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A Working Class Sacrifice
“I’ll always need you,” Bette said, truly meaning it.
“I love you, Bette. I’m so proud of you. Tina would be proud of you, too,” she added in a whisper.
Bette shook her head slowly. “Let’s not talk about Tina.”
“Okay, babygirl. I’m sorry. Look I gotta get out of here, you still coming over for dinner on Saturday? Angus hasn’t seen you in a while.”
“Yeah, I’ll be there,” Bette said, her demeanor clearly downtrodden.
Kit nodded and gave Bette an encouraging smile before walking towards the door. As she turned the knob, Bette stopped her.
“Kit?”
“Yeah?”
“Do you really think she would be?”
“Definitely.”
Bette gave a small, grateful smile as Kit left, closing the door behind her.
15 Years Ago
“You’re quiet,” Tina said, walking across the rusted, unused train tracks that provided a quicker route home from work. Bette shrugged in response, stuffing her hands deeper into her pockets.
“Is this about John?” Tina asked.
Bette scoffed. “Why would this be about John?”
Tina stopped walking. Ten steps ahead, Bette finally stopped walking, too. She turned around to face Tina.
“What?” She asked. “Come on, it’s getting cold.”
“Bette, can we just talk about this now and get it over with? If we don’t you’ll just be in this mood all night and drive us both crazy.”
“What is there to talk about?” Bette asked. “That some rich, handsome man just walked out of your past and into your future?”
“He did not walk into my future,” Tina said, exasperated. She started walking towards Bette again. “He’s just some kid that I used to know.”
“He wasn’t a kid, Tina.”
“He was when I knew him,” Tina said. “We used to play together when I spent summers with my dad. My dad lives near his family.”
“You never told me your dad was rich,” Bette said.
“Would it have mattered? So my dad has some money,” Tina said. “I haven’t seen him in years.”
“Well, shouldn’t he be giving your mom child support or something? That would be such a huge help for you and your mom.”
“My mom is too stubborn. She doesn’t want anything from him. The first time I told her I’d rather spend the summer here, she was thrilled.”
The girls walked on in silence, finally nearing Bette’s apartment. They could see Kit and two of her friends sitting out on the front steps, sharing a cigarette. Stopping just out of earshot of her sister, Bette turned to Tina.
“Do you ever miss your dad?”
“Not really,” Tina shrugged. “But I miss having a dad.”
“Do you think you’ll start going back to visit him?”
“Bette. I only want you. You have to know that by now. Tell me you do.”
“I do,” Bette sighed. You’re right, I’m sorry. I do.”
“Good,” Tina smiled, resuming the walk to Bette’s front door.
“I would have liked to pop his tires, though.”
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(32 votes, average: 3.41 out of 5)
Haha! Ended with a laugh – I would have popped his tires or keyed his car. Crap, I sound psycho(but j/p). Your story is still bumming me out but I’m totally hooked. Waiting for more, thanks for posting!
soo i’m addicted already…PPS!!!
justr read all the chapters… i like this… it different… and i no you said your a TIBETTER.. can’t wait to see how tine left bette and got married… where did bette go.. and why would she go with out tina… ok waiting for answers…pps
So would I lol.Cant wait for the happy part pmsl. Hate seeing them apart. But I love reading your story. PPVS
I liked that end, and I like how you’ve weaved the flashbacks into the story. Thanks for the post, atlas. :)
I like how you weave the flashbacks in with the storyline. I’m really interested to see how Bette and Tina ended up apart and Tina got married. PPS
excellent story and want more.
Hi atlasundone, That was so meaningful. Here is Bette finally making good on her financial promises yet with a huge hokle in her heart. Looking back to the past shows a much happier time when two gals came together as one and truly loved each our. I do hope there is a brighter future out there for them. One that brings them together again.Most intriguing read.Many thanks from A Fan.
Fantastic update. So sad but am so hooked. Thank you.
this web is getting clearer….Tina tina tina will you ever learn you can run adn hide but you can never get her out of your heart………now you have to pay the price of climbing those fences