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Accidental Love Chapter 33
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Alice: Um okay, I didn’t think ***** could be that stressful
Tina: With you anything could be stressful.
The girls finished up their breakfast quietly. Alice was devising new ways to torture Tina with the information she had.
Tina was in *****. She still wasn’t completely sure if Alice knew but she wasn’t that nave. She figured Alice did know but she couldn’t admit that to herself quite yet. She liked to live in denial because facing the truth about what Alice knew was just to embarrassing. She figured she would do her best to ignore any statement along those lines for the rest of the day. She had too much to handle with going to see Eric in a few hours to deal with Alice.
Upon finishing up they headed to the hospital. It was time for Tina to ultimately make her decision. A decision that was sure to impact her life in so many different ways. She was hesitant to go but her time had run out. There was no more running, it was time to face the inevitable.
They arrived at the hospital just as visiting hours had begun. As Tina walked in, every fear that she had about this suddenly surfaced. Her stomach was tied up in a knot, her hands were sweaty and she contemplated running away a few times. She needed Alice to give her reassurance but Alice seemed to be lost in thought about something and wasn’t giving much comfort to Tina.
Tina looked into her purse for the information; her mother had given her about Eric’s room and floor. They approached the receptionist’s desk signed in and got their visitors passes.
With each second that passed, Tina felt her stomach clench tighter and tighter. She couldn’t shake the nervousness off of her. She was nowhere prepared on what to say, and she wasn’t sure what to expect.
She was hesitant to go on the elevator. Alice finally sensed what was up took Tina’s hand and dragged her to the elevator doors. She pushed the button and as they waited for the elevator to come down Alice confronted her friend.
Alice: Why the nervousness
Tina rolled her eyes at Alice
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angel, you best be hiding. this is so wrong. god, have some backbone. i think i really understand this kind of situation. really, i do. i would never back down, ever again. am so sick of drama on this board sometimes. post soon, and have a great day at school.
leave it to Eric to play on Tina’s emotions and fears to get what he wants. I can see how he is trying to convince her that Bette is all wrong for her and to avoid any pain she should marry him and live in a loveless marriage only becasue it is safe. btw love your story nyc. waiting for the next post. ttyl
Eric is a pig but Tina have guilt too she is a coward..and she is afraid to follow her heart and get hurt but she will never know if she dosent try..ho pe she put her foot down and rid of Eric..great chappy post soon
What the fuck….I think Alice is needed in room 324 to kick Tina’s ass!!!
K
Well shit. That’s not good. NOt liking Eric at the moment lol. I hope Tina comes to her senses soon and stays there.
Are you kidding me right???
OMG don´t do this ok… Don´t make Tina thinks Erik is right… please!!! She’ll be so much more happy with Bette… Don’t break my heart…
Post soon ok…
WTF!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Tina, don’t f*cking let him or your family pressure you into living your life to please them! If they can’t love you for you and accept you as you are, F*CK ‘EM! Tell Eric a big fat “NO” and go home to Bette!!! You already know that you won’t be happy with hiom anyway.
Agggghhhhhhh! I love the writing. This chapter hits home for me. So, I am a tad bit p*ssed off with just the THOUGHT of Tina accepting his proposal to please her family and him.
Angel, you have me steaming right now. LOL! I am experiencing a range of emotions with this story. If that is your intentions, you have succeeded quite well. Keep up the great writing! Continue please.
Ok, I don’t think I’ve ever commented but I mean, WTF? Tina can’t make a choice and stick with it? Jeeze man! I mean, I’m all for Bette and Tina but you can’t keep being indecisive when it comes to other people’s feelings. Stringing Bette or Eric along while she tries to find her own way is unfair. I say, let her be and then have her make a decision, then she’ll be sure that it’s what she wants and not what she’s been persuaded to do. Like she said, either way she’s gonna loose…love is a risk.
Oh No!!!!!! Please give Tina some backbone so that she can say NO to Eric. She is so easy and easily intimated. Eric should be ashamed of himself using her emotions against her. Please let her look him straight in the eye and tell him No, not just no but
He-l NO!!!!!!!!!! She needs to tell him that she loves Bette period. Enjoying your story.
