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All that Glitters, is not Gold…Chapter 2
“Gracies,” Tina says as she hands him the money and steps out of the cab.
Standing on a tall white box is a statue, but not just any statue. No, this was a living breathing work of art, covered in white stage makeup from head to foot, wearing a white sarong and a crown of leaves…looking almost like a Greek god. Tina smiled with joy at the memory of another time, another little girl. She watched as the young girl’s mother fished around in her wallet, finding some loose change.
The girl took the money gleefully, and walked closer, before dropping the few coins in into the colorfully decorated tin by the statue’s side, causing it to come to life, his sudden movement sending the girl back into her mother’s arms.
Tina moved forward as if to calm her young fears, until she realized that the young girl wasn’t frightened, but was giggling joyfully at the impromptu show she was watching.
Tina also turned her attention to the Greek God before her, his artistic display drawing a small crowd to gasp at him in awe. After a few minutes, his movements became still again, only his sarong fluttering gently in the breeze. His perfect pose daring the next person to part with their money.
After taking one last look at the delighted child and her mother, Tina walked over to one of the many small cafes that dotted the street. She loved this area more than any other in Barcelona. After all, it was undoubtedly the most cosmopolitan street in the city, with the greatest diversity of people. She loved to watch the passers by, shoppers, foreign tourists, and street performers. She would lose herself for hours watching them all enjoy the vibrancy of this tree lined paradise.
As she sat sipping her perfectly brewed espresso, Tina’s eyes wandered a little further down the street, remembering when her grandmother brought her here as a child…still feeling that same sense of wonder and awe, as she had all those years ago. Feeling comfort for the first time that day, Tina smiled, and began to lose herself in her childhood memories. She glanced down the street and saw the statue of Christopher Columbus, the 60 metre high column towering high over the skyline…the great explorer standing proudly at the top, his arm fully extended, as he pointed out toward the new world.
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(34 votes, average: 3.71 out of 5)
oh gawd. family, honor and traditions. this should be so good. but where the hell is bette going. tina is losing her soul by anothers desires. hmmmm. very interesting. can see the pictures in my head girls. so wonderful at describing and leaving imprints im my head. thanks.
wow what great visuals.I love this story. i was just in Austria and saw swveral living statues. They were just as u described. i hope tina realizes that bette is what she wants and grandma will understand. post soon.
Wow what a difficult situation Tina’s in. I can’t wait to see how you guys are going to lay this out. Thanks!
Wow, just catching up, as usual. Great start, ladies! Although you did have me, in the first chapter. As soon as I saw Helena, I was already backing away from my computer. I mean, I love you two, but I can’t do Tina/Helena or Bette/Candace. I just can’t, sorry. But, luckily, my faith in your writings told me to endure, at least to the end of the chapter. And, just a glimpse of her name, I was able to compose myself, and settle into this incredible ride, which I know I’m in for. Thanks for sacrificing to do this. Believe me you’re more appreciated then you’ll ever know. Post soon, please.
Poor Tina…what will she do? Oh..and I will wait as long as I have to for the next chapter
I liked this chapter, although I have to admit that I am confused a bit. I thought Tina was flying back to Palm Springs in the last chapter to end things with Helena. Now she’s back in Spain and Bette is leaving?
Familial traditions and deathbed promises…all the makings of angst for Tina. I hope when all is said and done she will find a way to fulfill her grandmother’s promise with compromise.
Well done you two….blood is thicker than water you know…excellent.
What beauty….what style…what discription. I look forward to the rest. You both are great writers and sea you know how i feel about you. Kepp it up…you are wonderful writers……
I think this is a wonderful beginning to what can only be an amazing story. I must also say that I have been reading fanfic for almost a year and this is the first story that has compelled me to leave a comment. Again amazing start ladies and keep up the good work.
As I said to you in NY I am liking this story Sea.It was nice meeting you. I amazed to hear that you had started reading my story.I hope that you can find the time to ready it and let me know what you think.
Well this is taking off to a very different start! I like it Keep up the good work you two! Also We have A part Spanish Tina in this fic and a Bette who isn’t noticeably biracial in another. wowzers! Cant wait to see how this will go!
WOW!!! Ladies great story!! Looking forward to more chapters SOON!!!!! Like maybe tomorrow… hint, hint … what do you think? Any chance?
THANK YOU!!!!!!!!!
I just saw your comment.It is an honor that you are reading it.I hope you continue to do so.
I love anything you both write. Thanks for this story. Tina has to live for herself not for a promise made when she 14. I’m sure her grandmother only wanted Tina to be happy and thought she’d find that happiness in Spain (Bette)
Tina a Pujol i Pujol? No doubt she comes from a line of prouds catalans. Which year the present time part of the story is suppose to be happening? The reference to the old spanish currency confuses me. Anyway, have you thought about they getting married in Barcelona? That would be more than funny, that would be legal.
diffitcult situation and decision. which to choose? sometimes options aren’t much… post soon! i’ll stick to this one for sure!
ah exploring this side of life. family, honor, tradition, dignity and heritage. not many is written in this way. interesting. looking forward to more.
Honor is going to break her heart and bette’s for awhile!!!!!!!!!
Wish there could have been more chapters…:(