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Accidental Love Chapter 11
Bette: Well I don’t know for how much longer. By the way Since I’m in the closet again do I have to pretend that I loved the peep show I got. I’m
Tina: I’m sorry about that I didn’t know what I was supposed to do
Bette: No I’m not talking about that but please don’t remind me, but I just got an unwanted strip show from your boyfriend. Don’t even get me started at the disgusting scene of foreplay I witnessed
Tina: I’m so sorry you had to see that. It must of killed you
Bette: actually I threw up in one of your shoe boxes
Tina: Stop it what am I going to do. How am I going to get you out of here
Bette; I’m not going anywhere, I’m here to watch the show. Would you mind bringing me some popcorn, and maybe a glass of soda?
Tina: Your relentless. I’m just going to have to tell him now and get this over with.
Tina gave Bette a quick kiss on the lips to reassure her that everything would be alright, closed the door and headed outside to avoid another peep show in the bedroom.
Alice: What if I get lost, shouldn’t you guys be the good friends I know you are and accompany so I make it back in one piece
Tina: That actually sounds like a great Idea
Eric: Sorry babe maybe another day we have plans today
Alice: I’m sorry Tina, I tried…but I guess I’ll get going now
Eric: Finallywait did I say that I meant have a safe trip
Tina said goodbye to Alice closed the door took a deep breath and decided to tell Eric everything.
Tina: Please sit down, we have to talk and this isn’t going to be easy
Eric: Ok what’s wrong sweetie? Is everything alright?
Tina looked at his concerned face and realized for the first time how much Eric loved her. She wanted nothing more than to bolt out that door and never look back and face either of them. why was she being such a coward.
Bette had her ear pressed up against the closet door straining to hear the hushed voices. She was a little annoyed Tina didn’t leave the door open to their room. Bette contemplated getting out but realized that may be just a little to risky.
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(38 votes, average: 3.61 out of 5)
I love how you portray Bette, wish we could see some of this funny banter on the show. Now I gotta wait and see if Eric is gonna come back and catch Bette there….sheesh I hope not.
I am speechless!!PLEASE WE NEED MORE POST SOON!!!
Shit! I hope Tina handles this well and doesn’t forget that Bette is the love of her life. nice chapter, nyc please post soon
Talk abot great drama! Loved it. Keep up the good work.
Drama drama drama. Bette needs to show Tina that she made the right decision! Thanks nyc!
HAHA napa lmao you should tell alice to stop by my house when she gets here.
poor tina, what has she done??? LOL
had me laughing then teary eyed. bette needs to let her know its gonna be ok. this was great. dont leave us hanging to long.
Bette hiding in the closet was funny!!!!!!! They have to take it slow
Such a great story. I wish I could think of one liners as quick as Bette and Tina. As I read your story, I would say to myself, “now how would I answer that,” and of course your retort is nothing like mine. Yours is much cooler. Hmmm……
wow . absolutely fabulous . how brave of tina and how funny of bette . i really laughed out loud . you really do have a talent with the pen … can’t wait for the next installment.
this story is coming along quite nicely. post soon please.
Hey nycangel WHOA! Beautiful Awesome Story you still the ONE I Love it Great Story it’s getting Intense right now for Tina and Bette WOW! Please continue post soon Thanks.
To funny Bette in closet.lol
The ending of the chapter was sad and i hope Bette is ready for Tina emmotionaly. Great chapter
Funny and dramatic.Loving it.
oh jeez that was one upset Eric! Bette wil give her a better ring! :]
Damn so funny about Bette in the closet and Alice went to Napa to get some wine so fucking funny and a little crazy about Alice’s answer. Ok now back to Tina and Bette is dramatic, and hope Bette will stay with Tina as long as Tina need. Post soon please, thanks!
I laughed and I cried. And the nobel prize for literature goes to…..lol
Now this was one funny chapter; still laughing as I type. I dont think Eric was too interested at that time in proposing to Tina; just seemed awfully important to just have sex right then and there; so I dont feel bad for him at all.
Great work NYC, hope you post again soon!
K
Great chapter. I hope Tina doesn’t change her mind. Love this.
I hope B is ok with T holding on to the little box. Post soon please…
Holy crap! So much for a little light reading before I head out…LOL! Still, Bette was so funny in the closet! Loved it, thanks!
Wow – very nice chapter. very dramatic ending – hope Eric doesn’t make a u turn and come back to find Bette there.