WHA!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! NO WAY U HAVE 2 FIX THIS IT JUST AIN’T RIGHT!!!!! I THINK ALOT OF PEOPLE R GONNA BE LOOKING 4 U SO U BEST HIDE AND HIDE REALLY GOOD!!! Eric is soooo playing Tina, doesn’t she have a mind of her own, Y DIDN’T SHE SAY I HAVE 2 THINK ABOUT THIS AND TALK 2 BETTE!!!!! THIS JUST AIN’T RIGHT…..FIX IT …….NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Ok this story is making me sick to my stomach, literally. Hey, it’s a Bette and Tina story, so you might think that I expect them to be together but I don’t. Please for the love of God either grow Tina a backbone or have her stay away both from Eric and Bette until she figures out what she wants. This is sickening, someone is seriously going to get hurt and that’s not nice, cause it can be avoided. She doesnt have to choose one of them to be happy but she does have to find out who she really is so that she can find peace….This story is just to close to home…
Ok that was harsh.. The story is great you know that but wow how do I put this. I dont know, maybe it’s just to fucking close to home for me..So I can’t see pass Tina’s actions to just bask in the beauty of your story. But seriously this will sow nothing but pain and heartbreak. But hey this is fanfic and we know how that goes…….Eric’s part is really well written it’s very representative of what many people dealing with homosexual feelings are confronted with by friends and loved ones. It really saddens me….
So Angel, are you still in ny? Did I tell you I am from brooklyn? I still have connections you know. I’m just saying…hehe. j/k sweetie. but seriously please give T a damn clue. How does she not see that Eric is playing he right now bec he is being selfish? pls fix this soon.
Tina: Would you stop with that article? No one wants to read about sex
Alice muttered under her breath “Yeah they just want to talk about it on the phone”
This was an A+ reply…..Alice is a hot mess!
Tina: What did you say?
Alice smiled her cheeriest smile
Alice: I should of let you come alone
OMG! From this point on, I will read this story from the floor cause thats were I seem to be everytime I fall out laughing!!
Tina: What kind of person am I?
Alice: I don’t know a horny one who wants to get this over with and back to your girlfriend.
Tina: I need you to be serious
Tina…wake the hell up…Alice was being serious; you’re just the one in denial.
Alice mingling had me thinking the same as Tina….again, Alice is just too much.
Now that I am at the end of this chapter….Angel, have you lost your fucking mind? WTF?!? I understand the Tina is a bit confused; but here she is letting Eric wear her down as though she doesnt have a mind of her own. Why is it that she needs this man to tell her what is best for her?
Puhleze, for the love of all that is holy……give Tina a fucking backbome!!!!!!!!! This whimpy Tina leaves a pitiful taste in my mouth. If she cant at least have a backbone, let Alice enter that room; I bet that will put a stop to the bullshit that Eric is feeding Tina right now.
Damn…you FF writers must collectively get together and think of ways to drive us readers out of our minds. Poor Trolle is carting around a heart monitor and their are others sucking up oxygen. Damn….is this what it feels like to be on life support?
Angel….we expect you to correct this travesty!!! -_-
Stepping down….
angel, this version of Tina doesn’t deserve to have Bette’s attention at this point. Way too wishy washy. If she truly reacted to Bette as the story says, gods, there would be no question – no male could compare. I am looking forward to see what happens next! Wonderful writing!
Ouch! WHOA! my Tibets hurts Hey nyc what did you do OMG! I can’t take this to read my feelings it’s hurts WHOA! LOL! Hey it’s really great written nyc I Love it NOT More Drama I can’t take it anymore Please Hey I’m just kidding but I feel to Tina she have Noooo! Choice OMG! Thanks for posted Please continue post soon.
Why would anyone try to talk someone into marrying them? One heck of a way to start a marriage – with huge regrets.
O.K. !!! If she leaves that room thinking she has no choice that will be Soowowo wrong. Don’t do this. Her choice is clear but not easy. Erics right about some things but only assuming the worst about others.I knew where this was going and had to stop to fix a drink. I’m on my second martini(vodka,very dirty).Only You can save this scene. Don’t let her leave the room until she understands life is a gamble. There is no sure thing. There will be plenty of drama in her new life with Bete to fill lots of new chapters. Don’t worry. You don’t need this. I think an epiphany is in order here. She needs to realize she has a mind of her on. I’m sorry this hit close to home for me,and is only my opinion.
