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All Shook Up, Ch. 5
Alice stared at her in dazed silence, before stammering. “You want me to, to marry you?”
Eyes on the floor and a heat rising to her face, Dana said, “I’m sorry. This was a stupid idea. I should have known better. God, what is wrong with me? Fairbanks, you are a stupid ***** – ”
“Yes,” Alice interrupted her.
“This is the dumbest thing you’ve everwait, did you just say yes?” Dana said numbly. Her heart was pounding so hard she thought it would burst out of her chest. Did she just say yes?
Smiling coyly, Alice nodded her hand. “I’d be honored to marry you. I want to spend the rest of my life with you, growing old together and watching our children grow up.” A tear slid down her cheek.
She said yes! Dana’s heart did a somersault, and her vision blurred as tears of happiness came to her eyes. “I, um, don’t exactly have a ring or anything with me,” she muttered awkwardly.
Alice laughed, pulling her hand free from Dana’s to wipe at her tears. “As long as it’s not Tonya’s old ring.”
“Wait, I have an idea,” Dana announced, turning to rummage around in the cabinet below the sink. “Ah ha!” Something gripped in her hand; she turned back toward Alice, gripping the blonde’s hand once more. “This will make it official,” she said, slipping a hot pink band-aid securely around the base of Alice’s ring finger.
Alice laughed and held her hand up, admiring it. “It’s beautiful.”
Smiling, Dana managed to climb onto the bed beside Alice, who scooted over to make room. She wrapped her arms protectively around Alice, who snuggled into her shoulder. I’m going to make sure she never has to feel pain again, Dana swore to herself, feeling her heavy eyelids falling shut.
Lying in the crowded hospital bed beside Dana, Alice yawned and happily ran her fingertips across the band-aid on her finger. This is a new beginning.
Content in each other’s arms, they fell asleep.
Carmen sat in a chair in Shane’s hospital room, watching the young woman sleep. She looked so innocent as she slept. Carmen limped toward the bedside, painfully aware of her three broken toes, and silently stood over Shane, just staring at her, memorizing each line of her face and each contour of her lips. Carmen wanted nothing more than to burn this image into her brain so she could keep the memory forever.
Shane stirred and opened one eye. “You’re staring,” she accused, her voice scratchy.
“No, I’m not,” Carmen denied.
“I could feel your eyes on me,” Shane insisted, opening both eyes and squinting.
Her cheeks burning, Carmen admitted, “I was. You just looked so beautiful.”
“Not more than you,” Shane said, working to sit up. Carmen gently helped her up. “So,” Shane said, gesturing at her arm, which was in a sling, “what’s the damage?”
“Your shoulder’s dislocated. They’ve got it fixed, though,” Carmen told her, brushing some hair out of Shane’s eyes. “You’ll be stuck with the sling for awhile.”
Shane wiggled the fingers that peeked out of the sling. “We’ll work around it,” she said, raising her eyebrows suggestively.
Carmen nearly collapsed into a fit of giggles. “Trust you to think about *****, even at a time like this!”
Shane laughed along with her, before her expression turned serious. “I’m worried about everybody else, though.”
“I know. I am, too,” Carmen said with a frown. “I just hope they all got as lucky as we did. God, Shane, I don’t know what to say to you right now. You saved my life. I owe you everything.”
“Carmen, you saved me a long time ago. I was just returning the favor,” Shane replied.
“Saved you from what?” Carmen asked curiously.
“From myself,” Shane answered with a grin. “Seriously, baby, there was no way I was going to let you fall. I told you: if you fall, I fall. I couldn’t stand to go on if I’d walked away from this and you didn’t. Carmenthe way you make me feel – I can’t even begin to describe it to you. I wish I could bottle that feeling and keep it with me for when I’m having a bad day. I love you.”
Chills ran down Carmen’s spine at Shane’s words. “No one has ever said anything so beautiful to me. I love you, too.” Bending, she hugged Shane, careful not to jar the hairdresser’s arm.
“No matter what happens, we’re going to get through this together,” Shane swore, pulling Carmen closer to her.
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(36 votes, average: 3.78 out of 5)
They all need a lot of good news today,So far we have lost Lara, Hope that Tina and jenny is okay thanks
Carmen and Shane were so cute!
Aww..I loved it…the Danish moment was so sweet and sincere. Sharmen was cute…overall…happy face!!!
Awww poor Betty, I love them! It’s sad to see them go! Your Danish made me happy! Thanks!
Fox, you’re on a roll and I’m loving every bit of it. LMAO at Betty, well you know how most people feel about them. Awww Danish is uber cute, warm feelings all around.
nice update.
shane and carmen are really cute.
Awwwww… Shane&Carmen are soo cute:)
Damn this story is good, Dana and Alice is funny and cute, Shane and Carmen is cute and sweet. Ok let see what’s next!