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After the storm.. the rainbow ch 15
Previously
Later in the afternoon
Tina was already home looking into Kevin card when she heard Bette car pulling over, and put the card back on her purse
Bette: hi baby
Tina: hi honey, how was your day?
John: hi mommy i’m back, bushyyyyyy
Tina: don’t scream baby
Bette: (kissing Tina) is she sleeping?
Tina: yeah I just fed her
Bette: great
Tina: oh Bette I spoke to
Bette: yeah? That’s a great idea, baby I will take a shower and bath John too
Tina: ok dinner is almost ready
Bette: thanks, I missed you today (kissing Tina)
Tina: missed you too
Bette went to the bedroom and Tina picked up
Kevin: hello
Tina: ah.. hi Kevin is Tina
After the storm.. the rainbow ch 15
A few days later..
Bette: good morning my son lets go pick up some breakfast and come back to wake up your mommy
John: (still asleep) I want pancakes
Bette: ok lets go
Bette went to the planet to buy breakfast with John and Eve
At the Planet
Kit: hey baby sis is everything set already
Bette: hi (hugging Kit) and thanks Kit
Kit: and how are my 2 adorable nieces? (Hugging John and kissing Eve’s forehead)
John: today is mommy’s birthday
Kit: yeah did you buy something nice for her?
John: (smiling) yeah she will luv my present
Bette: (laughing) im sure she will, now let’s take breakfast and go home
When they got home Tina was already up and opened the door for them
Tina: (smiling) I thought you had kidnapped my children
Bette: nope, but I will kidnap their mother later for sure (placing a wet
passionate kiss on Tina’s lips) happy birthday my love I love you
Tina: thanks babe I love you too
John: look mommy (giving to Tina a single rose) happy birthday mommy
Tina: oh baby thanks I love it
Bette: and this is for you too from me and Eve (giving to Tina the others
roses)
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(80 votes, average: 4.09 out of 5)
DAMN PANDORA, DAMN. THAT IS ONE HELL OF A B-DAY. AWESOME JUST AWESOME! GOD BLESS LONG TABLE CLOTHS AND SKILLED LOVERS AND THEIR SKILLFUL HANDS.LOL. please post soon. PEACE.
well, this was indeed a great b-day for both of them…thank goodness for friends who can babysit any time
okay — james blunt — could you get any cornier ??? – but oddly i liked itamazing card to TK — just perfectvery concerned about that phone call === i just love you so much pan — for someone who claimed not to be a writer you are doing well at being onePS — Can you deal with the wonky font ??love ally x
Excellent. Loving your story. Looking forward to more.
I loved your poem and yes, “You’re Beautiful” is a wonderful song. What a romantic evening.
Oh my, I want a birthday like that too… lol. Great chapter. What happened with Tina’s phonecall to Kevin?? Well well Please post soon, really soon
Gotta love that song… hehe… ooohh… I’m concerned about the phone calls too… one to Kevin and another from a mysterious lady?? What? Is it Kevin’s wife??
I agree with zabo, who is the mystery lady calling Tina all of a sudden? I think that Helena may be behind it. Great job keep the chappies comming :o)
Hey I don’t normally comment,….great story!!!!!!! I have one question though…y did Tina call Kevin….what’s she up to?????
my birthday is february and that is what I’m asking for….damn that was good pan
Nice birthday!
Hey baby, great as always… you are right that’s the best of all and more like you… funny and hot as the others but with a special touch on the romance… btw you can send a card like that on my birthday… thanks
hum bette porter is also a poet,tina is so lucky and its her birthday .
BRAVO!!!!!!That was a very sweet and loving birthday…Very romantic and special…Everything was perfect…the diiner…the card…everything…I wish my birthday were likt that…but thank god for fantasies and web sites like this…I loved being reminded of what true love is…Oh and one more thing…I love the under the table think…it was HOT…I never thought of that…keep it up…and one last thing before I go?…what’s good with that phone call the Alice answered…I smell trouble…is there something I should be worried about or is my lesbian intelligence wrong here?…Keep wtitng I’ll be reading…Bye sweetie…
God..what a B-day! LOL. It was funny, loving, romantic, and HOT! Loved the gifts, dinner, card, “dessert,” and the dance. Those special moments of private celebrations are very special especially when shared with a loved one. Only one question…who was that mystery caller? Hmmmm… Pan…always a pleasure…thanks for the update. Happy holidays.
This chapter is wonderful. Damn the dinner is so hot, dance is romantic and song is beautiful. Ok let see what’s next, thanks!
What a great birthday – I loved the card. Oh and just so you know pandora….I trust you LOL. Merry christmas.
the card was perfect! just perfect!..but the song?!…merry christmas=)