P.S.
you know that Alice must be right outside the door. No way she Would stay away from so much drama
Looking forward to my next read.
sucks… tinas in a dilly of a pickle and I understand totally of the situation… every decision she makes from now on will impact her deeply… my my poor tina. I love drama and I can handle just able anything as long as b&t end up together.
This story is too damn stressful. Ups and downs. Eric just played the shit outta Tina. He used the fact that she cared, she said she DID love him, not DOES.
Die Eric, dieeeeeeeeeeeeee, you homophobe!
‘Soapyduck’, ‘momo’, ‘slipperynipple”satchmo’ and so many, many more…
Is anyone else on here enjoying the usernames as much as I am?
It makes me want to logout and create a new identity for myself, one with a snappy new name.
Techmo? (thanks, Koo. I love you, man!)
Eric is a little manipulating fuck! Please NYC don’t do this to us…
ohhhhhhhh i am so not happy with you. i like your run and hide trick when i was talking to you. I swear the next time you sign on we are going to having a little chat missy. talk to you later
Oh fuck noooo, Tina this is wrong you don’t love Eric anymore, you love Bette and want to be with her for ever. Now let see Tina need to tell Eric that she don’t love him and don’t want to see him again “goodbye Eric”, that was Tina need to said to Eric. Ok anyway please post soon, thanks!
I’m back and caught up with the story. : D
You know there’s a pattern with your story. 2 Happy chapters and then one devastating cahpter….2 happy chapters and one devestating chapters…at least that’s what it seems like. But it’s highly entertaining with all the highs and lows….I feel like I’m hiking or something.
this is a great story…keep it going…the situation is understandable…Tina is putting a lot on the line just for one person but she needs to learn how to stand on her own 2 feet…plus this is unfair to Bette flipping back and forth….where is Alice when you need her?
I told you I wouldn’t hate you so I’m sticking by that, but just know that I live only like 25 minutes away and I will find you if Tina doesn’t break everything off with Eric! She needs to be with Bette. She just feels so bad and guilty because of the condition Eric is in, but that bastard is playing it to his advantage and he’s warping her mind. What she should really do is hit him where it hurts, pull out the IV, and everything else to cause him great pain and then walk out, get on a plane, and get back in the arms of the woman she is destined to be with. Ok that was harsh but hey I’m still on my brutal honesty trip I guess lol ttyl
damn…no no no say it aint so..eric just cant compete in the end tinas heart is gonna b with bette
Eric is being selfish and Tina is swallowing the shit he is feeding her. She needs to make up her damn mind and stick to it. Please send Bette over their to clean up this mess. nyc your driving me crazy, fix it, lol.
luckily im reading this at 2:30 in the morning i dont want to get into nemore trouble for yelling at the computer!! I HATE ERIC!!! alice should’ve gone in with tina then mayb this wouldnt’ve happened, eric is to munipulative and tina is to weak she has to stand up to him and tell him no and b4 she makes ne decisions she NEEDS to talk to bette!!! ur torturing me with this story!! Ughh stupid cliffhangers. on an even more depressing note i got my schedule for skool today(ewww) and i still cant believe i said that skoolm was important. PLEASE POST SOON!!!!!!!!!!!!!
NO f—ing way. Hello, Tina, dudes playing you. Give me a break. Too much drama from Eric,what a wuss. Lets get Tina back on track here please. Forget about what might happen, what someone else thinks is right, you gotta go with your heart, lifes too short to spend most of it miserable.
arh noooo c’mon on, don’t do this to us, ya know we arn’t interested in Eric and Tina, only Bette and Tine!
oh, boy, I saw this.
YOU BETTER STRAIGHTEN EVERYTHING OUT! NOW!!
AAAAAARRGH!!!Angel, you’re killing me!Eric is such a moron..who has to convince someone to marry them?? I really feel bad for Tina, I do..but if she breaks Bette’s heart again,I may just have to find her backbone and beat her over the head with it! Keep it coming Angel, you’ve got me hooked..
You F/F writer has a secret code. You tease one chapter and i’ll do the cliff hanging 10 or 12 of you have gotten together and are trying to kill your readers.. Dont let Eric bull shit Tina and send her on a guilt trip. Give her some backbone. Thanks