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“A little bruised, but in good spirit.” Marina commented on the significant change she saw in the brunette over the expanse of a day. It had to be for this blonde woman, she thought to herself. Then she showed the officer to the exit and promised her their meeting would be kept confidential.
When she went back to the station, the blonde was in a trance. She scrolled down the lists of numbers she pulled up under the name Sarah Schuster and began her investigation for the day. Schuster wasn’t an uncommon surname, and Sarah, well there were all too many in her precinct alone. She changed the range of her scope several times, filtering out unlikely persons. The result was a more hopeful situation. She called each one, questioning if they knew anything about the lately event, yet they all got ruled out for their dumbfounded innocence. The entire morning she wasted chasing a person who seemed not to exist.
Maybe she spelled it wrong. So Tina tried some variations for the name, eventually just typing in the initials to broaden her search, still nothing came up as remotely relative. Discouraged and disappointed, the blonde slopped in her chair, taking some time to revisit the newly acquired information regarding Tito’s death.
It saddened her, surprisingly, to think about the man she disliked from the beginning. Tito Ruiz was a rather vile person, vulgar and distasteful, his language, his laugh, his odor and breathes constantly reminded her of the biggest sewage system in the city. Yet he was loyal, pretty skilled, and of much importance to Jorge. If Bette had been with him for the first few days on the run, he must have played a key role in her survival. The images of him brutally beaten to death by Jacob’s bouncers were heart-wrenching.
Tina ought to thank him, since she was quite certain that Tito died for helping the brunette escape. Thomas, Jacob’s second in command, had witnessed the brief tension between the brunette and Jorge after Bette shot Jodi, so he for sure had reported everything back to the Iowa drug lord. And a grieving brother, Jacob had ordered a hit on the two.
Tito Ruiz’s carcass was found in an abandoned parking lot, his tattooed chest was added another scar, a symbol by the Irish mob’s infamous hit-man, indicating the kill belonged to them.
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Ok now that I think about it, I haven’t replied to any comments on my chapters. I apologize. So here are some shout outs to my good friends, dear readers and loyal supporters:
Lip!!! I’m so glad you’re ok and that you liked the ABO story. I was about to inbox you, tell you that I wanted to dedicate the story to you. But since I didn’t know if you’ll like it or not and I didn’t want to offend you or anything, I didn’t sent the pm. Great! It’s yours now! I dedicate it to you! And wish you all the best on the road to recovery fully.
Dunnthat, thanks girl! Your encouragement meant a lot to me. I’m glad I took your advice and didn’t let you down. Maybe it’s going to be another series, who knows!
wkm, surprised ya didn’t I? Haha, great that you enjoyed it.
Bibi, girl I was swearing so much when I read my first ABO story. An erotic concept designed for writing erotica isn’t it? Man I’m so happy I read it and wrote that.
Mscully, you make me so happy when you give me the entire constellation. Well I’ll earn it, pinky promise! And sorry I did get your pm but several days later. We do share a mutual understanding on particular subjects. My heart ached for you. But we’ve both pulled through and it only made us stronger.
kingg, naw gurl ya just teasin’ me now. It ain’t too bad tho, right? Well, I’ll see what else stunts I can pull lol!
Hellbent, thanks for reading! I surprised myself too for even having the idea. But once you really get used to this setting, it’s kinda hot isn’t it.
And the rest of the squad! I love you and thank you for stopping by and reading and commenting.
Peace,
Robyn
Finally a HELENA that has a heart,being kind is new but i’m still on the fence since she could be involved somehow.BETTE has TINA back in her life but must be careful because she is in jail and not many places to hide.thanks for the update and yes ,go ahead and do a series you did a beautiful start-up. pps
I wish and pray that you will give us updates asap! This story has me captivated and my poor brains are in overtime with the many scenarios i make up. And believe me, i have a lot of imagination ; )
Like dunnthat, it is strange to see Helena as a woman with a heart, but i believe she has no hidden agenda.
About your first ABO story, i am also happy you wrote it, it is certainly a erotic concept. And i hope you continue with it.
Thank you so much for the update!
Enjoying this story. Wonder what Bette has up her sleeve to deal with the Feds. Thanks, hope to read another update soon.
Loving the story! Can’t wait for the next part. Please update soon!
My friend is a great honor to me to recommend to the previous story. Thank you. and of course I loved it!
I really liked this chapter, and I am very glad to read a story in which Helena is not a bitch (that’s really needed)
I’m glad that Bette and Tina back each other’s lives in this way as well. I hope the situation is resolved quickly :-P
I’m looking forward to the next chapter.
I’m updating this story.
Sorry for delay to read.
Very good Bette has an ally Helena.
The complete constellation.