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Air Supply…Chapter 4
Dinner was somewhat far off into the evening. But nights of passion must end…and the workday, once again, begins.
It was late morning as Nurse Betty came to the ICU desk and started checking on things as she began her shift. She issued some directions to a few juniour nurses and checked the charts to make sure all was in order. The duty nurse gave her a report of the last shift’s events and patients, and she sat down, expecting a rather usual shift. She looked across and saw the young woman, who was still hooked up to the many medical appliances. ‘Beautiful young lady,’ she thought to herself. ‘Poor dear, I hope they can mend her.’ Nurse Betty’s thoughts are interrupted as she sees the staff resident enter at her usual fresh and brisk pace. She admired this one. She was a beautiful woman, a brilliant one, a compassionate one, and so very kind.
The doctor was seeing the young woman for the first time. Madeleine referred the case to her team and she was the head of it, so she wanted to get a first look before she had to endure an introduction via the usual rounds. She looked at the woman and examined the readings on the machines. She gently stroked the patient’s hair and then walked over to the nurse’s station.
“Good morning Nurse Betty.”
“Good morning Doctor.”
“How’s my new patient?”
“Uneventful evening, doctor.”
“Very good. I don’t see her chart.”
“Right here doctor. Nurse Smith just administered a dose and was recording the vitals.” She hands it to her.
“Thank you ma’am.” Nurse Betty smiles. The doctor examines the chart and gives it back to her. “Thanks. I’ll see you in a few minutes. Rounds are in a bit and we’re starting with that young woman today.”
“Very good, doctor.” The doctor leaves. About ten minutes or so pass when a few young doctors enter the room. Bette’s new love, Dr. Amertadi, is among them. They head to the young woman, and two stand on one side as three stand on the other. They observe the patient and chat as they await the senior staff physician to commence the rounds. A couple of minutes later, the senior doctor walks in and heads to where her young residents await.
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Loving how your mystery is unfolding… still a little confused, but definitely along for the ride! Thanks for the post. Been missing your other story.
Ok well I least know who the characters are. Now I will just follow the mystery and see where you take us. Still not sure if B&T share a daughter, or if that was a different relationshiip. Also wondering about the importance of the female patient and her role in this mystery. Just keep posting to get us closer to the answers.
Well, Dr. Kennard seems to make our Dr. Porter a bit flustered, doesn’t she? Can’t wait to see how the story unfolds.
A bit confusing, mysterious and thoroughly engaging. PPS.
To clarify my comment before,I just would not have minded if Tina was not in the story. You always make your made-up characters interesting that it makes me not mind having the acutal characters there. Anyway post soon!
Bravo TM, another provicative chapter. One of the things I love about your stories is that they are even better when one can read all the chapters together in a like marathon session. They are just so engrossing that it’s fun to get lost in ’em. This one might be the best so far. Can’t wait for more, however, I’m catching a plane in a couple of hours so guess it’ll have to wait.
Oh yeah…P.S. Yes, STILL seething. LMAO
I was wishing that Dr. Kennard was the one that maked Dr. Porter’s world rock and not some other woman. Besides one look from Dr. Kennard would cause me to be a little wild. Well, one look from Dr. Porter would also cause me to be a little wild. How about if both Dr. Kennard and Dr. Porter would be a little wild together.
Damn, and here I thought the patient was Tina.
So the junior has Bette all hot and bothered and the senior has Bette bashful. Is Tina Angelica’s mother? Is Jenny the nutcase?
Very happy to see Tina enter the pictue, and 2 post in less than 2 days…excellent.
OK you are keeping us all guessing. Keep it comming we are all enjoying this one.
Hey Merl! Excellent chapter. What a mystery you have presented us…so many questions as to who is really who. Just when I think I figured it out, I’m not quite sure again. That’s the sign of a great writer keeping everyone on their toes. *wink* I LOVED this line, it cracked me up: “if vaginas indeed had monologues, this one was in the course of an oration” Damn girl! LMAOOOOOOOO. Thanks for posting another chappy so soon.
Wow, love this! Quite a mystery huh? So now we know who Tina is, who could be the patient… PPS
Hey Merlin, i just caught up.WOW i thought i knew where this was going, but i have no idea. Keep writing so you can revele some answers. PLEASE don’t keep me waiting to long, cause as you know i’ve had a huge month and now it’s time for me to do some ff reading – so write please.Hopefully i see a post from you soon or i’ll start bugging you.Show us some magic merlin!