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All I Need (chapter 6)
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After completely undressing Alice, Kerry helped the blonde step into the warm water. The doctor bent down and pressed her lips against Alice’s forehead before walking out of the room.
Alice’s body devoured the warmth seeping from the hot water that surrounded her. The blonde’s skin tingled as the clear liquid rolled down her shoulders, causing her senses to awaken from their coma like state. The cool breeze of reality evaporated the false warmth the bath had given her; closing her eyes her numbness was washed away. Alice lifted her hand from beneath the water. Her palm hitting the surface first, she curled her fingers into a fist hoping to capture the heat she craved, but failing.
Her sobs were silent at first, but as time passed Alice felt the ruff, painful howling that escaped her throat. The blonde brought her knees to her chest and wrapped her arms around them as she rocked back and forth.
Kerry was sitting at the kitchen table staring at the black refrigerator in front of her when she heard Alice’s muffled cries. The brunette stood up and quickly made her way to the bathroom. The sight she saw left her motionless. Alice, the most loving woman she had ever known, was curled into a little ball sobbing into her bathwater. Without a second thought Kerry rushed to the blonde and stepped into the tub, fully clothed. She gently pushed the blonde forward, so she could position herself behind Alice, and wrap her arms around her.
“It’s ok, baby,” Kerry repeatedly whispered into Alice’s ear.
Alice’s cries softened as she felt Kerry’s strong arms holding her, and once the doctor started talking Alice allowed herself to sink into her words. The comfort that Kerry brought was more than she had expected and soon the only noise in the bathroom was the water splashing against the sides of the tub.
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Dana parked her car outside of Kerry’s house. Her hands were tightly wrapped around the steering wheel as she contemplated opening the vehicles door and walking up the front path to the doctor’s home.
Her mind was flooded with images of Alice’s tears, and the desperation that coated the blonde’s words. Letting Alice walk out of her home was one of the hardest things Dana had ever done, and now she regretted not taking the writer in her arms, and forcing Alice to see how wonderful she really was.
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Great!.. it was really good to hear Alices thoughts and insecurities, and why she feels this way. Kerry seems a good person who will take care of Alice, but shes gonna have some competition off Dana [ Woohoo forceful Dana ] I like it!!.. go fight for your woman dammit lol. Love this story, keep it up. Thanks.
This is really good. I am also shocked to say that I really love the Kerry character. I of course what Alice with Dana, but Kerry is such a selfless character that you can’t help secretly rooting for her…and then you remember that it will always be Danish. LOL. Great job. keep up the good work. Maybe let Alice have even a bit of the faith in herself that Kerry has, and we will have a reunited Danish in no time!
Like Dana, I am terrified because I like Kerry so much. If only Alice could truly fall for her, but I agree with the other poster – danish is inevitable. I can’t see Dana and Alice being together any time soon because Alice has so much healing to do. She has to deal with herself before she can deal with her past and possible future with Dana.
Yep, I’m definately sticking with this story. It’s not that easy to get over an addiction, lol. If only Alice would start to cheer up a little, but I guess breakups can do that to a person. Just hoping that Dana will come to the rescue soon, even though this will be a long journey. You’re doing great, and I know that you’ll continue to:)Keep it up!
damn..i feel so bad for alice, it’s all so much for her. i know dana loves her and i really hope it works out for them. kerry is such a good person to be there for alice, but in the end there can only be danish..
i love this story. poor sweet alice. she needs to learn how wonderful she is.
Thank you for actually trying to get into Alice’s head instead of writing their break up (and Alice’s reaction tothat) off and truning it into one big ‘comedy’. Again, you captured Alice’s feelings very well. I’m sure Kerry can be of a great help to Alice to built up her self-esteem. In some way I do feel sorry for Kerry, but (as hars as it may sound) Kerry knows what she has gotten herself into and that Alice will never stop loving Dana.