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Action Speak Louder than Words chpt.8(from Is Love Enough)
Previously…
Alice, Dana and Shane all leave the houseBette walks over to the door and locks itBette goes back to the bedroom and calls TinaBette is wondering why Tina hasnt called herBette hopes that Tina is okBette is calling TinaTinas phone is ringing and ringing and ringingBette is beginning to get nervousTina is pregnant and Bettes first thought was that Tina was hurtBette rushes to the closet and throws on a pair of blue jeans and a white topBette puts on a pair of sneakersBette then grabs her car keys and leaves the houseHer heart is pumpingBette doesnt know what to doBette gets in the car and drives over to TinasThe whole time there Bette calls Tina but there is no answerBette continues to call Tina but no answerBette finally reaches Tinas apartmentBette parks the car and gets out running over to Tinas doorBette knocks.No answerBette knocks againNo answerBette knocks againThe door swings openBette is out of breathBette falls to her kneesTINA!!!….Bette passes out
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At Tina’s House
Tina falls to her knees…Tina is calling Bette…No response…Tina is calling Bette again…No response…Bettes chest is rising up and down…Bette is breathing…Bette is sweating heavy…Tina is trying to drag Bette into the house…It is hard because of Tina being pregnant…Tina makes another attempt…Impossible…Tina begins to panic…Bette’s eyes are rolled back in her head…Tina knows that Bette passed out…Tina goes into the house and gets a bucket…Tina fills the bucket up with water…Cold water…freezing water…Tina then proceeds outside to Bette…Tina takes one look at Bette before she throws the water…Tina knows how much Bette adores her clothes…This was a matter of saving a loved one…Her wife…Tina’s baby’s other mother…Tina throws the water on Bette…Bette starts coughingTina lowers herself to Bette…Bette opens her eyes
Tina: (eyes filling with tears)…Bette…Baby…Are you ok?
Bette: (coughing)…Tina…(coughing)…What happened?…(coughing)…I tried…(Bette is cut off by Tina)
Tina: Shhh Bette don’t talk… (Putting her index finger over her lips)…When I ask you a question just nod your head for yes…And side to side for no
Bette nods her head
Tina: Baby can you move?…Like can you get up?
Bette :( Bette nods her head)
Tina: Can you get up all by yourself?
Bette :( Bette shakes her head from side to side)
Tina: Bette do you need help getting up?
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(70 votes, average: 4.00 out of 5)
HOT! Whew…that was……uh…..very….good. (gulp) Please finish what they started.
wow that was pretty hot
OK i know i put that bucket or water somewhere around here…. ok that was HOT please feel free to continue…lol soon
Yowza…it’s getting hot in there! But is Bette okay? Why did she pass out?
That was hot, Feels like the heat is on in the house. Why did Bette faint.
Just caught up on your las two chapters and I must agree with the others. WOW!!!
*GULP* Damn that was HOT!.. I think it melted all the snow falling here in MICH lol… yeah but Bette ok? well now she is lol… great job!
HOT DAMN! THAT WAS AWESOME! cant wait till the next chapter. plz dont wait too long. this story is great.
WOW!!! Blushing in front of my computer now!!! Need to get something very cold….WOW!!!!
Okay, I need the bucket of cold water. OMG, don’t leave us hanging for too long!!!
You are such a tease. God this i HOT. Glad Bette is ok and why did she pass out – you didn´t answer that question. The wake up call for Bette was great – must remember that trick. A bucket of COLD water. Great story. Post soon
Double *GULP!*…I need a moment to catch my breath…Holy-moly! How H-O-T was that?!!I too was wondering if Bette’s fainting had to do with panic or exhaustion?…or something of a more serious nature…she does seem to be A-OK now, huh? Thank you
HOT DAMN!! That was so HOT!! ::fansherself:: somebody please turn up the heat in herre!!
Damn that was hot and very sexy. Post soon.
I would never wash that towel if i was Tina, shit that was hot im scared to read on