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    Accommodations: Chapter 4

    Chapter 4

    The Next Morning

     The sun shines through the front window burning down on Shane’s sleeping eyes. She stirs and yawns. She stretches her arms out and feels a weight on her chest. She looks down to see Carmen, who is now opening her eyes too from the movement. “Morning,” Carmen says smiling. Shane looks at her a little confused.

     “Good morning,” they hear from behind them.

     “H- hey Jen,” Shane says nervously.

     “I’m gunna head to the planet…” she says walking out the door.

     “We’ll be right there!” Shane calls after her. “Shit…” she moves out from underneath Carmen and stands.

     “What is it? What’s wrong?”

     “Nothing,” Shane responds running her hand through her hair. “We should get going.” She walks down the hall to her bedroom.

    Carmen closes her eyes and rubs her head. She puts her face down into her pillow and shakes her head.

     The Planet

     “Ok well what about Leia?” Alice asks.

     “Leia who?” Dana questions in return.

     “Princess Leia, you know off Star Wars,” Alice explains. “With the hair and everything. Do you think she would win against you in a tennis match? I mean she’s pretty kick ass if you ask me.”

     “Why? Because you think she’s hot?” Dana asks.

     “No! Not because I think she’s hot!” Alice retorts.

     “But you admit you think she’s hot?” Helena adds.

     “Shut up,” Alice says looking at Helena irritated. “You have to admit it though, she would be a killer in the sack. I can’t believe you don’t know who she is. You do right Helena?”

    Helena just shrugs. “It’s not exactly common knowledge, Alice. Besides, I’ve seen so many movies they all just blend together.”

    “You own a movie studio and you don’t even know Princess Leia. What is this world coming to?” Alice sighs and hits her head on the table. She looks up at Dana. “You never answered my question.

    “I don’t know, Alice,” Dana answers. “I don’t even know who she is. I’ve watched maybe one Star Wars in my life.”

     “Hey, Jenny, over here!” Helena calls when Jenny walks in, ignoring Dana and Alice’s banter. “Where are Shane and Carmen? I thought you would all come together?”

     Alice stops mid-sentence when she hears Jenny came alone. “Well, you can’t expect – ”

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    Comments

    1. Woo hoo! I can’t wait to for Carmen’s big debut at The Planet. I’m sure everyone will love her. And I loved game night and Dana guessing “unborn baby” (at least Helena did a good job at the drawing. Try playing Pictionary when your partner draws mascots for cities. When I see a bear I think “bear” not “Chicago,” damn him!) That whole scene was excellent and really caught that familial feeling and atmosphere perfectly. Great update.

    2. Oh, by the way, the whole game night thing I was referring to was from chapter three (of course), because I just read the last three chapters. Sorry I didn’t mention that before. Chapter four was still great. I love how you portray Alice and Dana’s dynamic flawlessly. And *of course* I love Carmen and Shane’s dynamic. (big Sharmen whore, over here)

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