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A Working Class Sacrifice
She tucked her new purchase into her purse and planned to thoroughly read the inside packet at home later, when she was alone. Would it say anything about Bette? She would at least thank her sister, wouldn’t she?
Tina and Dana stopped to get a frozen yogurt, and then took a seat on an empty bench to rest and enjoy it. They talked much less now that they were eating, and instead were content to people-watch. From down the sidewalk came the sound of heels clacking against the ground. The heels gave way to skinny jeans, which gave way to a short halter top, which gave way to long, wavy red hair. A beautiful stranger.
Both Tina and Dana put their spoons down to stare.
“Shit. She is a ten,” Dana said. Instinctively and without missing a beat, Tina responded.
“I’d let her walk all over me with those heels in a second.”
A beat passed where neither considered the other’s comment out of the ordinary. Eventually, their heads snapped toward the other simultaneously.
“Wait…”
“Are you…?”
“Are you?”
“But you’re married!” Dana hissed. Then she smiled, and that smile transformed into a full-blown laugh. Pure relief.
“This is too good,” Dana said. “Too, too good.”
And they would be friends for life.
15 Years ago
“John? Wow, it’s been so long. How are you?” Tina asked.
“I’m good. I just graduated from Stanford last spring and now I’m working my way into my father’s company. Do you remember my parents?”
“Yeah… Judy and Tim, right?”
“That’s them. We haven’t seen your dad in a while, is he okay?”
“I’m sure he’s fine,” Tina said, not actually knowing if that was true.
“Well you must be done with high school now, right?” John asked.
“Yeah, I graduated last year.”
Bette, in the meantime, was forcing herself to look preoccupied behind the counter. She was unaware of how well this was working.
“I’m only here for a few days,” she could hear John saying, who was clearly enamored by Tina. “My dad’s meeting some clients at the country club, which is where I’m headed. By the looks of this area, though, I think I’m lost,” John said, trying to make a joke.
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(32 votes, average: 3.69 out of 5)
I have no words. That was really good. The way you wrote it made it good and it was not presented in any negative way. Thanks for posting!
That was damned good. The heartbreak is coming, I guess. I’m bracing myself for it, but I’m enjoying the story all the same. thanks, atlas!
I’m so enjoying this story. I’m preparing for the heartache, but I’m also trusting that in the end all will be happy in Bette and Tina land. Please make it so!! Thanks for your story!
It was beautifully written. Very delicately told.
WOW…Just WOW
This was so damn good…I do believe I was reading with my mouth open almost drooled…LOL
Damn that was good!
reading this story is like watching a movie in 3-D
I am relief you are a tibette but you wont you won’t spare us the heartbreak of seeing Tina marry John I pressume lol.I think pages telling Bette and Tina first time are missing lol. That was awesome. Just love the way you wrote it. So realistic. PPVS
Wow! That was absolutely brilliant. Thank you.
Even with your warning it makes me sad