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A Walk on the Wild Side – Chapter 12
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Even when things were good, before the accident, she didn’t remember feeling like this. It feels like an electric current, she thought. It’s as though I suddenly have all this nervous energy rushing around my body. God it feels so good.
Tina wanted to run round the camp waving her hands in the air and laughing at the top of her voice. She wanted to grab everyone she saw and show them what she was feeling. She couldn’t remember experiencing such a feeling of euphoria before, even when she had finished her first painting.
That’s it she thought, painting. Whenever Tina had struggled to verbalise her thoughts and emotions her art had always been her voice.
But she made a promise to herself. She wouldn’t paint again. She couldn’t. She looked across the room to see the photo’s of Simba hanging there silently mocking her. It would be disrespectful to her memory to break that silent promise whispered to herself so long ago. Tina closed her eyes as a shadow of pain crossed her face. God I’m so confused she thought.
Tina opened her eyes again as she sensed Bette stirring, she watched in fascination as Bette slowly stretched out each and every muscle before opening her eyes.
Tina watched Bette’s face as she slowly became aware of her surroundings, her heart skipping a beat as Bette’s flashed a dazzling smile in her direction.
“Hey” Bette whispered so softly that Tina barely heard her.
“Hey yourself” Tina whispered back a light smile gracing her beautiful features.
“What are you doing over there?” Bette asked quizzically “When you should be over here with me?”
Tina’s smile widened as she stood up from her spot and headed back to join Bette in their makeshift bed.
Bette lifted the covers with her right hand beckoning Tina to join her.
Tina crawled under the covers, laying down beside Bette, resting her head on her breast.
“Talk to me” Bette said moving her arms to envelope Tina.
“What about” asked Tina dreamily, her body sinking into Bette
“About whatever it was you were thinking about sat all over there on your own” Bette replied.
“Oh” Tina sighed. She shifted her body until she was resting on her right arm her face looking into Bette’s. “I was thinking about how much I love.Tina paused slightly “being here with you”
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oh what a nice little fan fic b-day present from you LOL
So tell me about your plans to SF??
Want a tour guide??
I want to see the pic’s I wonder if there are any of Tina running for her life. LMAO ok so maybe that was kinda wrong for me to say that but you know how to look for the fun things LOL
wow . that was and is a totally captivating storyline . i’m a photographer and i totally believe the urgency of tina’s need to ‘develop’ that film . can’t wait for the next chapters . pls keep them coming :)
Loved your rewrite of chapter 11, sooooo sexy and passionate. The confusion and the epiphany were beautifully written, I can,t wait for development of the photos and story!!! lol
Good to see that your back!!!!!! great update post today please!!!!!!!!!
What an incredible treat this was to read. I was so caught up in Tina’s euphoria, that I just wanted to start back at the beginning of the story again, so I could feel all the excitement once again!! Thank you so much for creating this story!
By the way, your description of Bette’s first experience with wildlife was so adorable, I was almost giggling out loud with glee. See…the sign of a wonderful writer…one who can take me from stuttering to giggling in a heartbeat. Beautiful!
Excellent, tbsaver! I could picture Bette’s awe at her experiences. I’m glad that Bette was able to get Tina out of her funk. Hopefully it’ll last!
P.S. – There’s no shame in saying you enjoyed writing those sensual chapters. Everyone loves them a little NC-17! Hehehe
I just read all of the chapters and your story is great. Fun to see them in a setting that isn’t a city please keep posting
Another great chapter – please keep’em coming. If you “kind of enjoyed writing these NC-17″….just imagine how we feel reading them :o))
wow – just caught up on your story. b&tf urged me to read and im so glad that i did. holy shit batman, this is good. and im ever so glad that you decided to rewrite chapt 11 as many times as you did. you have a wonderful gift of letting us see these images, i feel like im there. the magnatism between our 2 girls is overwhelming. please post again real soon. ill beg and and say pweety pweeze with sugar on top for any more chappys this weekend.
Good chapter and let see what’s next. Post soon, thanks!
K
Great chapter as always. Love it.
I was so excited to see this chapter this morning. It let me know you were OK with all of the bombing over there. This story just melts my heart. Please keep’em coming.
Once again an amazing chapter!!! Any chance we’ll get 13, 14 and maybe 15 before the weekend is overing…. does BEGGING help???? Hope things are going well.
Happy to see this story back. Yhose who touch us the most in life are those who are like a mirror reflecting us back at ourselves. More soon, please
Great chapter! I love this story!
Hey TB, finally caught up with your chapters….OMG…..ooops missed the F…LOL….the rewritten NC-17 okay that was way beyond HOT, if i was a block of ice i would have melted by now…laughs…thank goodness Tina has decided to share her memories…Thanks for the posts TB, looking forward to more.