtick, but then I thought, “why is she bringing brownies into the bathroom???” Very clever I must say! Nice job on their first (7) go rounds, I can’t wait to see what Tina does to Bette!!! Oh and here’s a hint for you – the screen name is somewhat correlated to a distinguishing physical trait.
Good Gracious Alive that was hot. Damn, those two can steam up an entire house from their heated exchange.
1st you tease us all with that beginning, which i laughed my a– off at, i thought alice would be killed by bette, and then you make us all want to be tina, only to leave us hanging at the end, you are literally killing us woman, but what a way to go!!!!
that was fucking amazing! And what a wonderful way to come home from my trip. You did a very good job on your first NC17, i hope its not the last one. Hugxx
I miss this story… =( Please, update!
Oh damn that was freaking hot and awesome, love it. Please post more, thanks!
Roomie! Roomie! Roomie! I saw NC-17 and I’m at the office but did it stop me – no way! This was a FREAKIN hot update.. sigh! (Fanning self …LOL) I so need a cold shower but how how! Thank you for this it’s about time :) Thank you Roomie.. i think we need another chapter like this what say you ….LOL!
first…never joke about alice ruining this NC-17 chapter…u got me there, girl! second, that was super hot! Finally! after all this time…some hotta hotta tibette lovin’! third, loved the twitter thing…fourth, some pain inflicted on bette…NICE! fifth…a sex marathon??? NICER! your writing…NICEST! loved it, girl!
Thanks for the update. That was extremely sexy and sweet. I’m so glad you got Alice out of the bathroom….that was just scary.
Hot damn woman, I was so distracted by that chapter that I totally forgot about my painful foot! Haha – did accidentally kick the side of the bed, but it was totally worth it :P The beginning bit made me laugh, a lot *sly grin* but you totally made up for the teasing with a smokin’ hot chapter ;) It was awesome, and by the looks of things, there’s more to come! It also looks like I’m gonna have to up my game, seeing as you’ve managed to catch up again, and a promise of a certain red sombrero was thrown in :P We’ll see… Loved it, can’t wait for the next :)
Sooooo worth the wait!! Thank you for that!
No you just left us there.. what about Bette’s turn with some Tina action… I know it’s been awhile but would love more.. Thank you…